Regular poetry thread

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Regular poetry thread

Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)

This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!

submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
submitted by Topethyst
(March 17, 2023 - 3:53 pm)

You found the Poetry Egg -- Congrats!

to you I shall tip my hat!

To claim another point for your score,

post a rhyme bragging that of eggs you found one more

and we'll see what the other competitors think of that!

submitted by The Egghead, age omelet, limerick, ireland
(March 21, 2023 - 2:43 pm)
submitted by top
(March 21, 2023 - 2:44 pm)

There's not much to this old building during the day.

Faint scratches and cracks, paint frozen mid-drip on the walls

Just plaster and cardboard and sawdust, dull and plain

With footprints and dreams and old tape (mostly peeled off, but still there)

Layering up on the scuffed planks that we call the floor,

All left behind and lonely in the end.

The ceiling ascending so high

That the beams that hold it melt into sharp shadow,

Pipes and wires and who-knows-what-else all showing.

Names of long-gone people etched into the soft surfaces of the corridors. 

It really is an old, dusty building.

One that gets drafty in the winter,

But is somehow always a bit too clammy when it comes down to it.

That's all during the day, though,

Of course.

 

Yes, because during the night 

Oh, during the night, this rickety old theatre comes to life,

Darling, you ought to see it, 

The way the cold dark hall hiss and sigh

The backstage a snake reawakened and ready to strike.

Everyone feels it in their veins, in the dim stage lights

Buried under the veil of the wings,

Kept safe and secure by the panels that boarder the stage itself --

Everyone becomes one with the old building,

Our breathes become one, long, rattling song of life;

We feel the names etched onto our brows,

We become larger than the audience themselves, swallow them

As we relish in the breeze that breaks the hot, stagnant air within,

We bend and flow with every creak and step and 

Raise our arms with the drawing of the curtains, each

Fallen word a truth we are entwined with.

Each light exposing a truth deep within us,

Cues we didn't know we knew triggering a reaction all at once. 

Indeed, we become one with the stories we tell,

The building and characters and fellow people we love,

Darling, you really out to see our theatre at night;

My, oh my, the way it does come alive. 

submitted by Jaybellsa, Lost in a Dream*
(March 23, 2023 - 8:52 pm)
Seventeen/Ouroboros
Here you are, at the end of another year,
Another cycle of that uncontrollable wheel.
You had such a good day,
So why do you feel so hollow?
Where has your heart gone?
You must’ve lost it long ago,
Somewhere in the infinite abyss of time.
Who do they think you are?
Who are you to warrant 
All the songs and congratulations?
Because you are no dancing queen.
You are just a child.
A child that died the summer of 2018,
When you tasted blood for the first time
And cried, because the bugs and dragons,
Strawberry ice cream and the hideout underneath the playground,
Weren’t yours anymore.
Now you carry that corpse within you,
A rotten and bleeding thing.
How many times have you died?
How many millenia have you lived before you even had these lungs?
How many daughters, how many sons have you been,
Shedding skin and layers of your heart?
You never did anything to deserve all of this.
No, the violence of existence was never your fault,
Endlessly consuming yourself.
submitted by Sterling, age they/fae, lost in a fantasy world
(March 25, 2023 - 7:43 pm)

That went up super quick, tysm Admins!

submitted by Sterling, age they/fae, lost in a fantasy world
(March 25, 2023 - 8:04 pm)

As someone on the spectrum

I just want to say

Words are so much easier to read

(Even with dyslexia) 

Than minute facial expression

And changes in posture.

Words always say what they mean,

And even implications

Are in plain text for all to see. 

~~~~~~~~~~~

I might add more later, but this just popped into my head. 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(April 1, 2023 - 1:36 am)

mood

submitted by Wolfy
(April 4, 2023 - 8:45 am)

No longer is there a girl

Upon the ivory tower;

No longer stands White Lotus

Amidst the swamplands;

No longer is Hope allowed to shine,

Not when you've fallen this far. 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(April 4, 2023 - 6:58 am)
And so we reconcile
Our unanswered words,
The shaking of my hands 
As I write what should be left unsaid
And the silence that follows.
That stone tied to my heart
That dragged me into immeasurable depths
Is gone now, and I am released
From that truly crushing weight.
But the salt and wind still cut my skin
As I raise my head above the waves
Only to find a storm,
A placid tempest made of silent screams
And my own tears,
The tears of someone
Who wants only to be held,
To feel another heartbeat beside mine
Under a warm and gentle sky
And know that they are complete.
And I want you more than anything,
But love has always been a mirage to me.
I thought I was flying, 
But it was only a dream as I sank even deeper.
And now I can breathe again,
If only for keeping my composure.
I wish I never spoke to you.
I wish I could simply keep dreaming.
submitted by Sterling, age they/fae, lost in a fantasy world
(April 4, 2023 - 11:30 am)

I'm not on this thread pretty much at all, but wow. This makes me want to write more poety. Y'all are amazing.

submitted by WiLdSoNg
(April 4, 2023 - 7:57 pm)

here's a poem-ish-thing I made:

 

you humans, you pride yourself on your accomplishments

and some are admittedly impressive, I suppose.

but you never seem to be able to see

from the perspective of the ones you see as inferior.

 

for instance, can you humans fathom the delight

of riding the airborne wings of a weightless sparrow?

do you humans ever stop to attempt to imagine

what it would be like to see a pack of wolves on the hunt? 

no, not just see- but be a part of- that thrilling chase?

 

you humans, you dismiss us as wild monsters, or tame servants, or pests to be swatted

but do you ever think that we might see you the same way?

or even- as equals?

no, you think, they can't even reason, they don't even have hearts. 

that may be true.

but what about the humans that killed one another for sport and fun? did they have hearts?

 

you see? do you see now?

perhaps, perhaps not.

you are human, after all.

consider this the moral of the story,

the point of the poem, the lesson I'm teaching.

don't jump to conclusions and drown in prejudice,

and don't take things for granted at first glance. 

submitted by a poet, I suppose, age infinite, dancing in the wilderness
(April 5, 2023 - 8:43 pm)

oooh, I love this! I like how it's written in italics, like it's being whispered, which makes it more mysterious. It kinda reminds me of the animals in Kyngdom.

submitted by Scuttles
(April 6, 2023 - 1:26 pm)

Your words

Cut right through to the heart,

Each movement you make

(Such is the grace that you wield) 

Steals my breath away,

Amd it doesn't make sense

But those eyes

Oh those dark eyes,

They get me every time.

And air gets knocked out of me

Each time your voice dips

Into what I can only describe

As the cold, grainy embrace

Of the bottom of the ocean;

And for some strange reason

Every time I look at you,

My mind melts into ways to turn

Your figure, your every gesture and quirk

Into a piece of art on its own.

Even that could never do you justice, though.

Even that would never capture all

The wonder that I've seen. 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(April 6, 2023 - 9:18 pm)

@Scuttles- thanks for commenting on my last poem! I really appreciated it :D

 

here's another poem: 

 

Dancing on the Wind 

you poor humans, you're chained to the ground

forced to endure the ice and heat

when warm tropics or cool retreats

await just out of your clawless reach. 

 

if only you had wings to give you speed,

feathers to protect from bitter cold,

alert senses to protect from danger,

a warm, beating heart to protect from hate. 

 

come join us in your mind's dreaming eye

dream what it is to soar on the clouds

what it is to swoop and dive

what it is to dance on the wind

submitted by a poet, I suppose, age forever, dancing on the wind
(April 7, 2023 - 11:49 am)