Writing Group! 

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Writing Group! 

Writing Group! 

Basically, anyone can join, and just exchange writing for critiques and such. Inspire ideas for characters and world building, maybe. Poetry is also fine.

submitted by Moon Wolf , age lunaryears, A Celestial Sky
(December 3, 2023 - 3:54 pm)

*gasppp* YES. PLEASE. Sign me up RIGHT NOW I NEED TO JOIN ACKK!!! Thanks for creating this Moon Wolf!! :)

 

umm so basically I have a dilemma rn and need advice. My story is all about balance. You want something, you pay the price, right? It's a really core part. But... I just realized. I won't get into detail unless you really want/need me too cuz it's slightly maybe hard to explain, but that means I basically have to kill all my main characters, which, it's kinda epic-fantasy-y so there're a LOT and I love them all and don't want them to die (though I'm fine if some if them do, but see second point) and besides, I'm planning this for a series-kinda-thingy (again, also kinda hard to explain, since I also don't have it fully fleshed out yet) so I also CAN'T have them - or at least not all of them - die, and also I don't want to end everything on a downer cuz that's really disappointing... but I can't have them NOT die cuz that defeats the whole purpose of the story and if they don't then the world ceases to exist and... I'm not making much sense, am I? Sorry

submitted by CelineNeedHelpPls?, age :/, Story Rambling
(December 3, 2023 - 6:18 pm)
Hmm, okay. Have you considered making the series a series not because it follows the same characters each book but because it's set in the same universe and the plot is attempting to get to one goal? I've heard of series that are like that - one book will focus on a cast of characters, and the next few will focus on a different one. 
You could also consider killing the characters but having them reborn as new people. I guess that's essentially the same idea as my other one.
submitted by Periwinkle, age Pi, Somewhere in the stars
(December 3, 2023 - 7:45 pm)

that sounds like a really interesting story premise! i bet it creates a lot of interesting dynamics~

but yeah, i do see how that can be a problem. i'm not sure how much advice i can offer without knowing all the details of your story, but the first thing that came to mind is that there are other ways you can 'pay the price' with something other than your life. i'm not sure what your world's magic system is, but since it's a fantasy genre, you can definitely play around with the sort of things characters can give up in order to maintain balance. some ideas that come to mind:

-their memories/emotions/identity

-their home/important possessions

-their relationship to other characters

-their magical abilities

-their rank/title/position

-the goals they've been reaching for the entire book

there are so many posibilities for ways characters can pay the price without death. not only does this keep the character alive in the story, but it can also create new situtations to explore the character's personality and move the plot forward.

you can also introduce new characters who can continue the story after your initial main characters die, although i can see some issues with that (it could overcomplicate things, you might not get to flesh out each of your characters to the extent that you'd like to, etc).

i hoped this was sort of helpful! good luck with your story! it sounds really cool :D 

submitted by pangolin, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(December 3, 2023 - 7:53 pm)

An idea could be to kill off the main characters and have the side characters live on, or like @Peri said, to do another cast of characters. Though more details would be helpful.

submitted by Moon Wolf , age lunaryears, A Celestial Sky
(December 3, 2023 - 8:36 pm)

I agree, an anthology would probably work, but it sounds like it has an overarching plot. since attatchment to the main character(s) is basically the most important thing in a story (and i'm not kidding, even tension goes down if you don't care about the person who it's happening to) you'd probably not want to have a new character per book. or you could build importance for the next main character during the book while the other character dies, if they don't all strictly have to die. 

also since you said there's a lot of characters: how few can you get away with? if you have fewer characters, you have more time to spend on each one, and readers will be able to remember them all XD i know nobody likes getting rid of characters, but you can always combine them, and it makes for a better story in the end the vast majority of the time. 

For instance, if you have a character who opens something and another who tries to get it into a box: why can't they be the same? although it's rarely that simple in practice. 

more details would be really helpful though. 

also, in general, you want to be able to compromise and change things/not get too attached to things being one specific way if it might make a worse story. so find the parts of the story you're most interested in (because then you'll have the best time writing it and it won't, like, veer off course because you want to write about something that isn't important to the plot as much) and center the rest of it around that.

you'll notice that a lot of this is about condensing things and making them simpler, which is generally a very good idea. if the point of a story is to be enjoyable, it's generally better to not have 20 seperate plot threads and 10 main characters and even more side characters, all of which you have to keep track of. this doesn't mean you can't have complexity; it just means you should be purposeful with it. the less unnecessarily complex other things are, the more you can focus on the central complexity as well. and, like, some complex things may be more interesting than others; readers are more likely to enjoy having a multifaceted war drama with many sides than unnecessary characters, some of whom they won't be attatched to and others who they'll like and not get enough of.  

submitted by Blackfooted Bobcat
(December 3, 2023 - 9:20 pm)

Thank you so so so so much to everyone who commented ackk you all raise such good points I don't have enough time to respond to everyone right now I don't think but just thank you this all really helped so much ackkk!!! :DDD

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age Feiyanwnvr, Thank youuu!! :DD
(December 4, 2023 - 8:05 pm)

you could go with a reincarnation type thing: these characters are reborn as the same sort of person, or the same sort of hero, and maybe they have some of their previous selves memories? just so they're a little less dead, since you're so attached to them.

submitted by Lord Entropy
(December 5, 2023 - 11:06 pm)

You made it! Thanks, Moon Wolf. I look forward to see everyones... stuff, I guess it would be.

submitted by Hawkstar, age Stars , My thoughts in Korea
(December 3, 2023 - 6:21 pm)
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submitted by toppify
(December 3, 2023 - 7:21 pm)

thank you so much for making this, Moon Wolf!! this is such a cool idea :D

i just finished writing my novel for November (it's 100K words of pure chaos and midnight ramblings, but i love it (to give you the gist of it, it's called Glow (referencing sky glow, which is important to the story), it's loosely inspired by Celtic mythology, it's set in Queens, NYC, and the big final battle takes place in an H-Mart)) (whew that was a lot of parentheses), so i'm beginning to plot out my next project, and i'm really excited about it.  

it's kind of superheros, but more fantasy-ish, i guess? and it's an urban/contemporary fantasy (most of my novels tend to be). it's going to be told from the alternating points of view of two characters (Finn, he/him, although I might change his name, and Elio, he/they?), and there's also a bunch of other characters and i've barely written anything with them but i LOVE THEM. i almost feel bad about the horrible stuff i'm going to make them all go through in my novel :D

i've only started planning it out a few days ago, but i'm already so excited about it. i might share some exerpts from my novel (...once i polish them up a bit, they're rather messy right now) and maybe some more info about my current project and some exerpts once i start writing it. 

all right, i'm done rambling XD i'm really excited to see everyone else's work! you're all such creative and wonderful writers! :D

submitted by pangolin, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(December 3, 2023 - 8:17 pm)

okay, yeah, i would love to read that.

submitted by Lord Entropy
(December 3, 2023 - 9:02 pm)

NO. WAY. That sounds so cool I need to read that RIGHT NOW!!! :DD

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age FeiyaKOAFE, :0 *pure shock*
(December 4, 2023 - 8:07 pm)

No way pangolin that's so cool!! I'd love to read your novel (100k??? How??) and any plans you have for your upcoming project, which sounds so cool already.

submitted by Silver Crystal, age Infinity, Milky Way
(December 4, 2023 - 9:54 pm)