Poem! This is

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Poem! This is

Poem! This is about my grandparents' farm.

I am waking up early.

Racing the sun on the black concrete

Spending a day just looking out the window

Singing in your head, on your tongue, out your lips

I am staying up late

Trying for that forever place 

Where asphalt turns to gravel and dust.

But falling asleep to the thump-whirr of tires.

I am green hills covering a house

And the smell of purplish-blue

Washing over you like warm rain

I am myself, I am there.

 

 

submitted by Ann
(April 8, 2010 - 6:49 pm)

I really like it. It evokes feelings that are sort of hard to describe but every word strikes home :) I live on a farm by the way :) But yeah I really liked it! :D

submitted by Koffee, age 14
(April 9, 2010 - 12:03 am)

Nice! Me likes.

submitted by ZNZ
(April 11, 2010 - 1:41 pm)

Thank y'all for the compliments! 

submitted by Ann
(April 14, 2010 - 7:18 am)