Chatterbox: Inkwell

Kay, everybuggy, here is my book I'm working on so far... please tell me how you like it!!!  Bale lifted up his broad head and howled, his melodious voice filling the large canyon beyond him. The shady crescent of a moon vaguely illuminated the winterland about him, and his gray-cream colored pelt. The reason for his triumphant howl was this: his mate had her first litter of pups.