Chatterbox: Pudding's Place



Okay so I just got this great Idea. This may be a thing already, but I'm not sure. 

Well, Anyways, Heres the Idea; I will post the first paragraph of a made-up story, and then you guys will keep posting new parts of the story. Please stick to the story and don't play around. I"m not trying to be strict or anything, just try to post stuff that relates to the story. You can top it ask questions and stuff like that just stick to the story, okay? I will say when we should have a picture posted for the story. Whoever responds first can draw the picture. So, I'm going to start the story. The story is called The adventures of Cooper and Mia a chatterbox story BTW, we will need a picture for the front page of the book. Hey doodlegirl! It would be a pleasure to have you do the picture. Or agent winter! I love your digital drawings. So guys! Mia has blonde hair cut to her chin. She has green eyes, and wears a gray t-shirt with two white stripes on the sleeves. She wears ripped jeans and high boots. Cooper has brown messy hair. His eyes are brown, and he wears a blue t-shirt with jeans and sneakers. Okay I will start writing the first paragh of the story now. 


It all started on the first day of summer. Me and my friend Cooper were on our way to Gabby Creek. It was a cool day and very breezy. we sat down on the rocks and chatted for a while until I saw something. It was red and shiny-like a ruby. I went over to check it out but it kept moving. "what is that?" Cooper asked. "I don't know." Suddenly I saw to of them and then I realized that It wasn't a ruby or a bug or something like that. They were eyes!




submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 28, 2020 - 8:21 am)

Sooooooo who would like to do the picture for the front cover?

submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 28, 2020 - 1:52 pm)

I'll do a picture! Other people can too, if they want.

submitted by DoodleTOP!
(July 28, 2020 - 4:28 pm)

Alrighty then! Go ahead!

submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 28, 2020 - 6:01 pm)

Wait, are you doodlegirl? Who are you I can't tell by the name doodletop. just wondering 




submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 29, 2020 - 7:30 am)

This is a cool idea! I just wanted to let you know that yes, this has been a thing before- it's called a Round Robin or RR. Generally, RRs are found on the Inkwell, but of course it's fine here as well. (Also, just a polite request: if you title your thread "URGENT THREAD" or something similar, it makes it difficult to find the thread or see what it's about from the directory-list-thing, and it's kind of like "click-bait." It's a lot easier for everyone if you title the thread something like "Story Idea??" Thanks!)

submitted by Kitten, Daydreaming
(July 28, 2020 - 5:04 pm)

Thanks for he advice!

submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 28, 2020 - 6:02 pm)

So I'm gonna wait untill the story goes a little further to draw the picture so that Cooper and Mia's characters can develop some more. Do you have a specific idea of what their personalities are? i can write some of the story at some point. This seems fun!

submitted by DoodleGirl, age 13 , Earth
(July 29, 2020 - 9:16 am)

Ok. You can wait as long as you want. But, I will need a cover soon. Mia is adventurous and calm. Cooper is brave and wild. Thanks for asking!

submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 29, 2020 - 10:42 am)

OOh on a different thread can we have a contest for the cover? Just a suggestion!!

submitted by aqua
(July 29, 2020 - 10:18 am)

Thats a great idea! I will make it as soon as I can.

submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 29, 2020 - 10:43 am)


Just as Cooper and I began to run towards the red eyes in the shadow, it disappeared into the bushes. Cooper continued to chase after it, so I followed him. Too late, I realized we were far into the woods. "Cooper, stop!" I called. Cooper turned. "Alright", he said. "I lost it anyway. Even though I could've told him to not chase after it earlier, I have a short temper and blamed it on him. "Look what you've done! Now we're lost!!"

submitted by aqua
(July 29, 2020 - 10:23 am)

Thank you Thank you thank you! I was worried no one would post. Did I say thank you? THANK YOU!

submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 29, 2020 - 10:45 am)


I didn't see their personalities, oops! I guess Cooper kinda fits, but not really Mia... 

submitted by aqua
(July 29, 2020 - 1:26 pm)

Oh it's okay!

submitted by doggiegirl2010, age 10, earth
(July 29, 2020 - 3:34 pm)

Okay, I'm going to try to continue the story.


Around me, bushes rustled like scary, creepy creatures were in them. I knew the cause of the loud rustling was the wind, but it was still really disconcerting. I turned around and saw a pathway that hadn't been there before. I looked under my feet. Same pathway. Maybe we weren't completly lost!  I told Cooper to look behind him. When he did, I looked with him. There was nothing there. Yet, I looked again by myself, and the path showed itself. "Just follow me." I said to Cooper, and started to trace the pathway, when it dissapeared. Cooper was looking down. For some reason no one could see it when Cooper looked, not even him! I said "Don't look down!" "Y-yes ma'am," said Cooper. We started to walk again, me following the path, and Cooper following me. Then a red light glowed on the path. Cooper looked down and said "I can see it! The path you were talking about!" As he looked down, I looked around at the rustling of greenery, even though there was no wind anymore. Then I saw what caused the shaking. Around us, millions of those ruby eyes, like the one we had seen earlier gathered. Then they jumped. 

submitted by Emma, age 8
(July 30, 2020 - 10:43 am)