OK, i talked

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OK, i talked

OK, i talked to all you people, so now ya'll got to respond to my ideas. I'm doing a short story about the future. In it, the earth is being eaten from the inside out by all the greenhouse gases, and all residents were evacuated to the floating space city Ark. (Noah's Ark, get it?) Anyway, only one person is left on the decaying planet, an army cadet named ___________ (names, please, girl names). She was left behind accidentally because people thought she was already dead. So they are on a dangerous rescue mission. But she has to travel to the landing pad in a short amount of time, when a blizzard of acid snow strikes, and ______________________ (that's as far as I got). Critisicm or ideas, people!

submitted by Sophia P., age 12, Ireland
(November 3, 2008 - 5:15 pm)

back to the Inkwell

Well, I have a suggestion for the Cadet's name- Emzara(Noah's wife) Rakeel (Rake'el was her father's name.)  Emzara Rakeel futurey right?

submitted by Samantha P.
(November 3, 2008 - 6:04 pm)

That sounds good!:) I once wrote a story about Pluto,the Plutons on it had to destroy a monster (or they tried to) and 2 girls saved the day.They made a deal with the monster. Continue on with the good work!!! (your story sounds better than mine):):)

submitted by Bekah (Lee) P., age 11 (almost, North Dakota
(November 4, 2008 - 9:27 am)

Yeah, ok, i now have a name for her, thank you Samantha! As for Bekah, your story sounds good, no really. any idea what should happen after the acid snow blizzard.

submitted by Sophia P., age 12, Ireland
(November 4, 2008 - 3:18 pm)

If you need any more names, any baby-naming book is very helpful for that sort of thing.

submitted by Mai K., age 12, Milwaukee
(November 18, 2008 - 9:11 pm)

Mmyes...I must get one of those!

submitted by Kit Kat/Sophia P.
(November 24, 2008 - 3:23 pm)

I can't tell you the name of the website, but Google "baby names free website".  There is this REALLY good site that I use, where you can search by meaning, gender, origin, syllables, etc.  I use it for every story I write. :):)

submitted by Paige P., age 12, Gorham, Maine
(November 26, 2008 - 2:16 pm)

Well, I would suggest that you change the name of the ship a little. Yes, I get the simile, but that's a little too close. Maybe Aarke or Arca or something.

submitted by Emily L., age 13, WA
(November 30, 2008 - 10:29 pm)