Please visit both

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Please visit both

Please visit both threads by this name. I'm starting an experiment where I have the same beginning of a round robin, but they can develope in two seperate ways. I changed my location and name for the threads. This one is Enceladus and Thread #2, The other is Pirocks and Thread #1. Please don't post what you've written on the other threads here! Thanks!

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Marc looked up, and saw the blue sky, as usual, cast behind the grand cathedral of Notre Dame. It had just finished being built, and his house was near it. Notre Dame rose up, beautiful, with the bells inside it ringing for the very first ceremony within. He hurried inside, ready to worship. Then, something that definetly should not, no, could not happen, happened...
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Remeber, two different stories, please!!

submitted by Enceladus, Thread #2
(May 20, 2009 - 5:50 am)

back to the Inkwell

Some-one thew a rock at the glass window and it shattered, and a big shard of glass fell right at Marc. Mark felt the pain at the moment of impact and then nothing. Was he dead?

((hopefully not. but he should get a scar and be framed as the person who broke the window. just saying, you don't have to use the ideas if you think they are bad.))

submitted by Adina, age 12, Mostly in fanta
(May 20, 2009 - 9:02 am)

Top *please*

submitted by Enceladus, Here, There, an
(May 23, 2009 - 4:04 pm)

TOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*pretty, pretty, please*

submitted by Adina , age 12, Mostly in fanta
(May 26, 2009 - 11:31 am)