Poetry Contest

Chatterbox: Pudding's Place

Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

Oh, my gosh. This is so good.

Yeah, definitely toast. 

submitted by Kitten
(February 1, 2019 - 7:17 pm)

Well.

I thought I had a good chance of winning this round. Now I'm trying for second place :)

But seriously, this poem is amazing and it pulled on my heartstrings and I maybe even cried a little. If this is a real person, give them a hug for me. 

submitted by Stardust, Ubiquitous
(February 2, 2019 - 4:59 pm)

Wow. Abi...thats amazing. I'm lost for words. 

submitted by Claaws, Class 2020
(February 2, 2019 - 11:53 pm)

M'kay so I suck at poerty but I want to get better soooo have a horrible excuse for a submission. This one's directed towards girls:

~

I know you.

I hope you know that too.

You who listened to my rants.

One at a time, we borrowed each other's pants

After church in our dresses

One hiding the other's bareness with 'yes's

That always followed a 'Can I borrow these?'

Then playing Cops and Thieves

With our legs properly covered.

I know you,

I wish you knew that.

After all we've been through,

I'm still here for you.

Tell me about your Him,

Whisper his personality while lights dim.

Smile with me once again,

Together we'll reign

Over imaginary pixies

and palaces of sticks.

Just don't push me away

Just because we're both changing

(Not pants this time)

Please tell me there's that part of you left-

~~

Now for guys:

~

'Hey, wanna come over?'

'Yeah, sure!'

'Cool, what are we going to play?'

'Knights!'

Those were easy times...

Times of shining armor and speaking in rhymes...

Of searching for Camelot

As 'Sirs Lancelot'...

It's not so easy now.

Nothing seems to flow.

Being popular doesn't matter,

And no, you aren't getting fatter.

I'm glad we're still close.

You're still my 'Friend Best Most!'

We didn't speak right then,

It was all 'Fight or Flight' then.

I remember we chose the former

Every single time.

Fighting dragons and saving maids

But now we're into Pokemon Raids.

What's wrong with that?

I don't see why you're nervous.

You were always the brave one,

Standing up to the drunk man's son.

He'd laugh in your face,

Tell you 'Watch your place',

But you'd never let him hurt anyone.

I want to do that for you, brother.

Get you away from this smothering life,

Maybe to the woods sometime.

I only have one more thing to say:

'Hey, you wanna come over?'

~~

*C R I N G E* 

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(February 4, 2019 - 6:17 pm)

Okay, I'm never going to submit a poem if I don't just write one right now. This hasn't had any editing, as I'm writing it on the spot...

butterflies in my stomach

hands clenched

biting my lip

my worry is disrupted by a bing!

scramble for my phone

open the email

it's from you

you, who can cheer me in the darkness

you, who knows when i need support

you, who remembers my complaints

and answers them

my heart is lifted

i begin to laugh

you have sent me a picture of yourself

grinning

eyes wide

funny face

my worries are forgotten

i prepare, confident again

writing a reply in my head

you have made me win today 

submitted by Kitten
(February 4, 2019 - 7:49 pm)

forever friend

hey, you're my forever friend, you know that?

we've known each other since the beginning

("no," you say, "because you're older")

("yes," I say, "because I don't care")

and we fully plan on getting old together-

("oh, and didn't we pretend we'd lived our past life together? in celestialland- remember that?")

(and I laugh, because I was six when I made that up, and I was weird)

we were young, and nothing was complicated and now we are still young, but things are harder

and stuff has changed, but we've stayed friends

and hey, I know you have other friends

I have others too

(and I could have written a poem about any of them, but not this one)

(and I didn't, I'm writing a poem about you)

(that has to mean something, but I don't know what)

my best friend is jimmy, he goes to my school

and i hang out with sophie, and miguel, and leroy, and irving, and jillian, and emma, and the rest-

and your best friend is bridget

(at least I think- tell me if I'm wrong)

but I don't know-

we've always drawn a line

between home and school

school and home

(home meaning the neighborhood)

(perhaps those are the same thing)

and, well, you know

someone else might be my best friend

but you're my friend forever

submitted by Blue Moon, age 12, Here
(February 4, 2019 - 10:56 pm)

Today's the deadline!! I'll be posting results soon, once I finish judging...

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 13, My Imaginary Dance Studio
(February 7, 2019 - 8:03 pm)

I will BET YOU... It's Abi.

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(February 7, 2019 - 8:35 pm)

Ok, so I had a really hard time deciding since ALL of them are absolutely amazing. In the end, here are the final results!

Honorable Mention: This took me forever, I had so many of you that I wanted to put, but it's......... Kitten!!! I love it because it represents what I think friends are amazing for. It's very pretty.

3rd Place: Soren Infinity! I love it. especially the line you/leaned in with a cupped hand, your/soul floating in midair for a moment before/it slinks into my ear.

2nd Place: Abigail!! It's beautifully sad, in a strange way. It's so meaningful.

And...... 1stPlace is.... Stardust!!! I LOVED it, I loved everything about it it's beautiful.

I tried not to write too much about each one because I'm not very good at commenting and am afraid to mess it up. And there are the results! 

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 13, My Imaginary Dance Studio
(February 7, 2019 - 8:39 pm)

Congratulations, everyone! There were so many good poems this round.

submitted by Leafpool, age No, not a cat
(February 8, 2019 - 3:38 pm)

Congratulations, Stardust! I loved your poem, you did an amazing job! I'm excited to see what you'll come up with for the next round!

(And thank you to everyone who said nice things about my poem, it means a lot <33)

submitted by Abigail, age Old enough, Inside my head
(February 8, 2019 - 7:05 pm)

Next theme please?

submitted by @Stardust
(February 11, 2019 - 12:01 am)

@Stardust... are you coming?

Sorry if some of you guys are disappointed with the results (covers eyes) 

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 13, My Imaginary Dance Studio
(February 11, 2019 - 6:39 pm)
submitted by Please wait I promis, age Stardust, e I'll tell you tomorrow
(February 11, 2019 - 8:36 pm)

No problem XP

Edwy. 

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 13, My Imaginary Dance Studio
(February 11, 2019 - 11:08 pm)