The Hunted Solo

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The Hunted Solo

The Hunted Solo Write
It's Halloween night, and you had heard about a haunted mansion in the next neighboorhood. You make your way over to the house of haunts and head up to the door to see a small group of teens about your age already there. After a few moments, someone from the group opens the door and walks in. After a few nervous looks, the rest of the group follows, stepping cautiously. You just enter when the heavy door closes behind you with a bang. Several people cry out in fright. You hurry to try to open the door, a few people in the group helping, but it won't budge. You and the other teens exchange worried and scared looks as you hear the sounds of creeking floorboards and slaming doors. You all come to the same conclusion: the only way to get out of the mansion is to keep moving. But somone already knows you're here. Can you escape?
Rules:
-One character each. For now the limit of entries is seven.
-Age range for characters must be between thirteen and seventeen.
-No powers or real weapons. They must be fake to be part of your costume.
-This is a solo write, so please don't try to write your own parts of the story.
-Have Fun! If you have any problems with how your character is portrayed, just let me know.
Here is how the charcater sheets should look like. I know, it's a lot. Sorry. 
NAME:
AGE:
APPEARANCE(please include costume):
PERSONALITY: 
STRENGTHS:
WEAKNESSES:
CRUSH(If any and if you'd like to have one.)
FRIEND(If any):
ENEMY(If any):
OTHER:
Post any question that you might have. 
submitted by The Hunter
(November 23, 2016 - 9:46 pm)

The next post (Part Two) should be up this next week. Keep your wits about you and thanks again for joining the Hunt! 

submitted by @Everyone-The Hunter
(December 3, 2016 - 3:53 pm)

Awsome! Keep it up!

submitted by Claaws
(December 5, 2016 - 10:15 pm)

Thanks and will do. Next part should be out in a few days.

submitted by The Hunter
(December 6, 2016 - 11:18 am)

I will try to post the second part this weekend. I would do it tomorrow, but I have to work (after school, of course.)

submitted by The Hunter
(December 7, 2016 - 6:40 pm)

Ok, Part Two will FINALLY be posted later tonight. Again, sorry for the wait.

submitted by The Hunter
(December 10, 2016 - 5:38 pm)

Ok, I finally got around to writing it. Here you go:


Part Two

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Maya looked
nervously around the misty room, absently adjusting her pirate hat.

“Why does it
have to be so dark in here? It’s creepy,” she thought, rubbing her upper arms.

“Nice
costume,” a tall, blonde-haired girl said with a grin, joining Maya by the side
wall. Maya noticed that the girl had nearly the same costume as herself. 
 

“Uh, thanks,
yours is cool too,” Maya said.

“So, what’s
your name? I’m Astrai, but you can call me Star.”

“I’m Maya.
So, do you like haunted houses?”

“I don’t
mind them. They don’t scare me.” Star winked. “I came here on a dare. You?”

Maya was
about to reply, but was cut off by a robotic voice coming through the
loudspeaker saying, “Enter, and begin the tour.”

A door in
the back of the room opened nearly immediately after, causing some people to
jump in surprise. 
 

The group of
seven teens went past the door. Maya held back for a moment, gathering her
courage.
 

“Come on,
Maya, you can do this,” she whispered to herself.

“Hey, Maya,
you coming? It’ll be fun!” Star called to her. Maya smiled and said, “Yea, ok.
Let’s go.” They followed the group into a dark hallway. As soon as they had
cleared the threshold, the door closed with a bang. Maya shuddered inside, the
darkness slowly creeping her out. A few of the teens gasped and cried out as
candles lit, light flickering in the passageway, casting shadows on the wall. 

“What now?”
Maya whispered.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 

 

submitted by The Hunter
(December 10, 2016 - 8:57 pm)

Thank you so much, and I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

I also like how my charrie is braver than my personal self :)

 

submitted by Starbringer
(December 11, 2016 - 2:59 pm)

Glad to hear it! 

 

Sorry if i missed anything in anyone's character or anything, I'm working on it. Once again, let me know if you have any problem with the portrayal of your character. 

submitted by The Hunter
(December 11, 2016 - 5:18 pm)
submitted by Top
(December 10, 2016 - 10:04 pm)
submitted by PART TWO!!
(December 11, 2016 - 8:14 am)

OOOH! I like it! keep writing!

submitted by Nebula, age 1 Million, the Milky Way
(December 11, 2016 - 3:47 pm)

The next part (part three) will be posted this week hopefully. If you have any questions, let me know.

submitted by The Hunter
(December 12, 2016 - 5:22 pm)

This is great, keep going!

submitted by Top!
(December 13, 2016 - 9:37 am)
submitted by P-E-A-K (top)
(December 13, 2016 - 9:14 pm)
submitted by Top
(December 15, 2016 - 5:59 pm)