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Holly ShortParticipantHaven
Lower ElementsTo anyone who knows, who is judging what? I'm thinking of doing either art or writing or both, but I want to know who to comment it to. Thanks!
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Moon WolfParticipantlunaryears
A Celestial SkyI believe Sine is doing art and Hawkstar is doing poetry. Cloud Bunny is probably doing writing then.
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HawkstarParticipantAhhhhh it's Holly Short from LEP!!! love those books 😀 I am judging poetry, and Sine is doing art.
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaHi Hawkstar, I put my entry as a reply to Sine's comment even though I'm entering poetry, could you judge it pls if you haven't already? Thanks.
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Holly ShortParticipantHaven
Lower Elements@Hawkstar, you're probably the first one to get that. I reaaaalllyy love those books, just finished rereading the series.
Thank you for the info, guys. I think I'm going to just submit an art piece.
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Lemons&LimesParticipantLEMONS
LIMESHello, this is probably my first posting ever!!! Any way, here is my entry:
The Fox is stealthy,
It's prey doesn't know it is near.
The Wolf has a sharp nose,
It's always one step ahead.
The Owl is soundless,
Flight you can never hear.
The Racoon is a foreger,
It survives off of dumps.
The Wood Thrush is charming,
It helps me go to sleep.
And the Humans kill,
ambushing nature.
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Note: The last part is not always true! I bet all of you who read this never killed a tree or ambushed nature to the point it's cruel. Some people do kill nature, but not all!
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Lemons&LimesParticipantLEMONS
LIMESOh also, GO LEMONS AND LIMES!!!
(They are very good for you)
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist Sea@Lemon&Limes, Hear hear! Very healthy! Except when I make lemonade and add a whole buncha sugar into it…
ooh, I love the bluntness of your poem, and how you contrast humans and other animals. Those are my thoughts too, I've had that opinion on humans since 2nd grade (and wasn't afraid to share it!)!
Also, I'm assuming you're new? If so, welcome to the CB! I find it a not funny that I'm welcoming someone when I myself was welcomed only about 3 weeks ago, but the CB already feels like a kind and supporting second hone and community to me, and I hope it becomes that for you, too!
Here are some links that I found helpful if you need them!:
Ultimate guide: http://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/chirpatcricket/node/443573
CBer statistics (this isn't everyone oc, but it helps with knowing who's on here): https://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/downtoearth/node/549438
CBers as colors (see above): http://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/chirpatcricket/node/475747
oc, a rly good strategy is to just explore also (which I see you've done!), which also is good for seeing who's on here and seeing the community here
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Lemons&LimesParticipantLEMONS
LIMESThanks a lot, CelineBurning Bright!
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Hawk*,poetryresults ParticipantHonorable mention
Forget-me-not ~ Lovely! Short and simple, and it RHYMES! I love the fact that you wrote about an endangered animal, and my favorite line was definitely " If everyone steps in to help fight/ Then we can help end their plight" a very good nudge : ) I enjoyed reading it!
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Lemons&limes – Very good! The description of each animal is accurate, especially with humans! Where I live, people are CONSTANTLY destroying nature, and it makes me quite sad. I like how you aren't softening the truth. Very nice, my favorite part was probably the owl swooping soundlessly. I hope to read your poetry again : D
Second place
CelineBurningBright – A very true poem! I love, love how you made each think themselves rulers, the smart ones, only to point out that time conquers all. Your poem was definitely one of my favorites. My favorite was definitely, "you think you're clever? Think again" it made me giggle ; ) I always enjoy reading your poetry. Good job!
First place
Moon Wolf – ahhhh this was AMAZING!! A real masterpiece. I love how you took all the prey and then still made the survival of the wolf (aka killing a different animal but ya know nature) to be so elegant and beautiful. I honestly never thought of it that way! I always thought, awwww, poor animal that ended up as a meal. But you definitely have given me a new point of view! I can't say my favorite part, I loved every bit of it. I love reading your poetry whenever you post, and… Ya! GREAT JOB!!
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Moon Wolf Participantlunaryears
A Celestial SkyThank you so much!!! All the poems were amazing as well.
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaThank you!! And yes, I agree! And @Moon Wolf, I reread your poem. Utterly amazing! Congrats!!
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Celine@Moon WolfParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaWhat's the next theme? And judges?
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Moon WolfParticipantlunaryears
A Celestial SkyI'm not sure if I'm supposed to be the next judge or Cloud Bunny might decide.
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Celine@Cloud BunnyParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaOk. Then, I assume judges will be next three ppl on the waiting list? Which is… me and you. Does anyone else want to? Can you judge again if no one else wants to?
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Cloud BunnyParticipantforever
Up in the CloudsSure
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Celine@Moon WolfParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaOk then, thx, could I do poetry if you don't want to pls?
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Moon WolfParticipantlunaryears
A Celestial SkyI do want to, but you could do it if you'd like and I could do writing.
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaI'm fine with writing too! You can do poetry! In fact, I'll do writing and you do poetry then?
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Moon WolfParticipantlunaryears
A Celestial Sky😀 sure!
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@Cloud&Moon&EveryoneParticipantAs Needed
Anyone doing art?So… who decides the prompt then? Do we all do it together?? But then that doesn't really seem right…
And can we go on w/o a third judge or do we need a third judge (prob do, right? Since that's what this contest is?)? Or can someone judge two things at the same time if no one else wants to do art?
And sorry for all the questions but should we put a deadline for whoever wants to judge art to sign up? To speed things along? Or should we just wait? Bc then what if someone never responds?
Hope the nicknames were ok, I had to fit it in the space
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SunbeamParticipantU.S.I'd like to participate!!
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SunbeamParticipantU.S.i'd like to participate!!!
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Celine@SunbeamParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaParticipating as in an entrant (which I'm assuming) or a judge? Either way, glad to have you! 🙂
btw, I love your name!
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Cloud BunnyParticipantforever
Up in the CloudsSORRY I HAVEN'T POSTED IN FOREVER!
Anyway, you guys can decide, (meaning you, CelineBurning Bright, and Moon Wolf.)
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