New Round Robin!

Chatterbox: Inkwell

New Round Robin!

New Round Robin!

 

Okay, so this is the beginning of a story I'm writing, and I want to see what Chatterboxers do with it.

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Ellasia stood, eyes closed, as the smoke curled around her. It floated
around her in a mystic pattern, forming sudden images on her skin. She had
power over smoke. She could shield herself, creating invisibility. She could
control someone temporarily, by forcing her smoke into them. She could also use
it to tell possible futures. She could tell what may happen. She could tell
what to do to make something happen. As the smoke curled around her, she opened
her eyes. A dragon stood on a lonely tomb, guarding the body. She stared for
hours, watching things that may be. Suddenly, a boy’s face appeared. He had
dark hair, and light blue eyes. He was staring at her. He grabbed out at her,
making as if to strangle her. Ellasia fell back. She was alone in her room
again. A charred, burnt pile of papers was left. Ellasia knew that at only age
13 she should not be exercising her powers. But the time felt right.

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Don't be afraid to write!

 

submitted by Pirocks/Enceladus
(June 22, 2009 - 4:28 pm)

That was what Sagien had told her. He had been her teacher as long as she could remember, helping her control her magic and exercise it, make it stronger. But as for reading the future, she had learned only the theory, for even with her Faerie blood, he had said, it was limited. Three times, he told her, in a lifetime, was it possible. Two now. But he had also told her not to disregard it if it seemed the right time, as indeed it had. For she had an idea whose tomb the dragon had been guarding. Sagien had died last night.

submitted by Emily L., age 14!!!!!!!!, WA
(June 22, 2009 - 6:20 pm)

The death had come swiftly and unexpectedly. Sagien had been sitting in his chair, in his house, when two women burst in, holding knives to his throat. They dragged him away, threatening him that he should die if he made a noise. No one had actually seen Sagien dead, but it was assumed.

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A muffled scraping could be heard under the floor boards. The women did not pay attention to this. They continued with their plotting. They could be heard saying,

"We'll kidnap him tommorrow."

"We can't just run in and kidnap the southern Emperor! We need to have plans, and spies..."

"I already have some women planted as servants. They'll get him."

"When do we capture his general? He won't be so easy."

"We'll have to think about that."

It was true. Saigen thought. They are planning a takeover of women to all the positions usually occupied by men. For Saigen was not an ordinary magic teacher. He was the Emperors' magician.

submitted by Pirocks/Enceladus
(June 24, 2009 - 10:31 am)

Sorry for the line breaks. I copied it from my Word document.

submitted by Pirocks/Enceladus
(June 23, 2009 - 2:22 pm)

Come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

submitted by Come, people!!!!!!!!
(June 26, 2009 - 2:03 pm)

The emperor was a smelly fat ugly stupid evil mean, and any other bad adjective you can imagine. No one liked him but Sagien remained royal, prodding good idea's into the emporer's head. But now the emporer had gone too far. He had ordered all the magicians dead! Sagien faked his death to help the rebel's take over. The only part he regretted was not bringing his favorite student, Eliase. But the king would not kill her. After all she was his daughter.

 

submitted by Adina , age 12, Mostly in fanta
(July 1, 2009 - 5:51 pm)

WRITE MORE!

submitted by WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!, age Please!!!!
(July 1, 2009 - 7:25 pm)

Felgen stood on the tomb of the lanoora next to her dragon Gunjie. The Dragon could not leave, being that he was attached to the queen since birth and could not leave until he died. At times gunjie wanted to commit suiciede but she promised Lanoora that he would not. And dragons do not break promises. Felgen was the queen's secret son from the affair she had with the palace wizard sagien. She never loved the king any way but had managed to take that too her grave. Felgen had nowhere too go so the dragon took him up and raised him. He was a dragon boy who could look at the past. Gunjie taught him. Now he was gazing at the girl he loved, princess Eliase 2 years ago, the last time he saw her, before their mother died and his father disapeared. He wanted to hug her and tell her everything will be alright but she reached away and disapeared. Felgen fought back his tears. "come on" Said Gungie "let's go home."

 

 

submitted by Adina , age 12, Mostly in fanta
(July 3, 2009 - 1:34 pm)