Chain Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Chain Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chain Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was icy on the planet Defriona. The majority surface was covered in glittering snow. The only signs of life were a few scattered white rabbits among the trees, and a small cottage on a southern field. The inhabitants of this lonely house were a girl, her twin brother, and their cat. This is where their story begins........

 

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submitted by Jwyn , age 12, aMbER's Hideout
(October 24, 2017 - 12:55 pm)

In a flash of brown stripes and variations, Purvis smacked into the boy, and they both crashed to the ground. I gasped -- "Purivs!" But to my surprise, the little boy sat up giggling as he stroked the cat's ragged fur.

submitted by Stargirl, age 13, Earth
(November 18, 2017 - 10:04 pm)

Whoops! I meant to write that in the third person; sorry! "I" is supposed to be Holly. 

submitted by Stargirl, age 13, Earth
(November 18, 2017 - 10:06 pm)

"So, where am I, anyway? And what's this?" Ivien asked, as he unconcernedly picked up some snow and watched it melt into his fingers.

"You're on Defrona. But come inside, you must be so cold," Heath said, and Holly shivered in agreement, already feeling the wet hem of her dress stiffening with ice. But the boy simply cocked his head curiously and asked, "Where is Defrona? And what is cold?"

submitted by Cockleburr
(November 21, 2017 - 1:59 pm)
submitted by Top
(November 21, 2017 - 9:59 pm)

Holly opened her mouth, then closed it, as she could not find a way to answer this question. Heath simply shook his head. "It does not matter now," he said, "come on inside". Ivien brushed the frozen white powder off his curious ashy-red suit, and confused, walked with them into the small snow-covered brick cottage nearby.

 

My CAPTCHA is mpig.... Moo Pig?

submitted by Jwyn, age 12, aMbER's Hideout
(November 26, 2017 - 6:52 pm)
submitted by Top!, age Top!, Top!
(December 4, 2017 - 11:32 am)
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(December 4, 2017 - 11:32 am)
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(December 4, 2017 - 8:43 pm)
submitted by Somebody Post!!!!!!!, Top!
(December 11, 2017 - 4:58 pm)

Inside, Holly handed Ivien a bowl of soup, while Heath descretly pulled a curtain over the part of the room that held their secret. Ivien quickly finished the soup, and licked his lips, looking around. Suddenly, as if pulled, he got up, reached toward the curtain, and pulled it aside.

submitted by Alisa Quickshadow
(January 22, 2018 - 9:29 pm)