Where I'm From

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Where I'm From

Where I'm From poems. Have y'all ever heard of the Where I'm From poems? You basically use yourself or a fictional character (like I did) and fill out and then expand upon a template, then make it into a poem. You can find the templates online. I like to fill them out while I'm forming a poem out of it, but I guess you can fill it out and then write. It's a great little prompt and very fun, especially if you're building a character! Here's one I wrote (it's just a rough draft) about what my life would have been like if I lived on the farmland I do now a long time ago. It's mostly fictional, although everything originates from true experiences or stories I've heard from my grandparents over the years. 

 

Untitled poem (if I lived here like 50 years ago) 

 

I am from the yellow bags of chicken scratch

sagging against the barbed-wire fence 

 

from finest quality American Seed

and baskets fresh from the factory down the road

 

I am from the overgrown, sprawling, dug-up 

barns and feilds 

 

I am from the nutgrass, clinging to the last instant,

the wild honeysuckle edging the woods 

 

like yellow tape, furrowed sand 

soft under years of work,

 

the leafy cucumber plants 

reaching out for redemption 

 

the delicate squash flowers 

bending over wet earth

 

I am from arrow-head expeditions 

and dirty fingernails 

 

I am from the smell of unnecessary

spindly trees we burn every fall

 

and bare feet; 

 

lost shoes

 

calloused skin

 

from “pick before the sun is up” and 

“don’t forget to latch the door” 

 

I am from the Church bells, clear

in the hazy dawn at 8:30 in the mornings

 

I’m from old land there used to be more of,

pickled okra and the stink of vinegar and

 

soft figs layered with sugar and 

cooking in a watched pot 

 

from the farm my brother worked

since he was 14, the preserves we sealed

 

in scalding water, and the piles of peas 

 

we sorted and shelled while watching TV

I am from the photos on the bookshelf,

 

unfinished scrapbooks, and Christmas tree

ornaments we hung on higher branches every year. 

 

 

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LOL! Rosy says fgit! I think she means Figwit!

submitted by Rose bud
(June 7, 2017 - 3:11 pm)

OMG-sharp!  I wrote one of these for my language arts class a few weeks ago!  Of course, we're out now, but I still have the poem.

I’m from pianos,

From white keys and black hammers.

I am from writing that formed songs on the keys.

(Sweet, practiced,

Just like middle C.)

I am from three different teachersl
Katy Perry songs

And the muscle memory I used to practice

To memorize my favorite songs.

 

I’m from saving and spending,

From Samantha and Klaus.
I’m from the short-tempered

And the careless,

From “be quiet!” and “I’m busy!”

I’m from Europe in the east

As well as China in the west

And a name as long as the US.

 

I’m from berry tarts and chocolate,

Smelling like sugar and tasting even better.

From getting cookie cutters I didn’t want

But using them like an artist,

The time I roasted marshmallows indoors.

 

Hung on my bed are many suits

Ready to use,

Smelling like salt

Waiting for summer to come again.

I am from imitating olympic gold medalist Michael Phelps

Going “Sploosh!” in the pool and playing capture the flag

And I made a bonfire out of a marshmallow.

Is it good?  I was going to add something about libraries and reading but i didn't have time. 

submitted by Lucy B., age 13, California
(June 7, 2017 - 5:27 pm)

Top!

submitted by Rose bud
(June 7, 2017 - 5:34 pm)
submitted by Top!
(June 7, 2017 - 7:12 pm)

Top! I love your Poem, Lucy! I read it outloud to my mom, who was sitting next to me, and she loved it too! 

 

 

Rosy says orkp. No, Rosy, I wouldn't eat something called Ork Pie even if I was paid a magic ring! 

submitted by Rose bud
(June 10, 2017 - 6:55 pm)

I wrote one of these! I didn't know there was a template, though, so I didn't use it. I saw one like it in my school's literary magazine and decided to try.

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Untitled

I am from nowhere and somewhere, 

from clicking chopsticks,

the sharp scent of onions,

the smooth twang of voices

forming words, round and soft,

that fit into my mouth

like the mints

that Di 12 keeps in her purse.

I listen, but don't understand, and

speak, halting and slow,

with the wrong accent,

and wonder what I am saying. 

I am also from candles,

two, a pair of identical twins

in a race to see which

can melt faster,

from honey-colored bread

that is hot in my hands when I pull off a chunk.

It's sweet, like the dark juice

which sloshes in

fluted glasses.

I sing in a tongue

with even edges

and square corners

that tastes

just a little tangy

a bit like the doughy warmth

of the Challah

that they used to pass out

at snack time

at Sunday School.

I feel important

because, now, I know

what I am saying, though not

necessarily what it means.

I am from leather photo albums

and watermelon-stained grins

from steaming bowls of pho

and oily crisp-fried latkes

from colorful coconut candies and red envelopes,

from parched brittle bread and greens dipped in salt.

I am from places I have been,

and ones I might never see—

I am from nowhere

and from somewhere.  

submitted by Abigail S., age 12, Nose in a Book
(June 11, 2017 - 11:50 am)

Hah, we wrote these at the end of 6th grade 2 years ago. Mine is... Really bad, but I was young and an idealist so... I'll try to copy/ paste it from Drive:

I am from a land of bubbles, waves, and splashes

from late nights at practice to early mornings at meets

from laughter and memories; a place where hard work pays off

 

I am from the grasshopper song and falling asleep

to the soft notes 

of the “Moonlight Sonata”

from waking up before dawn to smell the spring air, as fresh as summer rain and staying up past midnight

watching the Perseids meteor shower fly by

 

I am from the place where you can see the miracles of life

and be grateful for the little things

robin’s eggs hatching

young deer peeking shyly from the brush

from the sweet call of the mourning dove

and from stars forming twinkling pictures in the night sky

 

I am from wild wineberries staining our fingers bloodred

and an ice cold brook where we would spend hours

exploring 

until we get lost

from a crackling fireplace in the winter to a grill filled with burning wood in the fall

 

I am from the bubble popping and wondering

“Where will practice be?”

I am from the swim team that refused to fall

that stood up to challenges

the team that survives 

 

And finally, I am from playing Uno and Wikipedia in the evenings

from cooking blini for breakfast,

baking bulochki for lunch,

and cooking galupsi for dinner

I am from family that says “I love you”

Every

Single

Night

 

I am from and of the water

blue and at the same time crystal clear

Hear that scream? That shriek of laughter?

Swim towards it, and maybe

you’ll find

Where I’m from

 

submitted by Kestrel
(June 11, 2017 - 12:12 pm)

I feel like I've seen this kind of poem before... Any way, here's what happened when I tried.

 

 

I am from my parent's toils

And my grandparent's dreams

From my ancestor's faith 

I am from candles and Challah 

From Menorah and Matzoh 

I am from God

 

I am from science

I am from logic

I am from the power in man's mind

From progress and change

And I am from thought

Cogito Ergo Sum

 

I am from poetry

I am from artwork 

And I am from music

And open fields and dense forests

And I am from mountains and winding roads

I am from awe and from beauty 

 

 

I am from millenia of belief

But I am from centuries of disbelief

And pursuit of knowledge

I am from the pursuit of peace and beauty 

I am from also the suspension of disbelief

I am from a thousand paradoxes 


I am from a million years ago

I am from the future 

I am from everything that has been

And all that will be

I am part of it all 

I am from a dream

 

 

submitted by coyotedomino, age 14, the Wood, Omniverse
(June 11, 2017 - 2:03 pm)

Hey, are you Jewish, Coyote? I am, too! 

submitted by Cockleburr
(June 13, 2017 - 1:33 pm)

Ooh! These are great! You guys rock. I'll make one tomorrow, I'm tired now. 

submitted by Rae
(June 11, 2017 - 7:29 pm)

Oh my gosh! I remember I did one of those a loooong time ago. I wodner if I can find it.

What I'll probably do is type that one out, and also write a new one....but I'll write a new one before seing the old one, that way I'm not influenced. 

submitted by Owlgirl, age 13
(June 11, 2017 - 7:33 pm)

This is the first time I've really tried poetry. Feel free to critique!

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I am a thing of ancient teachings

passed down l’dor va dor, from generation to generation

of burning candles in heavy brass holders brought

all the way from Europe on a boat

Passed through the women of my family: my mother, her grandmother, her mother

they’ll be mine one day, too.

I am of six-braid challahs

which my dad bakes, not my mom

I come from Hebrew songs and prayers

which I know by heart and teach to the children of my shull

From rituals, like shaking a bundle of plants and a citrus

helping friends to keep the willow branches alive

then watching them march in procession wearing tallit

looking as though they could be from any time at all

were it not for the huge windows.

I come from carrying Torahs in the streets, singing at the top of my voice

with my community behind me, just as loud

Just as proud that we can pray in public, unworried

This is the real reason my many-times great grandmother

carried those candlesticks to America.

submitted by Cockleburr
(June 13, 2017 - 1:59 pm)

@ Cockleburr, yeah, I am, actually.

submitted by coyotedomino, age 14, the Wood, Omniverse
(June 13, 2017 - 4:45 pm)

@ Cockleburr, also, I like your poem!

submitted by coyotedomino, age 14, the Wood, Omniverse
(June 13, 2017 - 4:47 pm)

Thanks Coyote! And cool, another Jew! Abi, Dumpun, and OtR are also Jewish! There may be others as well.

submitted by Cockleburr
(June 17, 2017 - 11:06 pm)

I did something like this for myself:

I. I am of

The scritch-scratch of a pen on mass-produced

Paper--we always bought the cheap kind because we used so much.

II. I am of the whispering of the green-leaved

Trees when the autumn wind blows through them and they seem to laugh.

III. I am of the whizzzz and the buzzzz of 

Bike wheels rolling on the hot cement of the city.

IV. I am of the tangy, almost smoky-but-strange smell

Of fresh paint smeared on the canvas

I am of the smooth, silky strands of paintbrushes before they're immersed in colors.

V. I am of the undescribable, welcoming smell of a book

And rows and rows of them in color order on shelves, my small rainbows of happiness.

VI. I am of the clang of metal measuring spoons

Clouds of white flour in the air and

Sweet aromas drifting from the kitchen

VII. I am of joyful laughter and bright sun and music and running and dancing and loving. 

submitted by Leafpool
(June 15, 2017 - 2:01 pm)