Mystery Thread

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Mystery Thread

Mystery Thread

I may be biting off way more than I can chew, but I am making a new thread. So, yea yea, heard that one before. Mystery in an old house. You are invited, then people go missing. Exept:

1 This isn't like a Ski Lodge

2 This is an RPG

3 The twists will keep coming

4 There are extra rules!

Rules:

Act howeaver you want, but be careful, the jerks will disappear/die first.

Please, no OP people.

Follow my lead, and stay with the story. No making up random stuff.

Fill out the character sheet completely.

Ok, here is another note:

I will tell you things like "So and so found a hidden room!" and you can post things like "I found a hidden room in X place.", so I will tell you what happens, and you can respond howeaver. There will be times were I do long posts, howeaver.

 

Character Sheet:

Name:

Age:

Description:

Personality:

Biggest Dream:

Worst Fear:

Favorite Color:

Will You Have Crushes Later:

Favorite Weapon:

Pets:

Favorite Band:

Favorite Book:

Other:

Long, right? But for this to work, I will need it all. And another thing: Please tell me before you quit.

Anything else?

Begin the Begin! (REM, you are awsome!!!) 

submitted by Gared
(July 17, 2016 - 3:06 pm)

I completely understand. No offense taken... I think.... You can go ahead and write it. But I guess I probably shouldn't keep anything from you, because you might want it to be different. 

In my version, Scylla dies. In the final battle, Elliot is talking to Gared. Then Scylla sees him aiming his crossbow at Gared and sprints over. Just as Elliot fires the bolt, she leaps in front of Gared and intercepts it. Then she dies.

submitted by Scylla
(August 7, 2016 - 8:22 am)

Ok, but I may have a few more twists. I will try to use it, however. 

submitted by Gared
(August 7, 2016 - 9:21 am)

Well, I could use that...

Only problem is that Elliot would just kill Gared after Scylla died. 

submitted by Gared
(August 7, 2016 - 12:59 pm)

No. It's my ending. It wouldn't be the same from your hands. Write it in the way you had in mind... I'll watch from the sidelines. Use my character however you wish.

submitted by Scylla
(August 7, 2016 - 4:16 pm)

Okay.

I have been gone for a week, and I get back on, and see that I must resolve some things.

Go ahead. Ship me with Alexander. Write stories about it. I really don't care. (LOL-third person I have been shipped with in the past two weeks. No lie. XD)

 

submitted by Brooklyn Newsie
(August 6, 2016 - 1:24 pm)

~A Lab~

“So,” a voice says. Elliot stares at the vial Jak holds. Inside, a centipede squirms. “This little vial wall destroy a city. We-”

“Wait!!!” Elliot cuts in. “Gared will launch another wave! He has got to.”

~Gared Tech.~

A scientist walks up to a safe. He enters the passcode, and the door swings open. A red button stands out. The scientist presses the button.

~Emergency Announcement~

Warning. A virus has been unleashed that causes similar effects than that of the zombie spores and serum. Take caution. Warning, I repeat, a Zombie Virus has been unleashed.

~Gared~

Checkmate

submitted by Gared
(August 7, 2016 - 9:26 am)
submitted by 200!!
(August 7, 2016 - 9:30 am)

~Gared~

Good, the virus has been released.

Now, I must release the new Superzombies.

~Alexander~

I follow Elliot into the vault. Electric lights flicker, and small doors slide open. Everywhere weapons were piled. Gear was hanging from the ceiling, and wires lead to computers.

“Welcome,” Elliot said. “To the Elliot Holding Corporation vault.”

LATER

I walk into the parking lot. Gared is expected to come here, and fighters are positioned around the perimeter. I signal for Elliot to come forward. Jak walks out from a warehouse. Then we hear the roar.

~Elliot~

A roar fills my ears as I see the greenish zombie lion. It’s hair is matted and smeared with dirt, and I dive back. Jak runs out, and throws a glass vial. It shatters, and a giant snake spreads over the sidewalk. The snake lunges at the lion, and the lion runs away. The snake runs after the zombie.

Gared walks into view. Weird, we can catch him easily. Elliot, Jak, and I motion for our warriors to come out of hiding, but the stumble out, rapidly turning green. We are surrounded by… zombies?

~Jak~

Slicing through zombies, I run at GAred. I want my revenge. I want vengeance.

Gared twists his hand. Zombies stagger forward, but that is not my problem: my arm feels like it is on fire. My flesh is turning grey, and I limp forward. The five feet I have to walk seems like miles. I trip, and stay down.

~Gared~

Wow, my virus works. I can take control of humans now…

“Scylla:” I yell. “Activate Code Red.”

Later

~Jak~

How could I be wrong? Gared is right. He should get control of the world.

~Elliot~

Jak just fell, now he has climbed back up. Gared has disappeared, and-

Oh, no, nooooo! Jak is a zombie. His left arm is grey, and his eyes have turned red. This must be the virus.

~Gared~

Glad I ran out. Elliot has gone berserk.

“Well,” I say to Scylla. “In the zombie spores, I put in a small virus. Now, the new virus will create thinking zombies, since the victims are partly immune. Pretty clever, right?”

“Uh, no.” Scylla replies.

submitted by Gared
(August 7, 2016 - 7:28 pm)

Do you want me to keep writing? I mean, this is your story, so you should do what you want, but I'd like to know if you liked my input at all. You probably didn't. I'm still reading, as it happens.

submitted by Scylla @Gared
(August 8, 2016 - 8:54 pm)

Could you keep writing Gared and Scylla's relationship? I would like that.

submitted by Gared
(August 9, 2016 - 10:19 am)

Maybe. What happens in your ending? Could I write an epilogue? Like, fifteen years in the future and Gared and Scylla have a family, or something like that. But if one of them dies, then that wouldn't happen... maybe Elliot would do something... I don't know. And besides, I'd need your approval anyway so I shouldn't get ahead of myself.

OH MAH CAT HALLIA SAID A WORD!! It's her seventh word and she said "crib!!" I can't believe it!  

submitted by Scylla
(August 9, 2016 - 5:38 pm)
submitted by TopBumpPoke
(August 10, 2016 - 6:40 pm)
submitted by TOP, up up up up up up up up
(August 10, 2016 - 8:57 pm)
submitted by @Gared??
(August 11, 2016 - 8:55 pm)

~LA~

Elliot and Alexander stood over the dead body of Jak.

“Well,” Elliot said. “That was a disappointment. Could have used him.”

“No, he was too… freeminded. We need someone who is really naive. He figured it out.”

“Ok, but we should send the remaining five squadrons down that road. Gared should be there.”

~A Hotel Lobby Not Far from Elliot and Alexander~

“Goodbye, Scylla,” GAred said. “I love you.”

GAred ran out into the street. He was wearing a gold crown, and looked extremely overconfident.

“Stop,” A voice yelled. GAred saw Elliot running towards him. He carried a crossbow, and looked grim. “Give up. We have the place surrounded. You come with us.”

“No, sorry.” GAred yelled as he grabbed onto a ladder dropped by a helicopter. He was lifted up, away to safety.

~A Basement~

“Alright girls. You know the plan. Divide and conquer.” A horse female voice yells at cloaked figures.

~The Desert Outside LA~

The sun burned on a hill. Dead shrubs and sand covered it, and the single figure on it was made eerily alone by her dark cloak. Soon, she heard footsteps. A group of men, all tired from the hike were being pushed on by two younger men. The woman snapped around, as the two young men walked forward.

“Who are you?” One asked.

“I am Abby, your downfall, Elliot.” Abby said as she lunged at Elliot. She cut a four-inch gash down his arm with a dagger that seemed to come from nowhere.

“What?” Elliot yelled. “You were working for GAred?”

“Yes, no. I was working for myself. Yes, I can do that. That is your downfall. You think everyone is working for either you or your brother in a game of capture the flag. You are an arrogant man, Elliot.” Abby yelled. She slapped Elliot across the face, and he fell.

Then a new noise broke in. Elliot stood up quickly.

“Alex,” He yelled to the figure by his side. “Who are those?”

“My army.” Abby answered.

Running up the hill were the girls who had been invited to that mansion all those years ago, except for Scylla. Lead by Novelist, they spread out. Running at the soldiers loyal to Elliot, they edged their way up the mountain. Elliot readied his crossbow and: “Bang!”

A bullet was lodged in the middle of the bolt. Elliot turned, and saw Scylla, with her shotgun smoking, and GAred, with an army of zombies.

The remaining battle was large. Abby refused to work with Elliot, even to stop Gared. Gared was out of zombie virus, so he was releasing the spores. Abby was in command of her troops, and as Danie swung wildly, Brooklyn charged at Alexander.

The climax, however, came when September fell. On the side of the hill, Abby battled through Zombies to get to her. Hidden from view, everyone else presumed them dead.

~The Top of The Hill~

Gared was outnumbered. Abby’s army fought well, and Elliot had so many troops that the zombies were dispersed. Gared was surrounded as Elliot slowly forced him towards the edge, which overlooked a very steep drop. Then, with a burst of speed, Elliot grabbed a rock and hit GAred’s head. That threw GAred off balance, and he fell, headfirst down the cliff. Elliot grabbed the crown that had fallen from GAred’s head, and walked back to the center. Together Alexander and Elliot held the crown.

The crown had once been shiny and decorated with small jewels. It had been meant for the time when GAred had control of the world, and Elliot must have felt that now he was now in power.

This was confirmed by a shout of: “People, I am your ruler, your master. Bow before me.”

~The Side Of The Hill~
September was alive, and would recover. Abby was about to rejoin the fight, when she heard the shout of “I am your ruler.”

She ran up the cliff.

“No.” She said, defiantly.

“What?” Elliot turned around, letting the crown fall to the floor.

“I said no. Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!” Abby screamed.

Then, with a sudden flash of hidden blades, she stabbed Elliot and Alexander.

“The tyrants,” She yelled. “Are dead. Let us rejoice!”

Abby saw Scylla and GAred run off. “Let them” She thought. “They will do no more harm.”

submitted by Gared
(August 12, 2016 - 11:02 am)