Team writing

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Team writing

Team writing

Hey, everyone! I'm introducing something new: Team Writing! So, we pick a genre or subject for each Team Writing thread, pair ourselves in teams of two, and each team writes a story together! First, the team discusses ideas, then one of the two in the pair writes the story, and the two in the team take turns revising it until they're both satisfied. 

The genre in this Team Writing thread is Fantasy! Wizards and Goblins and Warty Little Trolls... or some other sort of fantasy.

I'd like to invite Theo or BHR to be my partner! Whichever one of them agrees first will be my partner. If neither agree, I'll find someone else. 

submitted by Joe Dosie Doe, age Almost 14, The food disposer
(April 4, 2013 - 8:16 pm)

Ooh! This sounds fun! 

submitted by FantasyQuill
(April 7, 2013 - 10:33 am)

Hehehe! How did you know? Yes, she will probably be blonde, so let's see...

Clover Lloyd.

Age; 13 going on 14 

Appearence; Long, free flowing pure blonde hair with thick bangs constantly getting in her eyes, starry black eyes, very pale skin, red lips, light freckles under her eyes and across the bridge of her nose.

Wears; Knee length black cargo skirt, white puffed sleeve blouse with a black lace up vest (I guess what you'd call peasent style), black hunting boots, black wrist length cloak held with a silver crescent pin. (I know a lot of black, but if you can really picture how it would look, it's not really that much) 

Personality; Sweet tempered, quiet, determined, strong though she looks fragile, though that's because of an illness she contracted when she was very young. But she has a complete other side most people don't expect. She's mischevous, likes pulling pranks as well, though keeps her trickster identity secret. She is especially out going, and all around happy when she's with her brother. 

Has a secret love of nice pretty things, and music. That's why her little wooden flute means a great deal to her.

The conflict can be a mixture of things, with one main source? Like it starts with an illness, and moves on to random disappearences such things?  Like it has something controlling all of this. What do you think? I'm game really for whatever. I like new twists, so...

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule
(April 7, 2013 - 5:34 pm)

I like Clover, but I think she and Dewey should have different last names, since their not supposed to be aware that they're siblings.

submitted by Joe Dosie Doe, age Almost 14, Unknowingly knowing
(April 8, 2013 - 9:59 am)

Good point. Hmm. Mirth. Clover Mirth!

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule
(April 8, 2013 - 9:27 pm)

Well, I am finally here, and I am very much so interested in doing this, but I cannot write a lot right now.

submitted by Theo W
(April 9, 2013 - 8:21 pm)

Same here. After Camp NaNoWriMo is over, would you like to be partners?

submitted by SC
(April 12, 2013 - 8:27 pm)

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Lonnie

submitted by top
(April 10, 2013 - 4:20 pm)

@BHR Vague idea for our story conflict:

One of Clover and Dewey's friends gets killed by a vampire, who had to resort to the guy's blood as a last resort under undecided circumstances, since he didn't have the animal blood he usually prefers. Not knowing this justification, Clover and Dewey hunt down the vampire, and the vampire must convince them he's not really bad (since he isn't). The vampire convinces Clover and Dewey that he is not a bad guy, and then they must team up to stop a bigger threat of some sort. At the end of the story, Clover and Dewey become vampires too, also under undecided circumstances.

What do you think?

submitted by Joe Dosie Doe, age 14 at last, World's worst funkys
(April 10, 2013 - 4:25 pm)

Ooh! This sounds fun. Anybody want to be my partner?

submitted by Marina, age 13, Michigan
(April 10, 2013 - 6:16 pm)

Sure!

submitted by Theo W., age 12.5
(April 11, 2013 - 6:37 pm)

Okay, so what kind of story were you maybe thinking of?

submitted by Marina, age 13, Michigan
(April 12, 2013 - 8:20 am)

Well, it's fanatsy, so no robots. Probably no robots. We proabably need some soild characters first.

submitted by Theo W.
(April 12, 2013 - 6:57 pm)

Okay, I don't like robots anyways. Not too much a fan of sci-fi unsually anyways unless it's post-apocalyptic. Do you want the story to be in the past or present? I really don't care either way. Do you have any ideas for what type of creatures/extraordinary human types you want? So long as we don't do something that's super creepy evil, then I don't care too much. Lastly, do you want it to be mixed with ordinary people or not? I probably couldn't care less about this one, but I think we should decide.

submitted by Marina, age 13, Michigan
(April 12, 2013 - 8:31 pm)

No ordinary people. I'm reading a manga graphic novel with ordinary people and I could die. I like dragons, so that could definitly be a suggested thing to incorperate in the story. I don't care about past or present, or even future.

submitted by Theo W.
(April 13, 2013 - 4:22 pm)

Okay, no ordinary people. I don't know much about dragons, but I like that idea, and they seem pretty cool.  So long as it's not future then I'm good. What kind of place do you think they should live in? Oh, and how big are they? Also, do you want there to be something unordinary other than dragons? I was thinking one thing could be a magical place of some sort that they can go to. Sorry it took me a while to reply too.

submitted by Marina, age 13, Michigan
(April 27, 2013 - 6:12 pm)