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I'm starting a Round Robin story, people:D

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Stinging tears built up in Clara's eyes as she

said one last goodbye to this beloved place

she'd called home for so long. She thought of

all the days she had spent making secretive

hiding places among the tall pines that occupied

the forest, and weaving delecate necklaces of

wildflower, the way her older sister, Evelyn had

taught her.

But as she watched the dark, horse-driven wagon

inching closer on her familiar dirt road, she knew it

was truly over. She must leave this lovely, untouched

place to go work as a servent girl, cleaning and cooking

for people too lazy to do it themselves. All the girls of

her type had to, just as her sister had...Fresh tears

stung her eyes as she thought of her sister, Evelyn. How

she would probably never see her again. "Come on now,

Clara dear", Ms. Loraine, the only mother figure she had,

called to her in a sorrowful voice. Clara sighed as she thought

of what fun her new "family" , so they call it, would have,

making jokes about her pointed ears and other various elf

features of hers. She exchanged goodbyes with Ms. Loraine

and numbly boarded the wagon, dreading her long trip to her

new home.

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submitted by Megan M., age 13, Ohio
(May 7, 2009 - 5:58 pm)

Ahhh!!!  I met a girl named Evelyn not too long ago!!!  AHHH!!! :)

submitted by BellaTrix ✌ ♡
(May 7, 2009 - 10:09 pm)

:D:D:D

submitted by Megan M., age 13, Ohio
(May 8, 2009 - 5:01 pm)

(('Kay then...))

The carriage was nice, as far as carriages go, and though Clara should have been excited--walking was the only way she'd ever gotten anywhere, save for a few sigular horse rides--she was feeling too sickened to feel anything but downright awful.

Though Clara had spent her life in an orphanage--Aquinas House for Homeless Girls--she was not a tragic heroine forced to work from dawn 'til dusk by an evil matron. No, Mrs. Loraine was wonderful. Almost every other girl she met there was equally pleasant--most of all her elder sister Evelyn.

But, like so many others before her, when Evelyn turned fourteen, she'd been sent away to find work as a servant, as was the custom of orphanages. Claras heart had held a dreadful sorrow ever since that day three years ago, and now it was her turn.

Though my departure is less painful, she mused, for I leave no one behind. But she knew this wasn't true. Sure, she had no other biological relatives at the orhanage, but Mrs. Loraine was like a mother to her, and she'd had so many wonderful friends--Salias, Luica, Joyanna, Mirissi, Miriama, and Latricia, just to name a handful.

Yes, there was little doubt that as the carriage turned the busy corner, Clara Jaeli LeDreviar was leaving behind almost everything she'd eve known or loved.

submitted by Mary W., age 11.25, NJ
(May 8, 2009 - 6:43 pm)

The carriage ride lasted an hour or two. Shorter

a ride than many girls had to bear, and for that,

at least, Clara was grateful. After a while, the

carriage pulled up to a huge, stone house with

large columns that supported the roof.

It was a very elegant place, with roses skirting

all around the massive front porch, but as a tall,

broad man came to escort her to the antiqued

mansion, Clara could only think of the long days

ahead.

"This way," the man muttered as he led her to

the door. Nervous butterflies churned Clara's

stomach rapidly. Soon enough, another man, this

one short and plump, was there to greet her

alongside a tall, slender woman, both looking far

to sophisticated for Clara's taste. " Your maid has

arrived," the escort announced to the man and

woman. "This is Mister and Mistress Bernard,"

the escort gestured to them "They are for whom

you serve here."

"Aww, welcome miss..." Mr. Bernard looked at me

with question in his eyes. "My name is Clara, Sir,"

Clara mumbled and did a slight curtsy, the way she'd

been taught. "Aww, miss Clara, right this way, " Mr.

Bernard led Clara down a long hall and up a set of

stairs to a small, cream colored room with a tiny quilted

bed in the corner. " This shall be your room."

submitted by Megan M., age 13, Ohio
(May 10, 2009 - 1:11 pm)

Clara looked sadly about her room. It was somewhat more luxurious than the room back in the orphanage. The funding was never so plentiful as to lend itself to luxuries like a looking glass or a washstand. And she had her new room all to herself. Yet her sadness pierced her false optimism like an icy needle as her heart longed for the simple blue room she had shared with Joyanna, and before that, Evelyn. Tears glistened afresh on her cheeks as memories flooded her mind- Ms. Loraine tucking them in at night, talking with Mirissi and Salias, picnicking in the meadows, and Evelyn. Evelyn, singing to her softly  when she was scared. Evelyn,  consoling her when she was teased about her pointed ears. Evelyn, weaving her a crown of wildflowers and calling her a princess. Evelyn, whispering in her ear tales of the elves. She hardened her heart and stoppered the tears raining down her face, fixing her face into a brave smile. She washed her face in the washbasin and dried the tears. There was a knock on her door and another maid came in. "Hello, I'm Janali. I was wondering if you'd like me to show you the ropes before you start tomorrow."

submitted by Ella
(May 11, 2009 - 2:45 pm)

Clara tried not to judge Janali, but it was hard, cnsidering how low she was feeling. The maid had nut-brown skin and knotted braids, ratty and unattractive. Her eyes were a murky green-brown- calling them hazel would be a stretch.

"Oh. Thank you," said Clara, a bit stiffly. "That would be... very nice."

The other girl beamed. "Right this way, then." The next half hour was spent in a monotony of explanations, questions, and more explanations. Clara was shown around the manor, introduced to a few other servants, and asigned tasks. hen Janila led her back through the winding corridors to her own room. Before closing the door as she left, Janali peered up and down the hallways, as though afraid of being overheard, and then stuck her head back in. "And also, miss, some parting words- don't go inter the room o'er the en' o' the hallway less yer tol'- tha's where the mister's and mis'ress' son lives."

"A son?" Clara asked, her pointed ears perking up. "They have a son?"

"Aye, don't seem the type, eh?" Janali said with a smile. "Don' know his name, but they say 'e's cursed or somin."

Before Clara could ask any more questions, Janali gave a friendly wave and swept off down the hall, shutting the bedroom door behind her, shutting Clara in with no company but her own thoughts and loneliness.

submitted by Mary W., age 11.35, NJ
(May 11, 2009 - 4:08 pm)

Clara sat on the small bed for a long time, thinking about everything Janali had told her. There was one thing in particular that Clara couldn't get over:

That the mister and mistress had a son. They just didn't seem like the type to be parents, and what had Janali meant by cursed?

  A soft tap on the door interrupted Clara's thoughts. "Bed time," it was Janali again "You're goin' to be gettin' up bright and early tomorrow. Might as well be rested."

"Oh, okay, thank you," Clara replied, still dazed in thought.

"Anytime, miss," said Janali, and then skidded on down the hall.

Clara put on her long, white night gown and brushed her auburn hair before settling into bed. Not a peep was made down the endless halls, and Clara wasn't used to the quietness. At the orphanage, the girls would always be talking to each other before going to sleep. You would hear talking, giggling,

and occasionally Ms. Loraine, telling you not to talk too loudly. Clara's heart ached for that, and she quietly cryed herself to sleep.

In the morning, Clara woke to the sound of whistling. It was still very early, for only a dim, silvery blue light came in through the window.

"Time to wake up," said someone on the other side of the door. Clara didn't recognize this voice, for it was far too soft to be Janali. "C'mon and I'll show you where to get cleaned up."

Clara hurried out of bed and put on some clean clothes. The girl on the other side of the door was tall and trim, with golden blond hair that she wore in a twisted bun. "Hello," said the girl with a curtsy "My name's Patricia, it's my duty to wake up the maids and help with the breakfast." She was very cheerful.

"Hello, I'm Clara," Clara said, still groggy.

Patricia took Clara down to a small marble bathroom. "This is where the maids get tidied up," explained Patricia "When you get ready, you'll be tending to Mistress Bernard's gardens today. It's something she would normally do, but she and Mister Bernard are going to be out today, and she heard that you are good at that kind of thing." That was very true. She and the other girls used to help Ms. Loraine with her gardens every day, and Clara thought of it as a hobby. "Oh, and let me get you some proper clothes," Patricia said, scurrying down the hall and then back in a flash, with a traditional maid's uniform. "We all have to wear them."

submitted by Megan M., age 13, Ohio
(May 12, 2009 - 8:03 pm)

((I'm still a little paranoid about gardens after reading Rappacinni's Daughter by Nathaniel Hawthorne, but I'll get over it ;) ))

Clara immediately disliked the garden. Everything was too... stuffy and perfect and rigid and uniform. There were orderly rows of vegetables, immaculate lines of roses, flawless and towering sunflowers, and other such ultra-perfect vegetation. It was nothing like the orohanage's comforting, overgrown, almost magical maze of dense and purfumed flowers side-by-side the scrumptious vegetables.

Ah, well, Clara thought, one garden can't be awfully different from another.

But it was. The roses' thorns were sharper, the weeds harder to pull, the insects more creepy, the sun more blazing, the pollen more allergen-producing. It's just like my life, thought Clara morbidly. One wouldn't think this change would be too awful, but everything's so much harder and colder here.

submitted by Mary W., age 11.35, NJ
(May 13, 2009 - 2:54 pm)

After a long while, one of the maids yelled to Clara that it was time to come  in. "Hurry in, we need you to help get dinner ready for the Bernards!" Clara was glad to leave this too-perfect garden. She walked inside and helped get the table set for Mister and Mistress Bernard. They were expected home any minute now.

"You know, Leighton Bernard is very sick," whispered one of the maids to the other.

"Who's that?" Clara asked curiously.

"The Bernards' son. They say he has some terrible disease or somethin'. They're afraid he's gonna die," replied the maid.

Just then, Mister and Mistress Bernard came storming in. "How could they do this?!" said Mistress Bernard furiously. "Do they think we're stupid?"

"Calm down, Darlene," Mister Bernard replied.

"Ugh, they cannot do this to us. We are far more powerful than them!" Mistress Bernard said, and then nearly ran up the marble staircase, pounded down a long hall, and slammed a large door behind her.

"Oh no, that's not good," said one of the maids nervously. Then she mumbled something under her breath that Clara couldn't understand.

submitted by Megan M., age 13, Ohio
(May 15, 2009 - 5:40 pm)

"What was that?" Clara asked the maids around her.

They merely stared at her. "She's new," Janali explained.

"Oh," said a girl with long golden curls tumbling tumbling down her back. "Zat iz all right, zen. You zee-" she added with a flourish, turning to face Clara, "-ze Bernards' zon, zat iz Leighton, he iz veddy eel. Zey say-" she lowered her voice to a dramatic whisper, "-zat 'e waz curzed when 'e was veddy young."

"That's nonsense," said Clara boldly, and all the others shushed her.

"You say somin like that allowed, 'Lara, and somon 'ears you, specially the missus," Janali warned, "you could lose yer job 'ike that." She snapped her fingers.

"Ze mizus iz veddy protecteeve ov 'er zon," the blond-haired girl offered. "Only ze bezt, moz trusteed servants are eever sent into heez room."

((Sorry, all the maids I speak as end up with dialects, and that makes it hard to write intelligent conversation! Aargh!))

submitted by Mary W., age 11.35, NJ
(May 16, 2009 - 9:46 am)

It was soon nightfall and there were terrible moans coming from Leighton's room, along with the sound of feet scattering down the hall.

"Is the doctor here yet?" demanded the mistress in an impatiant tone, "There has to be something to cure him. Isn't it their job to cure the sick?"

"Yes dear, but you can't be angry with them. They're doing all they can." replied Mister Bernard calmly.

"I can be angry with whomever I please," Mistress Bernard snapped back.

"The doctor has arrived!" yelled the butler.

There was nothing else to be heard for a long while but Leighton's continuous moaning. Finally, the sound of soft whispers echoed down the hall.

"What he has is very rare, and we have no medicine for it," explained the doctor "But there is a... rather strange cure that is a possible option."

"Which is?" Mistress Bernard snapped.

The doctor sighed "It's... well, it's a kind of magic, you may call it, that is used to cure such a disease. One known amongst the elfin people, my people, but it can be risky."

"Hmph," snorted the mistress critically.

Leighton moaned again, this time with more pain than moments before.

"Do whatever you need," suggested Mister Bernard, "Anything that might help him."

 

(( Sorry, I was in a hurry. Hope that's all right.))

submitted by Megan M., age 13, Ohio
(May 20, 2009 - 6:30 pm)

Move it back up, thread...

submitted by Megan M., age 13, Ohio
(May 22, 2009 - 12:39 pm)