Futuristic RP!!

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Futuristic RP!!

Futuristic RP!!

I wanted to do some kind of RP set in the future. Here's what I was thinking for the plot. There's a city that's in the sky. Yes, in the sky. It has a strong magnet that repels against the earth's ores below. It's really high up and has a force field around it. The builders of the city made it because the earth was destroyed and couldn't inhabit humans anymore, because of the four world wars. Humans destroyed the earth. These kids decided to get down to the ground and see if people can live there.

So here's my character.

Name: June Gray

Age: 13

Appearance: She's really pretty, with creamy white skin, emerald green eyes, and long silver/blond hair.

Personality: She's the most popular girl at school, and she's really snotty. Everyone wants to be in her group. She's a little mean. Basically, she's the stereotypical "mean beauty queen". Though after her adventure, she changes.

submitted by Bookbug
(September 25, 2014 - 12:44 pm)

Might as well post, seeing as I'm on a spree. 

And @Brooke; sorry I was so rude! I'd typed that post out in a hurry, but I think maybe there can be a compromise: Valenara was the One of the Waste once, but she had to leave and the dragon took he place. Now she wants to return, but the dragon is already bound to the city, so it's complicated and they sort of both have a connection just in different ways. 

Mercir~

My gosh, I was dancing with June Gray. June Gray! Sure, she could be mean at times - but some of the stuff the less popular crowds said behind her back, she didn't deserve at all. I had always gotten the impression that she was more, well, silly than mean - although maybe I'd just decided on that to stop myself feeling guilty.

I felt guilty enough about Steven, of course, who was kind of a nasty piece of work sometimes. That's it. June was nicer than Steven, and that made her accessible.  

As if reading my thoughts, June smirked at me. "I suppose you're friends with him?"

"Steven? Oh, yeah. I don't need to ask whether you're friends with June, because the whole School kind of knows your name."

It was what June wanted to hear; I'm not sure whether my statement came off as honest or as flirtatious, nor was I sure which I'd intended it to be. Fate, however, left me no time to figure out because suddenly, a yell came from the cake stand. 

It was Steven, who had dragged Maya over to the cake. "WHO IS THAT?" he was shouting.

"I DIDN'T INVITE HER," Maya screeched back, letting go of Steven's hand to grab the girl's and pull it up. Startling, I realized it was Valenara - goodness, she lived next door to me, didn't Shea?

June's eyes narrowed as she dragged me toward the desert table. "It's robot girl," she snapped.

"I -" I began, but then shut up because Valenara was an android, not a robot, but that didn't help, and I wasn't even supposed to know - I'd overheard my parents talking about her. Instead, I let June pull me to the table, unsure yet again of which side I was on.  

submitted by Katia (posting)
(October 9, 2014 - 8:28 pm)

Oh gosh. *facepalm* I meant 'cyborg', not 'android'. Please stand by.

submitted by Katia
(October 9, 2014 - 10:01 pm)

(Lol Katia your idea is great. And android is FINE. Lol.)

Valenara leapt out the window. Sure, it was a three story drop, but her mechanisms healed the cuts and bruises.

She ran to the edge of the city, but there was no sign of the boy she had seen earlier.

Hadn't he been looking here?

Suddenly she tripped and dropped over the edge............

submitted by Brooke E.
(October 10, 2014 - 7:34 am)
*Arrives Fashionably-okay Really late*
Hullo! Sorry I'm late mind if I pop in here?

Name: Li

Age: 15 (but she has to act older)

Appearance:  Purple jumpsuit, long black hair, black high-top like shoes. 

 

Personality: Doesn't really have feelings, wants to be human, don't all cyborgs? says she's schoolhomed, but doesn't do school at all.

 

Backstory: Hard life, cyborg life alwas is hard, she is a practice model, and she malfuntions, so she works in the wast place.

submitted by Winter Firefly
(October 10, 2014 - 8:59 am)

Oh and she's smart and telepathic- shocker for me to choose telepathy right? Lol.

submitted by Winter Firefly
(October 10, 2014 - 9:01 am)

ME AND YOUR CHARRIE CAN BE SISTERS!!!!

submitted by Brooke E.
(October 10, 2014 - 6:22 pm)
GREAT IDEA BROOKE! I have an IDEA! Can I ignore your last post???

UPDATED:

Name: MA115 or Li Chrome

Age: Was made fifteen years ago (but she has to act older)

Appearance:  Purple jumpsuit, long black hair, black high-top like
shoes. One eye is black, black as her puple, the other is dark blue,
like the sky after a storm. 

 

Personality: Doesn't really have feelings, wants to be human, don't all
cyborgs? says she's schoolhomed, but doesn't do school at all. She's smart and telepathic too.

 

Backstory: Hard life, cyborg life always is hard, she is a practice
model, and she malfunctions, so she works in the wast place. Far from
her sister Valenara Chrome, MH113.

~

I hid behind a canwast, I make a dash for it, I walk into a party, Oh no, this is bad, really bad! How dos she get into these messes? I ask myself in thought.
My chin quivering, "Let her go!"
"Why should he?" June smirked
"Please, I'm sorry, for this mess." I said firmly, I made it clear to Valenara, she would be in heaps of trouble. I walked up to her grabbed her wrist, and we ran out of there, before I could malfunction.   
When we got to our shack we call a home,
"What in this Universe made you go to a party!? What, tell me, could have convinced you?"
"Uh-
free food?" I could tell my sister, she didn't scare easily, the only
thing that really scared her was, me when I was mad, and I was really
mad today, I spent two days straight, no sleep, no food, just working,
then I came home to find she snuck  into a party! I. Was. Mad.
~
Do you guys like it?
submitted by Winter Firefly
(October 11, 2014 - 9:06 am)

"Stop whining!" snapped Valenara, tired of it. "Here!"

Valenara shoved the food into her sister's arms and ran off, yelling,

"It was for you!" 

submitted by Brooke E.
(October 11, 2014 - 3:30 pm)
Li~
Why am I so horrid? Can't I do any thing right? I was trying to help. Ghhhhhaaaaaa!
I have semi feelings, why?
I notice steam rising from my entire body, Whoooaa, cool down Li. Then I realized, I had to go work again!

Running down the street, I see my Master, Dang! I hid behind a canwast, turning unto steal.

"LI! I SEE YOU! I'M NOT BLIND YOU KNOW! COME HERE!" my Master screamed,.

Worst luck ever. Uhhhhhh. I
turned to my true form, he shot lasers at me, it was the human's way of
whipping us. I heard a noise behind me, turned my eyes widening, what
saw was frightening...

submitted by Winter Firefly
(October 12, 2014 - 8:24 pm)

I'd post, but I'm a little confused.... did Valenara run off of the border, or no? Because I feel like if she did, it would work better for the overall flow of the story because then Mercir and June could follow her and we'd all finally end up in the same place, but there's probably a compromise I'm too lazy to think of.

submitted by Katia
(October 12, 2014 - 8:28 pm)

I know Brook could just do this:

"Stop whining!" snapped Valenara, tired of it. "Here!"

Valenara shoved the food into her sister's arms and ran off, yelling,

"It was for you!" 

She ran to the edge of the city, but there was no sign of the boy she had seen earlier.

Hadn't he been looking here?

Suddenly she tripped and dropped over the edge............

 

Good IDEA? 

submitted by Winter Firefly
(October 13, 2014 - 11:14 am)

Yes, that works.

submitted by Brooke E.
(October 13, 2014 - 1:05 pm)

I'm gonna die I'm gonna die.  The ground is getting closer and closer.

Suddenly, I feel a jerk on the back of my shirt, and I am gently lowered to the ground.  I whip around to see who my rescuer is.  Valenara is just tucking glider-like wings into her back.

"M-my battery's dr-drained."  And she collapses.

We're stuck. 

submitted by Bounty, age 12
(October 13, 2014 - 3:49 pm)

Valenara jolted awake. Her battery recharged during her sleep protocol.

Or while she slept, whatever humans called it.

Her left wing was out of power. It would take days just to juice up.

She sighed and saw Apollo on the ground.

She gasped and ran over. To her relief, he was still breathing. 

She prodded him and, seeing he was asleep, touched his hair.

It was very fluffy and humanish.

It was odd when she poked him, that he didn't feel full of wires like she did. He jolted awake. Fortunately her hand was at her side before he noticed.

"Are you alright?" she asked as her blush system overrode her anti-blush system.

"Yeah..." he said, looking at her oddly.

Suddenly Valenara had a terrible thought.

I bet he thinks I'm a freak.

She ran away, clear fluid substance pricking at her eyes.

Her internal dictionary system told her that humans called them tears.

After she had crested the hill, she sat on the other side and the fluid-or tears- ran down her face.

Why were her eye systems doing that? 

Apollo crested the top. He was fast when he wanted to be.

"Wait!" he called. 

submitted by Valenara, crying. D:
(October 13, 2014 - 4:58 pm)

My sister was falling, fast! She has wings, I told myself, she'll be fine, so I went down to the waste area, I saw a peek hole, Earth! 

I felt myself fall to the ground......... 

submitted by Winter Firefly
(October 13, 2014 - 6:03 pm)