Okay, so I

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Okay, so I

Okay, so I have some first sentences that I'd like to put out. If you'd be so kind as to post a sort of storyline, that would be great.

if Emily Augusta Osborne had never set foot in 5036 Kolke, none of this would have happened.

 

it was a Monday, June 21st, and I was doing the dishes when the door blew open without a knock and into my life burst Saphire Grace.

 

The only reason I am writing this is because the world needs to know the dangers of fourteen-year-old eccentric girls named Emi.

 

Once upon a time, in a land far, far away and yet so close you could reach out and touch it, in a time long, long ago and yet so recently it was only yesterday,

 

Laura had never fully considered the meaning of the word "alone" until she saw the face of the girl at the bus stop, three years ago.

 

 So, there they are. I didn't really know what to do with them, so I posted them here. Feel free to critique, correct, come up with a plot, or whatever else you want to that starts with "c" (Joking).

submitted by Jess, age 13, A livingroom
(April 27, 2011 - 5:52 pm)

I like your last sentence the best. Most of the others sound slightly cliché, and we (usually?) want to avoid that. I'm assuming here it's not what you're going for. As for storylines, hmm...

submitted by Brynne
(April 27, 2011 - 9:47 pm)

...And I made another one of these because I didn't see that this one had come up. So please ignore this, the other one is better.

submitted by Jess
(May 2, 2011 - 5:30 pm)