--Solo write--

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--Solo write--

--Solo write--

I'm launching a solo write (my first one!) bc lately I've been having this urge to write but I can't find motivation to finish stories I start, so hopefully this will help keep me on track. Also, this is a fun idea, and I'm excited to share work with you guys, so hope people join! Please try to join by Aug 5, but once I get at least 5 charries (limit of 2 per person, AEs, OCs, and CBers invited.) I'll probably start, though I'm also going to be going on vacation soon so it might be a while. You can join at any time, but if you join later, you won't have as big a role probably.

Setup: The Wizarding School for Creatures of All Types, the acclaimed boarding school in the Kingdom of Myrth, is giving out scholarships for all users of magic to attend for one summer of education. Lots of young mages enter, but only a select few are chosen, and not only because of their magical skills. The lucky few pack their bags and set out for the school, which is located in the center of the kingdom. Little do they know that this summer will not only be filled with magic and learning, but also betrayal, danger, and adventure. No one is who they say they are, and trust should not be given out freely. What are the WSCAT's real motives for the contest? And is there such a thing as good/bad?

 

Charrie sheet-

 

Name:

Age (12-19 if you want to attend the school pls!):

Nickname?:

Power (only one): 

Magic experience:

Personality:

Appearance: 

Favorite motive/saying (optional but appreciated):

Luggage:

Opinion on books?:

Opinion on royalty?:

Student/Teacher: 

Strengths/Weaknesses: 

Shipping: 

Background (optional): 

Pronouns: 

Other: 

 

And I'm pretty sure I'll get guessed pretty quickly... but gtg now I might change this stuff later bc I just came up with a random idea and wrote it down and sent, and bye! 

submitted by The Sesquipedalian, age Venerable, The Myrth Bibliotheca
(July 14, 2023 - 7:25 pm)
Sorry this isn't that great either...

The teacher was young. It was the first thing Benjamin "Jam" James noticed as he walked into the biology classroom. Hippo, who was his Reaching Your Full Majikal Potential, or RYFMP, teacher (they called him "hippo" because when he had first told them he could "hyptonize," the whole class thought he said "hippotize", and it stuck. Jam usually didn't call people by other names, certainly not teachers behind the back, but this one just made sense, and so whenever he thought of Mr. Watson, his brain now gave him "hippo", till he'd eventually given up trying to correct it), had seemed at least 45, and so Jam was expecting the new teacher to be around 40, even 30 years old, too! But, no. Mr. Altair Renike - "call me 'Tairey' or 'Alt'" - must have been only around a mere 20 years! What he lacked in years he made up for in enthusiasm, though, and Jam found himself smiling throughout the whole class besides himself. He wasn't used to young teachers, where he was from in the town of Edesier, experience and time gave you your teaching degree. The youngers who wanted to be teachers were made off as fools who knew nothing. Mr. Altair (Jam felt weird calling him as he suggested, and instead had settled for a compromise) soon changed that view. His lively, energetic nature brought fun to the classroom even as he demonstrated his vast knowledge of Myrth biology. At the end of the class, he took out a bag, ancient and falling apart, and set it on the table. It rustled a bit, and the whole class leaned forward to see as Mr. Altair undid the buckles, holding up a squirmy creature. "Does anyone know what this is?" He asked. The class murmured replies of no, but Jam could feel his powers working. He could identify any creature, plant, or person even, as long as he had some knowledge of them, even if just their name, before. The creature was a bird, white with black markings around its neck, head, the tip of its beak, and a sandy-gray back, reddish orange legs and beak, and small. Very small. Jam gasped. It was a pip! An endangered shorebird near extinction because of habitat loss, and because beachgoers would tread on their eggs in the ground without a thought otherwise! Jam had never before seen one, and he marveled at the adorable ball of feathers now. “It’s a pip!”, he called out, just as Mr. Alrair was about to tell the answer. Mr. Altair looked at him in surprise. “That’s right,” he said. “This is a pip. It-“ just then, the bell for break rang and everyone made for the door, eager to get out of class (no matter how fun it was). Jam was about to leave too when Mr. Altair called his name. “How did you know about the pip?”, he asked. Jam shifted uncomfortably, “My identification abilities?” He answered meekly. Something about Mr. Altair’s gaze pinned him to the ground. It wasn’t unfriendly, exactly, but it was certainly unusual. The look suddenly passed, as if a cloud just momentarily blocking the sun. “Oh, I suspected something else…” said Mr. Altair, letting Jam go. He shivered. On the walk to the main lounge, Jam puzzled over the look. Something about it had seemed eerily familiar… yet he couldn’t quite put his finger on it… 

In the shadows, a figure watched him go. Slowly, it turned and entered the classroom. The door slammed close with an ominous shut that rattled the whole building…
submitted by NEWPART,SLOTSLEFT, age Bad, sry, The Sesquipedalian
(September 5, 2023 - 5:57 pm)
submitted by NewPartOut,SlotsLeft, age If u want, The Sesquipedalian
(September 5, 2023 - 7:10 pm)
submitted by Top please!
(September 10, 2023 - 5:59 pm)
submitted by Top please!
(September 10, 2023 - 6:00 pm)
submitted by Top please!
(September 10, 2023 - 6:00 pm)

I feel like I'm not writing that well here, does anyone have any writing tips and/or constructive criticism on my pieces already out that would make them better? Please don't be afraid to say anything, I want reading this to be as enjoyable as possible for you all!

submitted by Writing tips please!, age It’s Ses, Constructive Criticism
(September 10, 2023 - 6:04 pm)

Okay, so writing tips...

First of all, don't be too hard on yourself. Writing isn't very easy despite the fact that it's so fUn, and everyone is at a different stage in the process. So don't worry about how "good" it is. Just write for yourself :) I do appreciate that you are open to improvements, but don't be too hard on yourself.

I'd suggest that you break up your paragraphs into smaller paragraphs, to make the story easier to read. And perhaps you don't need to keep all of the thoughts in parentheses. I also tend to use parentheses in stories a lot, but when they're inserted in the midst of a sentence they can make the actual sentence hard to follow. Lastly, I hear a lot of teachers who suggest "to show not tell." Showing is using more description. For example, you said "Mr. Altair looked at him in surprise," which is telling. If you wanted to show, you could explain what Mr. Altair looked like. Did he stop in between words? Did he freeze? Did his eyebrows go up? Try to do this at appropriate moments, to reveal character traits or describe settings (I say this because there is such a thing as too much showing, too little telling, and that can bore some readers).

Good luck! I think you're doing great so far. I'm going to find some time to read through this soon. It sounds interesting :D

submitted by Lyric w/ tips, age Excluded, @Celine
(September 11, 2023 - 10:24 pm)

Those are good tips, I'll keep them in mind. Thanks Lyric!

submitted by Celine@Lyric thx! :), age Thanks!!, A paper and pen
(September 13, 2023 - 1:12 pm)
submitted by I, person who posted, hereby top this thread
(September 28, 2023 - 4:11 pm)

Sooo.. I've been totally neglecting this.. I was wondering if anyone's still interested?

submitted by The Sesquipedalian, Master Procrastinator
(October 3, 2023 - 10:19 pm)

Heck, I totally am! but if you are having trouble, don't do it if you feel uncomfortable about it!

submitted by Hawkstar
(October 8, 2023 - 3:17 pm)

Oh thanks! Yeah... I've kinda been having trouble sticking to my promises lately (like our chat ackk sry) so Ig I may be taking a break from this for now and just finishing some other time.. who knows it's not even I don't have time just been feeling lazy for no reason whatsoever.. :/

but yeah, thanks! :)

submitted by The Sesquipedalian, Falling aslee..zzzzz
(October 8, 2023 - 6:02 pm)