Concluding Debate!

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Concluding Debate!

Concluding Debate!

If you read my earlier post about that thing with Anidora then you know what I'm talking about- hopefully. If not, it's where I begin a story and offer two ending chocies  and you post your view. And just so you know, this isn't a story I'll be trying to write anytime soon because of its noted weirdness.

 
So there's this young lifeguard Danny, and  he meets this girl named Mercury and her adopted brother Sebascean, (saBassCHin) and long story short, he finds out that they are actually merpeople in search of a lost artifact to save their queen, Calypso, daughter of Triton who is son of Poseideon. And so they find it and the two return to the sea. Another, less important adventure happens, and a year later Mercury returns for the thirs and final time and must make a choice because she is half-mermaid and half-human. Should she stay on land with Danny and her father or should she return to her mother and live in the world she feels she belongs in? Oh, right, I forgot, Danny has a crush on her but she doesn't know that, and he is trying to prevent her from going, even though she feels she must do otherwise.

Not very good, I suppose... but which shall it be?

submitted by Katie, age 12, outside looking
(December 20, 2009 - 2:37 pm)

If I were her, I'd live in the water. Who cares if Danny has a crush on her! That doesn't mean she has to like him back! And I'd miss my father, of course, but I'd want adventure in my life! I'd want to live in a world where I actually belong!

submitted by Ima
(December 21, 2009 - 3:42 pm)

If she doesn't know that Danny has a crush on her I think that maybe she should go back into the sea and live a happy life.  OR she could try to go back, and then when she finally decides Danny could take her and capture her and not allow her to go back and then she hates him and then she somehow makes it back home to the sea.  Sorry if that doesn't make much sense...

submitted by Meadow
(February 1, 2010 - 1:47 pm)