POETRY THREAD!!!!!

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POETRY THREAD!!!!!

POETRY THREAD!!!!!

Here is my poem. It is just one poem with different verses, not a lot of little ones:

Crystalized 

The sun lights up the sky so blue
As the grass shines, wet with dew.
the dog that will belong to me
is following so happily.

The cricket's song soon dies away
on this bright, sunny day.
My feet pound against the grass
which seems to shatter like broken glass.
 

I gaze into the big, bright sun
I wonder, is there more than one?
In some far different place
Somewhere deep in outer space?

Last night the moon lit up the night,
and now it is the sun so bright.
That is now lighting the way
On this crystalized spring day.
 

submitted by EarthGirl
(December 31, 2014 - 10:36 am)

Good poem, Earth Girl! Love the descriptions!

submitted by Bookbug
(December 31, 2014 - 1:32 pm)

Wow! Keep up the good work, EarthGirl!

submitted by Quicksilver
(January 10, 2015 - 7:12 pm)

Yeah, It's really good. 

 

Here's one I wrote called Déjà Vu: 

I can see
once again
I am 
losing you
you slip 
away with 
the tide,
unreachable.
haven't I
seen this before?
 
I must leave, 
I have other
dangers I must
confront.
Let me go
and I will 
come back 
to you 
 
submitted by Indigo
(January 11, 2015 - 4:38 pm)

Sorry, there should have been a space between the italics and the rest. 

 

I fixed it for you.

Admin

submitted by Indigo
(January 11, 2015 - 7:58 pm)

I'm commenting on this very late, but Awesome poem!!!

submitted by SAVVY44x
(January 11, 2015 - 6:36 pm)

Wow! Indigo, I really like that one! :) :)

submitted by Madeline
(January 12, 2015 - 9:42 pm)