Regular poetry thread

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Regular poetry thread

Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)

This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!

submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)

I think that poetry is the way

buckbrush blossoms smell like freshly buttered popcorn

when they bloom in the spring.

and,

I think poetry is how

tiny flowers bloom in the cracks of my sidewalk,

and how the ants create paths that weave around them.

poetry is how

sinking your teeth into a fresh orange

feels exactly like the sun on a warm summer day,

or perhaps,

how a sip of hot chai is exactly like

autumn leaves skidding across a sidewalk.

I think poetry is the way

I would tell you every single secret hidden in the depths of my heart

except for the one titled "how I feel about you"

no,

poetry is the way they link their pinkies beneath the table,

as if they're constantly promising,

no,

pledging their forever and ever love. 

poetry is tear-smeared mascara,

and the gentle hands that wipe it away.

poetry is flower crowns braided into hair,

and handmade mittens,

and the smell of freshly baked bread.

poetry is the way I never noticed the stars

until I went to the city

and they disappeared.

and, 

poetry is the fog curling around the tip-top of a mountain,

and the swirling patterns cream makes in tea

right after you pour it in.

poetry is the symphony of summer insects that sing every night,

and the smell of jasmine flowers

creeping through my tattered window screen.

poetry is summer rainstorms,

and hot pink rainboots.

or maybe,

everything is poetry,

if the right person is paying attention to it at the right time.

submitted by peppermint, age 15, thinking
(June 29, 2023 - 11:29 pm)

first off, pepperminttt!! hi!! how've you been?

oh gosh, i always love your poetry, and these are no exception. they're absolutely gorgeous, and the imagery is so poignant. i think the first one is my favorite -- i just love the nature imagery, and i find the last lines really relatable -- but they're all spectacular. you're such a good writer <333

submitted by pangolin, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(June 30, 2023 - 6:03 pm)

A buncha novel nonsense poems since I love them!:    Also, @admins, is it easier for you if I post a few shorter posts or one longer post

 

went to the bar that elephant did

went to the bar for a drink

went to the bar with a suit and a hat

who would notice you think

went to the bar dressed with a rose

went to the bar to have fun

went to the bar that elephant did

what a funny one

 

and

 

you stare at me

glossy-eyed

never blinking.

 

you stare at me

glassy-eyed

never thinking

 

you stare at me

dead-eyed

till I turn you away

 

and

 

the lion went out for a glass of milk

and in search of some cherry pie

went to the grasslands

went to the sky

 

the lion went out for a glass of juice

and in search of some steaming chai

went out to the tundras

went to fly

 

the lion went out for a glass of cocoa

and in search of some bread on rye

went to the village

and was finally satisfied

 

but when the people came back to find a lion in their house

in their fridge

on their couch

they screamed and drove the lion away

why? asked the lion, why must I?

have to settle with bloody prey

like the other lions eat.

why can't I

be more dignified?

but alas it wasn't to be. 

 

and (wow, idk where all this poetry is suddenly coming from)

 

the squirrel ran down the street

in search for something to eat

something to fill their thirst

 

the squirrel ran past the hot dog

vendor and the burger man

well, that's a first

 

the squirrel ran and ran

till they saw a somber man

and feasted on his secrets 

 

and

 

Mama ant told Little ant to shower

but I don't want to Little ant whined

well, too bad, said Mama ant, because you're gonna have to

and then she took Little ant by the antenna

and dumped him in the tub.

It's for your own good

she said.

 

And I guess I shall announce this again, I used to be Celine but now I'm going by CelineBurning Bright! 

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age As Needed, The FireMist Sea
(June 30, 2023 - 7:33 pm)

@peppermint, these poems are all amazing!! They're so poetic, even without rhymes and regular rhythms, and they're such vivid, heartfelt snapshots of life; the way you include all the tiny details from daily life, like the line "tiny flowers bloom in the cracks of my sidewalk," is so pretty and just makes the whole poem so cozy and beautiful <3 And then the way the poems conclude; it really makes you think and it's unexpected, yet it feels just right. Your poetry is seriously some of the best I've ever read <3

submitted by Poinsettia, a sea of crystal waters
(June 30, 2023 - 8:34 pm)

Music

Music playing in my head

Pounding in my ears

My lips hum the tune

And my feet start to tap

The music playing, playing, playing

The music pounding, pounding, pounding

Like everything will be alright

When the tides grow strong

And the mountains become steep

The music keeps playing, playing, playing

When the storms grow vast

And the buildings collapse

The music keeps pounding, pounding, pounding

Like everything will be alright


submitted by Moon Wolf, age lunaryears, A Celestial Sky
(June 30, 2023 - 7:47 pm)

wrote this a while ago in response to the Canadian wildfire smoke but i guess i never posted it~

wildfire smoke

 

open your eyes,

look at the world around you, which

is a nonsensical dream even though

you are awake.

(there will be no waking up

from this nightmare that is

real life.)

stare at the apocalyptic horizon,

at the smoke obscuring the iconic

new york city skyline.

(watch civilization crumble 

before your eyes.)

now the world — and our future —

is veiled in a vividly orange haze,

and is 

burning burning burning

and you are still asleep.

will 

you

wake 

up

before it all turns to ashes 

and smoke?

submitted by pangolin, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(June 30, 2023 - 8:00 pm)

Woah. @Pangolin, that's beautiful! I love how you use parenthesis and I especially love the line       "(watch civilization crumble/before your eyes)"! Is it ok if I write a poem inspired by this? Because the lines: the orange haze on the horizon/the orange blaze below/the uncertain future and/ civilization in shambles all/because/of/you     or something like that are just begging me to be written! But it's fine if you don't want me to also

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age As Needed, The FireMist Sea
(July 1, 2023 - 2:11 am)

Thank you! Yeah, of course you can write a poem inspired by this! The lines you shared sound really cool. Once you write the poem, I hope you post it here because I'd love to read it! <333

submitted by pangolin, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(July 1, 2023 - 7:12 pm)

Oh, I didn't see your reply before now, yay, thank you! I might write multiple because there are lots of different things running around in my head rn! Umm... how bout:

 

Civilization burning to the ground 

the blaze so bright it could be another star

in the universe 

ever expanding.

Out of the ashes 

Hope is reborn. 

 

and

 

It all starts with one

One person

One company

One cigarette

Still smoking.

It only takes one

To raze it to the ground.

 

and

 

The butterfly

Spreads its wings

Blowing away the smoke.

Blowing,

Blowing,

As it is surrounded

Until it is surrounded,

And falls to the ground,

Limp

Its wings fluttering in the breeze.

You think it is dead

But is it?

 

and, just because:

 

Mr. Alligator

Crawled out of the swamp

And watched an ember drift.

Past the blades of grass,

Past the trunks of oak

Past the mossy greens 

To a pile of twigs.

Mr. Alligator shook his head, shaking out the water

Drenching the ember before it could land,

And set out to work

Not knowing what he had just done.

 

and (sorry, last one)

 

The city is glowing

The wind is blowing

The fire is spreading,

Spreading.

 

The people are shouting 

Nobody's doubting

The fire is spreading,

Spreading.

 

It turns the world on its head

And nothing looks the same

Because the fire is spreading around the whole globe.

It's spreading,

it's spreading

Across the whole globe

It's spreading,

it's spreading

Through the whole world

And nothing will ever look the same again.

 

The fire is spreading. 

 

I'm not certain whether that last one is about a fire and tragedy and disaster or the news and secrets being revealed and stuff... 

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age As Needed, The FireMist Sea
(July 1, 2023 - 9:33 pm)

Wow, these are all so good! I can see how they were inspired by my poem, but they all have their own meaning and tone, and I think that's really cool. The last one's my favorite (though they're all good) because the rhymes are really well done and I find the repetition of "spreading" to be very effective -- both in the rhythm of the poem, and emphasizing the message.

submitted by pangolin, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(July 2, 2023 - 6:28 am)

This is such a good poem!! It just encapsulates everything I feel about the wildfires and how people aren't reacting the way they should, plus it's so heartfelt and poetic... The imagery and the way you use parentheses and line spacing are really effective, too. I love the lines "now the world — and our future — /is veiled in a vividly orange haze,/and is/burning burning burning/and you are still asleep." But the whole poem is really well written <3

submitted by Poinsettia, age immortal, a sea of crystal waters
(July 1, 2023 - 8:00 pm)

Aah thank you so much! <3

submitted by pangolin, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(July 2, 2023 - 6:22 am)

Ode to the spider

Oh, you eight legged,

Hairy,

Sometimes scary arachnids.

Even just a common gray,

Everyone stops

To get out of your way.

Oh, and your web, always flowing.

In the morning, dew-speckled, glowing.

I love your webs construction,

Saving us from destruction.

I wish people would stop and stare,

Entranced by your be-au-ti-ful glare,

But no, they just walk past (very fast). 

 

 

submitted by Cloud Bunny, age forever, Up in the Clouds
(July 1, 2023 - 1:16 pm)

@Cloud Bunny, beautiful!! And I love that quick rhyme at the end, so true! I wish people would stop to look at spiders more, they're so amazing and there's so much we can learn from them! And because Ig I'm going around echoing people's poems (well, only just Pangolin's so far, if I'm allowed?), could I write a poem inspired by yours too pls? Something like: The glistening web/dotted with dew/your work of art//I wish that more than a few/would see//would appreciate//but you don't care, do you?/as long as it does its job,/you feast.     Or something like that, if I get your permission, I'll try to write a much better poem than that!

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age As Needed, The FireMist Sea
(July 1, 2023 - 9:14 pm)

Nvm, Pangolin, thank you! I see your response now, I posted the poems below it!

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age As Needed, The FireMist Sea
(July 1, 2023 - 9:35 pm)