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New theme: You

New theme: You are from a different planet, and you have just arrived onto Earth. The first thing you see is a human.

You can make yourself any age, and/or gender. The human may be any age, race, and gender you want. You may put your adventure into a diary, dialouges, or scenes.

submitted by Choco, age here, 12
(January 25, 2011 - 3:51 pm)

Parfana is far from the sun.  The planet gets a total of three hours of weak sunlight a day.  The finders of our planet installed extremely large lights in the sky, over big cities and farm fields.  This is how civilization continues on Parfana.  My family lived in a city, so we became used to fake sun.  I always felt sorry for those who lived in the country, because they lived mostly in darkness.  Thankfully, Parfana is surrounded by eight moons, so night time isn’t actually dark.  At Learning, or as you call it here, ‘school’, my teacher told us that the lack of sun caused our skin to be white.  Sometimes, I feel anger towards those here on Earth.  They’ll do whatever possible to have tan skin, when on Parfana, we were just lucky we survived. 

 

 [[okay, I know I'm switching tenses alot here, but am I doing it right??  Parfana still exists, so I feel I should use present tense... but I'm not sure.  Help?]]

submitted by R~D~, age 14, Parfana :D
(January 30, 2011 - 11:40 pm)

@RD You could say that that was a diary entry... :)

Oh and I don't know how much this will be like a diary entry. I'm being bad and putting in dialogue.

 

I went to a beach today. I quite prefer the ones on my planet. They have more shade. People here lie on the beach on weird shining mats. I believe they want a tan. Does that matter? I do not think it does. People looked at me weirdly when I walked into the water with my long tunic on. It felt so good to dig my feet into the cool sand and have water run over me. I took my long brown hair down from  my head and it fell down to my ankles. I don't know why the people here don't enjoy this beauty as much as I do. A little girl in a swim suit looked at me and said something about an angel to her mother. Her mother scolded her for some reason and smiled at me. At least someone has been nice to me. I heard the voice of my brother,Pika and noticed him talking to some girls. "Yeah! That's my sister over there. Padma Parvarti, I just call her Padma. So, do you want to take a swim?" The girls giggled and kept talking to him. My crazy brother. I suddenly ran up to him and hung on his shoulder. The girls looked at me and one taller one said: "You went in there with a dress? What about a bathing suit?" I answered hotly to their astonishment." Well I believe the bathing suits  you're wearing are to short." The girls rolled their eyes and walked away from my brother. He yelled at me and I walked off the beach. Now I'm sitting on a small bench waiting for Pika to get me.

 

The captcha thing says Pody: Potty? Does it need to go potty? 

submitted by Padma Parvarti, age 14, Earth
(January 31, 2011 - 12:09 pm)

So when I opened my eyes and found I lay in a room with two tan people, I picked up the closest item next to me, which happened to be a glass of water, and chucked it across the room.  It hit a wall with a sickening crash and small glass pieces rained down on the floor.  I heard a gasp, but I had already pulled the blankets made of a soft fabric I had never felt before over my head. 

                A woman spoke in a soft tone. “Zack, who is she?  What do you want us to do with her?”  I couldn’t believe that I’d finally be able to put to use all those years of studying the English language for Learning. 

                “Mom, I told you I don’t know.”  It was him.  It was his voice, the one that had asked me to stay with him.  The one that had said, “Crap, don’t faint again.”  Whatever that means.  “She fainted on the beach and I helped her.  Did you want me to just leave her there?” 

                “God, no, Zack.  You did the right thing.  She’s obviously not from around here.  Where do you find such white skin?”  The woman asked.

                “Parfana.”  I sat up.  The two froze when they heard my voice.  “I come from Parfana.”  My voice sounded high, and so much sweeter and stronger than either of theirs.  My Parfanite accent caused me to click on the letter ‘c’. 

                My eyes quickly took in detail I had failed to notice when I broke the glass.  Gray streaked through the woman’s brown hair.  She wore denim pants and a shirt of such an obnoxious color and pattern I had to close my eyes to keep strange feelings down.  She had a few wrinkles, just like the Elders of Parfana. The Elders were all who reached age fifty, which was an accomplishment on my planet because disease and crazed, ferocious animals constantly pestered civilization.  The woman sat in a dark green chair in the corner, and he stood next to her, his hands in the pockets of his plaid shorts, apparently used for swimming.  I lay on a couch wrapped in leather.  Parfana’s furniture was all made of stone.  Trees did not grow on Parfana, though I learned about them in Learning.  But Parfana’s home to Stone Mountain, made purely of rock.  The founders of Parfana developed a machine to cut through the stone to make houses and furniture for their people. 

                I guess you could say Parfanites are far smarter than those here on Earth.  Maybe our brains are programmed different.  I don’t know.  But as proof, humans didn’t even know Parfana existed, yet a Parfanite like myself was able to travel to Earth.  Pretty high-tech. 

                At Learning, the teacher told the class that humans called us aliens.  I liked the sound of the name, but the teacher claimed it was offensive. And as I lay in that bed, I wasn’t sure if I was a secret.  If humans were supposed to know about me, about Parfana.  If I should be telling these people.  But curiosity won over.

                “My planet is at war with Egan.  My parents sent me here so I would be safe.”  I stood, still wearing my white tunic, woven of white grastis, a material somewhat similar to grass.  My hair was still arranged in the intricate design on the top of my head.  It took my mother a short time to get the job done, but the result was thrilling.  Little squares, less than, a, ah, centimeter (an Earth term of measurement), covered my head.  Each square had a white bead in the middle. 

                I crossed my arms over my chest in a sign of greeting.  The woman and Zack stared. 

               

               

               

submitted by R~D~, age 14, WA
(January 31, 2011 - 4:13 pm)

We will reveal ourselves on Tuesday.

submitted by Choco, age 12, here
(January 31, 2011 - 7:40 pm)

Padma Parvarti is me! I can't wait for the next theme!

submitted by Padma Parvarti, age 14, Earth
(February 1, 2011 - 10:07 am)

Sorry, I just noticed that my post said Padma Parvarti is me. Obviously me could be anybody. Padma Parvarti= Elizabeth M.

submitted by Padma Parvarti, age 11, Earth
(February 1, 2011 - 10:09 am)

Ingred is ZB <3 percy+potter :D Sorry I didn't post that much, I was busy this week, so, what's the new theme gonna be?

submitted by Ingred/ZB
(February 1, 2011 - 1:31 pm)

*Waits for New Theme*

submitted by Elizabeth M , age 11, Germany
(February 2, 2011 - 12:59 pm)

R~D~ was....... ME!!!  :)  I'll try to be secretive next time. hehe

submitted by R~D~/R~D~ :D, wa
(February 2, 2011 - 3:17 pm)

*looks at invisible watch* *waits for theme*

submitted by Elizabeth M , age 11, Germany
(February 3, 2011 - 12:54 am)