A new story

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A new story

A new story idea.......So I was writing in my notebook with my red-inked pen where the ink glistens like blood until it dries, and an idea popped in my head so I quick wrote it down and it glistened beautifully *sigh*. Well that was about a month ago and the idea has gone through a multitude of refining, and I decided to put it on the CB. 

A world of magic and superstition.

One Queendom, Khimer-completely self-sufficient and untrusting of the other  governments on other continents. 

[excerpt from a Khimerian grade 2 history book:

Khimer Government

Four Queens, one from the Human, Bloodkin, Fae, and Mankin. The small matters of each species are taken care of by the respective Queen and her advisors, while other more difficult matters and interspecies problems are collaborated on.

The Queens are elected for life unless serious complaints are brought to light.]

I suppose I should describe the species?

[Humans are, well, humans. They can learn magic but other than that nothing differentiating from the humans of reality.

Fae are fairies, they are born with magic that requires refining for minimum 2 years, and are habitually dirty rotten tricksters.

Bloodkin are vampires. They have their own private sector and wear black-and-red capes or cloaks when outside of that sector. They are also born with magic, but not a lot. T

Mankin are Khimaer (from A River of Royal Blood). So they just have animal parts *shrugs*. Anything from snail antennae to dragon wings. But they aren't treated like Khimaer, everyone is equal here (at least to common knowledge).]

There are others like dragons and unicorns and phoenixes and pegasi and gryffons and alicorns. Mermaid are an uncommon form, a cross between Fae, Mankin, and Bloodkin. 

The Queens have five advisors each.

There's another group, the priests {made up of all aware species} which abstains from politics and sets their lives away for cultivating knowledge, practicing divination, and training people in magic. The Temple has sanctuary.

So, more later. I'm bad at explaining things. 

 

submitted by March|WKBU coll., age 11/12, the computer
(May 9, 2020 - 11:41 am)

It sounds GREAT!! So, what happens next?

submitted by Emekittycon k, age 11, Kitten Kingdom
(May 9, 2020 - 2:11 pm)
submitted by TOP
(May 10, 2020 - 10:40 am)

oh my gosh, yes, this sounds amazing. moooooreeeeee

Who are the main characters?

 

submitted by Evergreen, age who knows?, The Library
(May 10, 2020 - 5:44 pm)

I FOUND IT!!!!!!! *cries happy tears; hugs Agent WinTOP*

Well, next.....Shadowkin and The Hybrid!

Shadowkin are very powerful. So powerful, all the Queens are scared and locked them in a ghetto called 'the Enclave', which walls are made of Systone which is like Kryptonite to Superman. All the Shadowkin wear a collar of Systone which dampens their magic and are forced to do factory work and die young deaths. sad.......... :<

AND THE HYBRID IS EVEN WORSE.

So The Hybrid is a genetic experiment. Shadowkin+Bloodkin+Mankin+Fae hybrid. Lotsa power. The Systone collar the experimenters gave him didn't work.........'Cause all the other DNA was enough for him to escape when he was strong enough. {STUPID IDIOTS} Of course he killed them all and is now across the Mystgate. {a quarter of the planet is obscured by mist which most cannot breach but The Hybrid can}.

And eventually Katarina Armitage, daughter of the Human Queen's First Advisor, good girl gone bad (or is it bad girl gone good?), discovers a rebellion. Things happen and people die and ---------------------------------------------------[spoiler alert]. So yeah..........  

 

submitted by March|WKBU coll.
(May 10, 2020 - 5:59 pm)

Is anyone good at cryptic message-writing? I need some.

submitted by March|WKBU coll.
(May 11, 2020 - 11:46 am)

amaaaaaaaaazing! very awesome story idea :)

im thinking of writing a story aswell... heheheheh

i mean besides my 100+ story projects im working on currently

you dont have 100+ stories

yes i doooo hush Felix 

submitted by HeroesOfOlympus, age eternal, somewhere-everywhere
(May 13, 2020 - 3:45 pm)

Interesting.

submitted by Strawberri
(May 11, 2020 - 3:27 pm)

TOP

*adjusts spectacles* -=THE BALLAD OF FEDEX=-

-=O FEDEX! O GLORIOUS FEDEX!

The arrival of your brown-truck ness sends

My heart a-beatin'=-

WE DO NOT NEED THIS IN THE WORLD! 

submitted by yop, age hop, zop
(May 18, 2020 - 5:11 pm)

Top

submitted by Top, age Top, Top
(July 26, 2020 - 3:32 pm)