Flash Fiction Thread

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Flash Fiction Thread

Flash Fiction Thread

Hello! I was thinking that this could be sorta like the regular poetry thread, but for flash fiction. I personally really enjoy writing flash fiction; does anyone else? If you do, feel free to post it here!

If you're wondering what flash fiction is, allow me to explain. Ever heard of Ernest Hemingway's famous 6-word story, For sale: baby shoes, never worn? It doesn't have a plot, but it's a story all the same. Well, that's flash fiction in a nutshell. It can also be defined as any story less than 1,000 words. (I'll post another example below.)

Do you come up with individual scenes that you could totally write a story based on, but don't have the patience? Write them down as flash fiction! Do you have ideas for some cool dialouge exchanges, but don't know what the rest of the story would be about? Try flash fiction! It's super fun, so if you haven't tried it, I encourage you to do so, and you can post the results here.

I have an example to show you; it's 175 words, in case you were wondering.

Secrets

Raymond Morrison planted more than flowers. He planted secrets.

     Dozens and dozens of secrets, scattered all through his house and his garden.

     But there was no one to find them.

     If there had been someone, they might have looked at his tulips and discovered his code. If there had been someone to decipher the code and search for the journal, they might have found it, locked away. If there had been someone to read the scribbles confined to the margins, they might have taken down the painting of a vase of marigolds. If there had been someone to read the message painted on the wall, they might have found the secrets.

     Secrets that could save lives, and secrets that could destroy them. Secrets that could heal hearts, and secrets that could break them. Secrets about politics and power, love and liberty, life and death. Secrets everywhere.

     But there was no one to find the code, or the journal, or the message, or the secrets.

     And so the secrets lay forgotten until they crumbled to ash.

Anyway, try it out! I look forward to seeing your awesomesauce writing. :) 

 

submitted by Snazzycakes, Eternalia
(September 22, 2020 - 8:00 pm)

@Spirit, yours was so sweet and so sad. I like that you wrote it sort of choppy, reflecting how someone really would be thinking in that situation. So sad, but some good flash fiction.

@Summer, I like the personalities of the toys and imaginary friend. Hearing them discuss the pandemic so calmly and curiously made it seem a bit more normal. Well done!

@aqua, yours is really good! Your description of the light and the way you wrote it, like you were in dream, was amazing. Good job! 

Keep posting guys! All your writing has been amazing!

Also, my recently adopted CAPTCHA, Roxy Foxy, says hwobt. Are you talking about The Hobbit in your adorable fox-ish voice? You have good taste, Roxy!

submitted by Snazzycakes, Eternalia
(October 6, 2020 - 5:33 pm)

Would you like to hear my story about a girl whose mother knew she had fire powers so she left the baby in a church and now the baby is a teenager and wants to know who her real mother is?

submitted by Kitty Cat, age teen, Gotham City
(October 7, 2020 - 11:10 am)

Yes that sounds awesome! Nice plot idea!

submitted by Snazzycakes, Eternalia
(October 11, 2020 - 1:03 pm)

Thank you! As soon as i'm done i'll post it on here!

submitted by Kitty Cat, age teen, Gotham City
(October 12, 2020 - 11:02 am)

The weather right now reminds me of the sea. The weather right now is sun shining through feather-grey clouds, with touches of colbalt in between. It is the sea on a sunny yet rainy day, waves lapping up against bare feet on sand. It is the feeling of sitting on a balcony under a delicate curtain and the wind blowing your hair back, it is the feeling of reaching out for the scent of salt on the breeze. It is marble, it is ancient Grecian statues, it is refinement. The weather right now reminds me of pillars, water, salt, and so much more.

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Not exacty flash fiction, but I just really wanted to write something a e s t h e t i c rn so :p 

submitted by Rainbow Riot
(October 10, 2020 - 2:53 pm)

Did I do this right? It's 315 words. 

 

She cooked. Each morning, she awoke and went to the kitchen at five AM. She ate a small meal; a small portion from the food made last night. Then the oven is turned on and the stove flickers to life. Some days she made omelets. Some days she made loaves of bread. Some days she made something else entirely. Cooking was her life. 

At seven o’clock, the doors of the restaurant opened and customers poured into the little shop. She never saw them; she stayed tucked away in her small kitchen while various waiters and waitresses carried out the food. The people always ate it, no matter what she made. They loved it. They never knew about her. 

She cooked. Each day, she set aside a small portion from breakfast and ate it at eleven o’clock. Then she went back to work. The oven would be turned back on, the stove would flicker to life. Some days she would make soup. Some days she would make knishes. Some days she would make something else entirely. 

At one PM, lunch would begin to be served. Once, she had had dreams of grandeur: a famous restaurant, renowned worldwide. She never knew how loved her little shop was, how many people had come to rely on and take comfort in it. 

She cooked. Each evening, she set aside a small portion of lunch and ate it at five o’clock. Then she went back to work. The oven would be turned on, the stove would flicker to life. Some days she would make cholent. Some days she would make salads. Some days she would make something else entirely. 

At six o’clock, dinner would begin to be served. She no longer hoped, she no longer dreamed, she no longer lived, never knew all the lives she touched, tucked away in her small kitchen. Instead, she cooked. She cooked.

She cooked.

submitted by Zahava S., age 13, the stars
(October 12, 2020 - 1:44 pm)

Wow, this is really good! The theme is so... unique, in a good way!

submitted by Azalea, age 13, Earth
(October 13, 2020 - 7:54 am)

Tooooooooo theeeeeeeeeeeeeee tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!

submitted by SnazzyTOP, topper-nalia
(October 17, 2020 - 8:13 am)

Clutching the umbrella handle, she held me tight.  Raindrops fell onto the umbrella.  They slipped off at the edges, and quickly landed on the ground.  In the cold night, I could feel her warm breath against me.   She whispered into my ear, telling me to stay.  Embracing me tighter, she wrapped me into a warm hug. I closed my eyes.  I heard the rain making a tune in the night, as it fell from the grey heavens and onto the ground.  She was trembling, and the umbrella shook slightly, but I stayed dry.  Opening my eyes, I smile.  Whispering a soft goodbye to her, I leave her embrace and walk into the cold rain. 

submitted by aqua, the person
(October 19, 2020 - 4:20 pm)

Guys, please don't let this die! Your writing has been amazing this whole time. You have really inspired me. Keep it up!

submitted by Snazzycakes, Eternalia
(November 4, 2020 - 5:42 pm)