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I have a story I am writing and I am trying to turn it into a book. It is set in the future and the main character is kind of like a cyborg. (Her name is Pandora and she was in a car accident, so her uncle, who is a government scientist, replaced 69% of her body with awesome technology.) Please tell me if you have any ideas, i would love to add them in! Thanks!

submitted by Kim A., age almost 13, Underground
(May 1, 2011 - 4:09 pm)

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How far are you in the book? That might help us help you with what else should happen!

submitted by Princess P.
(May 2, 2011 - 11:51 am)

No offense, this may be an original idea so I don't want to be mean but this is a lot along the lines of the movie I Robot. Have you seen it? Well, this is a lot like it...

submitted by Elizabeth M, age 11, Germany: 21 Day
(May 3, 2011 - 11:44 am)

I haven't seen that movie....what happens? My story is original so I definitely want to make it sound that way! :) It wouldn't be so great if someone thought I was copying off someone/something else. Right now in the story, everyone is on a giant airplane/city/thing, because robot/war machines are going nuts. It's very complex; you'll have to read it if it's going to make any sense. :)

submitted by Kim, age 12, Underground
(May 5, 2011 - 5:42 pm)

I also need names for some of the semi-main characters. I need anything I can work with for the story, names, anything; and I appreciate people's help. :)

submitted by Kim, age 12
(May 5, 2011 - 5:44 pm)

Sorry, I didn't get back sooner! And sorry, if my last post sounded rude! I didn't mean to offend you (if I did). 

I Robot is set in the future. All the odd jobs (mailmen, advertiser people...) are done by robots. Robots also work for people. Del Spooner, a dectective type guy who I believe works for the government..., doesn't trust them at all. Similarity to yours: Del was in a deathly car crash and half of his torso is robot. 

When new robots come, Del, gets even less trustworthy. Then a famous scientist supposedly kills himself but Del knows better. He finds a robot who is different than all the others (has dreams, feelings...). He starts trying to solve the mystery of this death and to prove that the robots that have been sent in are bad.  

I know, I didn't explain that well (Look it up on Wiki! Don't read too far. It spoils it otherwise!). Sorry! You should really see it though if you like action/sci-fi movies and you are allowed to watch PG 13/R. I can't remember. I think it's PG 13.

I would really like to help you but I need a little more knowledge about your book. 

submitted by Elizabeth M, age 11, Germany: 13 Day
(May 11, 2011 - 11:08 am)