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Cloud BunnyParticipantforever
Up in the Clouds@Hawkstar, I was just making sure because sometimes CBers change their names. @pangolin, you can enter all three if you want!!! Also, the three judges are Sinusodial, Hawkstar and me.
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PeriwinkleParticipantPi
Somewhere in the starsCan I enter in the contest? I want to do poetry.
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Cloud BunnyParticipantforever
Up in the CloudsYes Periwinkle! Just saying, you can do all three categorys if you wanted! Or just two or one, thats fine too!

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Cloud BunnyParticipantforever
Up in the CloudsAlso, you don't have to ask to enter the contest!
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Cloud BunnyParticipantforever
Up in the CloudsJust a heads up, I'll be gone for the weekend so if you have any questions they'll have to wait until Sunday or Monday.
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaOk, cool! Thanks! And oof, I was three minutes too late to judge 🙂 but I'm sure you guys will do great! Could I be on the waiting list pls?
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Moon WolfParticipantlunaryears
A Celestial SkyI assume we can start our entries now?
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Forget-me-notParticipantForgotten
SomewhereThere is place where the okapis roam
It is the place that they call home
With striped bodies and a long tongue
Taking care of there young
If everyone steps in to help fight
Then we can help end their plight
Is it okay that I used a specific animal? Or should I change it to be a broader range of animals?
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Cloud BunnyParticipantforever
Up in the Clouds@Forget-me-not, the theme is animals so anything about animals!!! Your entry was great, don't change a thing!
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Cloud BunnyParticipantforever
Up in the Clouds@CelineBurning Bright, already did! @Moon Wolf, yes you can put in your entries now!
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Moon WolfParticipantlunaryears
A Celestial SkyHere's my poetry entry:
Nature’s Beauty
A wonderfully scenic world
All nature’s beauty unfurled
Green foliage and lovely trees
Nothing as enchanting as these
A herd of elk and deer graze
Through the many summer days
Gazelles and caribou roam about
None can you do without
Yet hidden while the animals drink
A silvery-gray wolf starts to slink
Stealthily scanning the herds of prey
For one to be their meal today
The wolf finds a target deer
Knowing it still cannot hear
As the predator inches near
Then pounces, suddenly appeared
Truly, nature’s beauty
Absolutely does its duty
To put those who saw
In a completely wondrous awe
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SinusoidalParticipantHi everyone, it's hard for me to sift through a bunch of art on multiple pages so can I have all the submissions in one comment?
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaMy entry!:
The gazelles that leap
Over the grass as the sun shines on
In admiration
Eat flowers and plants and such.
They think they are clever.
The lions that sleep
Over the rocks as the sun shines on
In admiration
Eat gazelles and meat and such.
They think they are clever.
The humans that peep
Over the door of the truck as the sun
Shines on in admiration
Hunt everything around them.
They think they are clever.
They all think they are clever,
But…
The predators that lurks
In the shadows, in
The brightest sunlight, in
The deepest seas, that makes it's home
Everywhere
Doesn't think it's clever.
No.
It KNOWS it's clever.
It destroys everything and anything,
Grass, Gazelle, Lion, Human, Sun…
Time
Conquers all.
You think you're clever?
Think again.
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SinusoidalParticipantHi Celine.
I actually judge art (photographs/paintings/drawings), not poetry, so I will not review this submission. However, I like it very much. Your place on the contest, however, is determined by either Cloud Bunny or Hawkstar.
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist Sea@Sine, thx, and ?
OH! Bc I replied to your comment, right?Sry, I don't have a new comment thing on my screen so I always have to do reply, I'm submitting to poetry, is that ok? -
Holly ShortParticipantHaven
Lower Elements@Sine, here is my entry for the contest!
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