Writing Contest!

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Writing Contest!

Writing Contest!

Kay, so let's have a contest, just to liven things up. Here are the rules:

-There must be at least 3 judges, but no more than 5. I will be one, and whoever asks first will be the others.

-Minimum of 2 pages.

Here is the prompt: The 47th basketball game was a living nightmare. 

If you're one of those people who only write stories that they try to publish, this may not be for them, because the entire story must be online in order for it to be judged. Anyone may make comments, though none to harsh. 

When should it be due? Tell me your ideas, please! 

 

We think this reader-run writing contest is a great idea (we also think the book discussions are a great idea for the Chatterbox). But everybuggy needs to keep a few points in mind so this is something practical for us to do.

  1. The main thing is that you've suggested a minimum of two pages. Unfortunately, that needs to be your maximum instead (say stories up to 500 words). That's longer than the contests in the magazine, but not so long that the admins can't read through them. Extensive writing is not practical for the site since we need to review any writing before posting.
  2. It's important that entries not have graphic violence or inappropriate situations or language. Kids entering your contest should be guided by the tone and content of the regular story contest winners that appear in the magazine and that are posted in the Cricket League section of this site. Long stories slow us down in posting comments because sometimes, buried in the text, we find weird situations and language that we cannot post. Stories that dwell on torture or stalking or situations not found in Cricket magazine will not be posted. Most kids know this, and it seems obvious, but some kids don't always seem to go along, and it slows down the Chatterbox postings. (Remember, Cricket is for kids as young as nine.)
  3. Everybuggy gets to enter the contest only once.
  4. Nobuggy can start another contest until we see how this one works.

Sorry for these limitations, but it cannot be otherwise for now. 

We hope lots of people want to write (or judge) for your contest. Thanks for thinking of it.

--Admin

 

 

 

 

 

submitted by poetonearth13
(June 15, 2009 - 7:13 pm)

Oooh, can I be a judge?! :D

submitted by Paige
(June 17, 2009 - 3:50 pm)

I'd love to join your contest, but... Basketball isn't really my thing. Maybe I'll wait.

submitted by Emily L., age 13, WA
(June 17, 2009 - 4:18 pm)

OHHH FUN OoOoOoOo. That is me ooohing. I'll write, but first we need to get this thread to the top!

submitted by Adina, age 12, Mostly in fanta
(July 6, 2009 - 8:40 pm)

Hey, r u still doing 2 do this???????????????????????????

submitted by Clair, age ~11~, NE
(July 22, 2009 - 4:01 pm)

I would love to participate (or judge), but I have absolutely no interest in basketball whatsoever. In fact, I don't even understand why it exists.

submitted by Ima
(July 23, 2009 - 8:30 am)

Good idea, only... basketball isn't really my thing. If other people were into it, I'd be happy to do it, but since most people aren't, maybe we should change the prompt?

submitted by Lena
(July 23, 2009 - 10:30 am)

My I please be a judge?

submitted by Brynne, age 14, Flying away on
(July 23, 2009 - 11:38 am)

I'll do it. Sounds fun. I mean, I have no clue whatsoever about anything basketball-related (actually, any sport other than fencing= ???), but that'll make it more challenging.

submitted by Mary W., age 11.55, NJ
(July 23, 2009 - 12:10 pm)

yeah i'd love to do it to even though i hate basketball ill try it, are ghosts alowed in it?Smile or id be happy to be a judge too will u give a different subject after this? how about this?

I had the game coming up and I was still hearing and seeing things. How could I consentrate when my dead Grandmother was cheering in the stands. Or while a phantom player is trying to steal a way the ball. How will I do this I asked myself for the hundreth time. I was feeling sorry for myself when my old, dead, dog Muffins walked through the door. I tried to pet her but my hand hand just went through her. It felt like I was sticking my hand in cold water than imeadently getting it dry when I pulled my hand away.

 

 

 

 

idk wat do u think of that? as a start

submitted by KittyKat, age 1, Georgia in the
(July 23, 2009 - 2:26 pm)

Alright! I wrote a story with the prompt. Dunno if this is still going but I'll post it anyway.

Uh, it does involve the undead, but it's not gruesome. It's leaning more toward satire. Hope that's ok. If not the Admin'll delete it so... *shrug* Onwards!

Oh, and I lost the game. While writing this. :(

*******

The 47th basketball game was a living nightmare.

Well, to be honest most of the basketball games that took place in the high-school gym of Carson High were living nightmares.

All right, all of them were.

But the 47th game of the year was a particularly nasty living nightmare.

Ordinarily the janitors- Joey and Zoë, Mick, and Bryant- did a fairly good job of keeping the gym at least somewhat normal. The days before home games were always marked by the four of them dashing around the school armed with silver chains, packets of salt, and iron shavings provided by the shop classes. They would coat doorways with the metal-and-seasoning mixture, lock the chains in place over storage closet doors and the three entries down into the boiler room.

Still, they couldn’t do everything. One or two of the ghouls always found a way into the gym, or a zombie wandered into one of the locker rooms to give the opposing team a scare.

Not that they were filled with school spirit, these unruly undead. Our teams were just too used to them to care.

Anyway. The day before the 47th basketball game, Joey and Zoë and Mick all managed to catch the flu, leaving Bryant to try to undead-proof the place alone.

Needless to say, he couldn’t cover the entire school all by himself.

So, when the buzzer rang to signal the beginning of the game, things didn’t go well.

One of the zombies- a fellow rather fondly known as “Pop” after his liking for Diet Pepsi- decided to sneak into the opposing team’s locker room and relieve their bags of any spare change. Being rather more clever than most of his kind, Pop made a beeline for the concession stand and bought himself the largest Diet Pepsi he could afford.

All of which would have been fine, as our principal made a habit of repaying our various opponents for any thievery or damage to their property done by the undead that roam our halls.

Pop, however, decided that the best possible place to drink his soda was the bench next to the opposing team’s coach and manager.

The players and spectators were so involved in their game that they didn’t notice Pop or the various other denizens of the night that were invading the gym (the undead, for reasons unknown to paranormal science, are absolutely addicted to two things- malls, and basketball games).

Mind you, the zombies, ghouls, ghosts, and skeletons that haunt the halls of Carson High are not vicious in the least. They never intend to cause harm. It’s just that they look so very terrifying- zombies especially.

So. Inevitably the ball flew out of court, and, rather unfortunately, knocked Pop’s head clean off his shoulders. Being undead he wasn’t hurt, and some junior girl took pity on him and reattached his head.

The damage was done, however, and the opposing team, its coach, its manager, and its friends and family finally noticed the undead crowding around the court. Well, our side noticed too, but our side didn’t react by screaming, rioting, and racing for the nearest exit, the coach shouting that he was never ever coming to Carson High ever again.

And to top it all off, we lost the game.

submitted by TNÖ, age 16, Deep Space
(July 23, 2009 - 3:56 pm)

Great, thanks, TNO. You mean "The Game", right? Where if you think about it, you lose?

submitted by Brynne, age 14, Flying away on
(July 23, 2009 - 4:41 pm)

Thanks. You just made me lose again. *glares*

But yes, that game.

submitted by TNÖ, age 16, Deep Space
(July 24, 2009 - 1:46 pm)

I am what my composition and literature teacher calls a "voluminous writer," so I don't think I'll make it. Kudos for your contest, though!

 

-EH

submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(July 23, 2009 - 8:31 pm)