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I need some

I need some help with a book I'm working on that's sci-fy called Shrila the Humican

It starts where a type of space creatures called zonicans are battling earth with magma balls that are 3999 degrees farenheight while earth is countering the attacks with nuclear bombs. But in 3020 humans know how to reinforce nuclear.

Now, here's where the name comes in, Shrila the humican (She's a humican because she was a human but the zonicans abducted her and turned her part zonican and renamed her Shrila so that they would have knowledge about earth) is telling the captain to move the ship because the nuclear bomb could blow them up but the captain won't listen. When it hits them they are shot all the way to pluto and earth is spinning the opposite direction. Then they go home.

I can't think of what to do next

Could you help me?

submitted by BuksRul, age 11, Colorful Colora
(July 20, 2009 - 1:34 pm)

How come no one's responding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

submitted by BuksRul, age 11, Colorado
(July 22, 2009 - 7:45 am)

probably cause ur at the end. hi um hi um hi um hi um hi wats it like in colorful colorado? Georgia is rainy. oops i mean the flying house is rainy. i cant figure out how to set up an inkwell tab but i dont really need to if i can write somthing here if u dont mind. so on ur story thing,hmmmm so they are on pluto right?hmmm maybe shirly was it could survive or somin on pluto. and cause shes zonican she is the only one who can survive on pluto outside the space ship.

submitted by KittyKat, age 1, In a flying hou
(July 30, 2009 - 12:48 pm)

to the front

submitted by front
(August 5, 2009 - 4:03 pm)

to the front

submitted by front
(August 7, 2009 - 2:43 pm)

I'm sorry, I'm really not that good at sci-fi, so I'd probably be unhelpful. :/

submitted by Mary W., age 11.62, NJ
(August 8, 2009 - 1:48 pm)