that is amazing! How do you do it? Do you have any tips, I'm terrible at writing long stories. That is soooooo awesome!

who Brit this back? Thanks!!! I’ll keep writing it if you’d like.. as for tips...I just wrote what came into my head... my advice is to really know your charries befor writing. :) 

I like this! I love the idea, and the description that you used when describing the girl is amazing. I would be interested in reading more of it. :)

I’m the same person as Lia M so this is the name I will be using :). Anyway this is the next part and I added some stuff to my prologue:). Hope you like it

PROLOGUE 

The five summer old girl curled up with two wolf pups her older brother and younger sister she was sleeping and dreaming, meanwhile out side the cave her mother the she wolf known as Nira argued with the Alpha Tigred, "Tigred" she said "she is just a child"

'"she is still human" said Tigred "she is a danger too us all"

" I have raised her for five summers" Nira said "and she has been everything but dangerous."

"that is not to say that she will not become a threat." Tigred said 

"please let me raise her" 

"No"

"Tigred please"

"I said no, I will not endanger my pack, not even for you Nira."

" have you not looked at the child she does not look like a normal human, she has hair as dark as night and eyes like stars, and her face it is as pale as the moon, can you not tell that she is a blessing, to us from the one that we pray to each night, can you not tell that she is a child of the Moon?"

"if the moon will claim her you can raise her if not I will take her to the human village" 

Nira goes into the cave and comes back with little Luna, sound asleep on her back, she lies her down on the soft grass, and Nira says "claim the child if she is yours" 

Nira and Tigred wait for some thing to happen and it does, the moon shone a beautiful ray of light to the onto the sleeping child engulfing the  her, Luna and then rose her into the sky.

Tigred sighs "you may rase her, But you must tell her the truth  when she turns twelve summers old"

"I under stand Tigred" Nira says.

Chapter  ONE 

When Luna ran she was always slower then the rest of the pack, she ran faster on two legs then four, which, was very odd as every other wolf in her pack ran best on four. Even when she ran on two feet she was slower then the rest, though, somehow, today it was different. As she ran today it felt as if even the wind couldn’t run faster, she would be twelve summers old today, she would be sent on her quest by the elder wolf. Her feet barely touched the ground as she ran, kicking up dust. She came closer and closer to the courtyard, were everything important went on, but just as she arrived she stopped dead, she couldn’t make herself move.... “Hello Luna.” A voice said from behind her. She shot around. The Alpa Tigred was standing right behind her. “Where is your Mother, Nira?” 

“She is at our cave, getting Rose ready.” She said bowing her head. Her fifteen summer old brother wolf sprinted to his spot a bit behind but also beside the Alpha for he was the next Alpha in line, being trained bye Tigred.“Hello Luna,” He said to Luna then, turning to Tigred. “Mother Nira is coming.” A small wolf, Luna’s sister wolf Rose came sprinting out of the woods, smiling from ear to ear, behind her emerged Nira. 

“Hello, Nira.” Tigred said, with a slight bow of his head and seriousness In his voice. “You must tell her,” at this Nira grimaced. “Nira, you must. Remember what we agreed to. You must.” 

“Tell me what?” Luna asked.

“Nothing...” Nira said then with a frown from Tigred she grimaced and continued. “you are the human  daughter of our great queen, the Moon.” Luna felt her mouth fall open, she then closed her mouth and opened it again not sure what to say, all her words lost. “I know it is a lot to take in, though it is true.”

The only thing Luna could say was “When do I go to the Elder Wolfs cave to start my quest?” Nira looked at her, surprised. 

“The time has come, you will now go on your quest.” Tigred said, his face not changing at all.  Luna feeling awkward for the first time walking on two feet past the wolf’s of the pack. She wasn’t sure wether to feel ashamed, proud or angry. Why hadn’t Nira told her? She wasn’t sure she wanted to know who she was, she felt more different then ever before. She  felt very confused, who was she? What was her purpose in life? Would she have to leave the pack? Leave her Mother Nira? All these mixed feelings made it hard to feel exited. Though some of her questions would be answered in her quest, the point of a quest was to find out who you are and your role to play in life, and the life of others.  Nira followed her closely in till she reached the cave, no wolf was permitted to enter with the wolf when she entered on her twelve summer. Luna did not turn to speak to Nira before she entered, she was still in shock.  She entered alone, her head held high. She heard Nira’s voice call after her. “good luck!!!”

i will right more later, and if you’d like (or if I feel like it) I could right a little bit on the wolf’s culture.  

Luna walked through the dark, as she was not a wolf she had no night vision. She used her hands to feel the cold rock tunnel, as she walked forward her hands lost the touch of stone against them, she was in a open cave. She could not see anything in front of her or beside her. She reached her hand into the front feeling for something, anything. As she walked with her hand stretched out in front of her she felt warm breath on her hand. She stopped, afraid to move. She saw nothing, and then, the Elder Wolf opened his eyes, she could see them, a cloudy glowing white. And then he spoke, in a clear voice. “Welcome, Luna daughter of two, our great Queen and a she wolf, Nira. Oh, how I remember Nira.” He said. “I gave her her quest you know...”