Sure Mudpaw can be your apprentice, but please note that she is a girl.

Ok, you have a point there. How about the Shadowclan medicine cat is still alive at the very beginning, and she's killed by a fox or something before she can name an apprentice. How about her name was Littleleaf. 

Oh, also, sorry for making another clan sheet. I didn't see that you had made one until after mine posted. (lol, mine got messed up when I pasted it anyways.)

name:bramblefeather

age:32 moons

clan:thunder

rank:med. cat

appearance:bramble/tigerstars patterning  gold eyes

personality:kind

family:blazestar

Name: Echoclaw

Age: 16

Clan: ThunderClan

Rank: Warrior

Appearence: White with light hazel paws, tail tip, and around her eyes.

Personality: Fierce, yet kind, outgoing, determend, slightly quirky

Family: Blossom(frost) ( Mother), Mudtail (Father), Maplepaw( Younger sister)

Prefix Bramble is already taken. 

Today's soundtrack: Imagine Dragon's new album Evolve. Adrenaline, check. Awesome all powerful writer-y feeling: Check. Random pre-posting rambling: Check. 

Let's do this thing.

(Oh, one more thing. Claaws, I know Lostfur's charrie sheet said that she was looking for an apprentice, but for convenience's sake, can we pretend that Brightpaw is the medicine cat apprentice at first? After she transfers, there won't be an apprentice anymore, and you can go back to her looking for an apprentice if you want. Hope that's ok!)

Brightpaw~

"Brightpaw, wake up you minnowbrain. It's morning already." Lostfur poked a paw into Brightpaw's side, and the apprentice stirred in her nest. After a moment's hesitation, she uncurled herself, yawned, and blinked her wide green eyes at her mentor. "Sorry Lostfur. I..... I had another bad dream last night." Lostfur gazed at Brightpaw for a moment, then meowed "Do you want to talk about it?" Brightpaw curled her tail around her paws and matched Lostfur's piercing gaze. "I saw darkness. So much darkness. The air smelled like fear, and when I looked up, I saw....." Her usually calm meow quavered, and her ears flattened back against her head. "I saw the darkness cover the stars one by one, until the stars were just...... gone." The thought of losing Starclan kindled a deep, tangible panic inside her. Without our ancestors, we would be nothing. Without the stars in the sky to guide us, we would be lost. 

Lostfur considered her for a moment, then tilted her head towards the stacks of herbs that sat waiting to be sorted and replenished. "The life of a medicine cat is never an easy path to follow, but it is the path the you and I have decided to live by, and it is a path laid out for us by Starclan. If they are sending you these dreams, then there is a reason. They may be simply warning us of a greencough outbreak, or it may be something darker, but until it happens, all we can do is prepare and stay alert. I have already informed Ripplestar of your dreams, and there is nothing more to be done. Thinking about it is only going to drive you mad, so I suggest you help your clan by focusing on sorting out these herbs instead of dwelling on something you cannot change. Now, I'm going to go collect some horsetail. Sort through the dock leaves and throw out anything that we can't use anymore." With that, Lostfur turned and stalked out of the thorny-medicine cat den, leaving Brightpaw to think over her words. 

She felt certain that Starclan was trying to tell her something. Something was coming, something big, and she wanted to be ready for it when it did. Then, her stomach gurgled loudly and she was reminded that, prophecy or not, she needed to eat something, and she had to get through a pile of dock leaves first. Twitching her tail in annoyance, she bent over the pile and began to discard the dried and withered leaves. She threw herself into the work, trying to focus on the fact that the fresh kill was probably disappearing off the pile instead of the darkening sky and the feeling of fear. 

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Sorry that was kinda short. I'll write more later.  

@Atumnleaves, sounds good! And Rain is taken as a prefex...sorry! And Little is already taken as a prefex, so how about..Yarrowleaf? 

Okay, here are the people who still need to change their charrie's names. 

@Pinkpanther, the prefex Birch and Light are already taken. Can you change Birchfall and Lightfoot's names? And Cherrysky has a mate already, Lakeclaw.

@Echoclaw, Echo and Mud are already taken as prefexs. Can you switch Echoclaw and Mudtail's names? 

@Elementgirl, so, I gotta an idea for the leader and kits. Maybe you could make another queen, one who's kits maybe died of sickness, and that queen maybe volenteered to raise Ripplestar's kits, so she could still lead the clan and train her apprintance? How does that sound? 

@Ashfang Storm and Night are already taken as prefexes. Can you change Nighttail's name and Stormkits name?  And a cat cannot have a prefex of Star, because if they became leader they would be named Starstar. So can you also change Startail's name? Oh, and one last thing, can Foxshadow be siblings with Eaglepelt?

@Moonfrost can you switch all of your cats to Thunderclan? I mean, it would even out the numbers a lot. And, I mean, they just had an awfull dictatorship, so wouldn't you think Windclan would have the least amount of warriors? Also, I understand Dovepools the med. cat. Maybe if you switch them all to Thunderclan, she can be Thunderclan's med. cat? Cause, I bet Blazestar just made Thornfeather to fill in the gaps.

@Someone, Feather is already taken as a prefex. And can you also switch your charries to Thunderclan? Windclan's...overpopulated.... like seriously...26 cats in Windclan....compaired to 14 in Thunderclan....

Also, @EVERYONE, OUR APPRINTANCES NEED MENTORS. So can either Rainwing, Mudtail, Blazestar, or Redheart mentor Rosepaw and Maplepaw? And can Raincloud mentor Lilypaw? We'll figure out WIndclan after there's less cats. I can take away Downyfeather, too.

and updated list!!!!!!!!!

Thunderclan (14)

Leader: Blazestar

Duepty: Redheart

Med. Cat: Thornfeather

Warriors: Cherrysky, Rainwing, Jayclaw, Applestreak, Echoclaw (name's taken), Mudtail (name's taken), Blossomfrost

Apprintances: Rosepaw, Maplepaw

Queens: Sunberry

Kits: Firekit

Elders:

Windclan (26!?)

Leader: Silverstar

Apprintance: Bramblepaw 

Duepty: Downyfeather

Apprintance: Mudpaw 

Med. Cat: Dovepool 

Warriors: Hawkfang, Berryheart, Leafjump, Dapplefang, Goldenstripe, Mosswing, Birchfall, (name is already taken...) Graybelly, Vipernose

Windleap

Apprentice: Icepaw 

Apprentices: Icepaw, Mudpaw, Littlepaw, Frostpaw, Bramblepaw, Featherpaw (name's taken)

Queens: Fernnose

Kits: Robinkit, Fawnkit, Breezekit, Tallkit

Elders: Brindlepelt, Lightfoot (name is already taken....) Moonfrost

Riverclan (16)

Leader: Ripplestar

Apprintance: Wolfpaw 

Duepty: Raincloud (name's taken...)

Med. Cat: Lostfur 

Apprintance: Brightpaw 

Warriors: Lakeclaw, Falconclaw,

Birchheart,

Apprintance: Fireflypaw 

Stormpelt

Apprintance: Echopaw

Apprintances: Echopaw, Fireflypaw, Wolfpaw, Lilypaw, Brightpaw

Queens:  Ripplestar? 

Kits: Birdkit, Stonekit, Petalkit

Elders: Darkfang

Shadowclan (19)

Leader: Nightstar

Duepty: Foxshadow

Med. Cat: Littleleaf

Warriors: Duskheart, Amberpelt, Lightwhisker, Startail (cant have that name), Blackclaw, Crowpelt, Nighttail (name's taken....)

Apprintances:

Queens: Tigerfang, Ashfang

Kits: (Batkit, Ravenkit, Sprucekit, Beatlekit ~Tigerfang's) Featherkit, Muskkit, Stormkit (name's taken...) ~Ashfang's

Elders: