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Regular poetry thread

Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)

This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!

submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)

I wrote this in school today! The prompt was to write a ten-line poem describing what balance is or could be without using the word balance. (it became a bit of a social commentary.)

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A boy twirls on a line stretched above a swamp of greedy eyes,

following him as he spins and pivots.

The brown drinks up her birthday surprise -

she's always wanted to be in the circus.

At home, her family can barely scrape by.

The blue is fixated with a dry gaze,

one that comes from seeing the same movie too many times.

This isn't as good as the Cirque du Soleil he saw last week.

The boy swivels and whirls,

his well-practiced equilibrium reflected in the demographic far below. 

submitted by St.Owl, In The Subtext
(January 29, 2019 - 5:45 pm)

Here's the one that I wrote with Soren's prompt.

journey

let's begin our journey

to the farthest ends of the earth

and beyond that,

in search of all the time that we

have forgotten, lost, tossed carelessly

away in a spell of reckless,

happy joy

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Also, I wrote a poem about the snow. I don't know if the formatting at the end will work....

in praise of the snow

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when it snows

at night the city is

lighter, somewhat, as streetlights reflect

off of the white, that blankets the ground and

sky. it seems like everything is whiter

and prettier, as the imperfect/perfect snow

covers all impurities completely for a little while

at least.

i lie awake, resting on my elbows on my pillow,

staring out the window, as the snow falls gently

down. in a warm cocoon of blankets, safe inside.

peacefully breathing in and out and imagining

tomorrow, filled with sledding and mouthfuls of snow.

 

"the frost on my window is like 

fractured glittering splinters of diamonds"

i will be asleep

soo

submitted by Leafpool, age No, not a cat
(January 29, 2019 - 7:04 pm)

I recently read one of Leeli's poems from a few pages back and got inpired and wrote a poem from it. Would you mind if I posted it?

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 13, My Imaginary Dance Studio
(January 30, 2019 - 9:51 pm)

Ah, I inspired you? No, I don't mind at all; I'd love to read it!

submitted by Leeli
(January 31, 2019 - 11:30 am)

XD, yeah, I read your poem and was like, wow that's beautiful, and I took some inspiration/style wording from you.

Here's mine! I didn't think of a title yet, if anyone has any suggestions that would be great! Or any critiques or things like that.

You step onto the dance floor

Hesitantly, falteringly,

Practiced.

you try to move with the group

Together as one

none unique, All alike - 

their Heartbeats

their Pace

their Hair flips

their gum popping

their movie smiles

Clearing a path through the jealous crowd

you try to follow

They turn

Look you up and down

Size you up

And beckon graciously for you to join

To try your hand

But you - no darling, you are not like them

for you

your Heartbeat

your pace

your hair flips

your gum popping

your fake smile

Are ahead of the timing

For darling you are

Real

 

Have you finally realized

That life

Isn’t practiced?

that life

Isn’t paced?

that life

Isn’t choreographed?

That life

Isn’t contained?

 

And you step in front

Glance back

Then run ahead

And let the music take your hand

And set you

 

 

      Free

 

 

Eyes closed

Hair whipping

body twisting

Arms flowing

Feet tapping

Heart racing

 

And you finally

Let go 

And 

 

Breathe.

Dance.

Fly.

 

 

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 13, My Imaginary Dance Studio
(January 31, 2019 - 8:14 pm)

Whoa, that's very pretty. I really like it. I think my favorite line is, 'for darling you are/real'. It's also quite relatable.  

submitted by Leeli
(February 1, 2019 - 10:40 am)

Wrote a poem today from Abi's prompt, though I didn't use all the words, I liked how it turned out! 

dear time; 

i like to pretend that your mark on me 
is only skin deep— as if i could hold a pumice stone
under warm water and wash away the regret
but your scars have carved themselves deep within me 
black blood flows through my veins 
corrupting the balance within me 
look at my geography: where now should be 
remains you, hidden but at the same time
you are everywhere, and as hard as i try— 
i can never forget you— you are my toy tugboat in the 
middle of the lake, i will brave death to hold you 

in my hands one last time  

submitted by Sept
(February 3, 2019 - 12:19 am)

Sooooooo beautiful. I love this, Seppy <333

submitted by Bluebird
(February 4, 2019 - 12:27 am)

Gah, that's so prettyyy <3

submitted by Abigail, age Old enough, Inside my head
(February 9, 2019 - 11:41 pm)

overload

blurred noises chase their tails

back-to-forefront

like the slap of hopscotch soles—

a singer’s upward croon,

piano chords slammed past coherency,

clipped words, voices parceled into gibberish.

honey-bodied monster languishes on newspaper clippings:

“lexophile, one who has a love for words.”

my father crosses his arms,

tan to grey to pink-tinged frowns,

and his mouth spouts a car alarm (yet i’m the oversensitive one).

“to write with a broken pencil—”l

i’d love words more if they were quiet, i decide, and sink

into the blue belly of this sagging sofa,

a small fish going off the deep end

(perhaps if i sit here long enough the fabric will close over my head).

i’m not scared of drowning,

i do it every day.

french class, the bus, stranger’s living room.

drop a phone in water, put a phone in rice—

my operating system’s saturated with steam.

faulty hard drive, volume locked in high gear,

stupid bawling baby too weak to take a hit.

my ears fill up with water.

it’s too loud, i can’t see a thing.

is my bra too tight? i think i can’t

breathe again.

submitted by Abigail, age Old enough, Inside my head
(February 9, 2019 - 11:43 pm)

Waahahoww. That is SO cool. *waves hands incomprehensibly* The...words. All of it. It's so visual!

submitted by Leafpool, age No, not a cat
(February 10, 2019 - 2:14 pm)

That was indeed beautiful, I quite like the imagery, as well. Nice work.

submitted by Sierra-Estelle, age Currently?, A beautiful library
(February 16, 2019 - 2:15 pm)

This one doesn't have a title, I just really got into the flow-and-half-rhyming thing that it has.

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by the way i

was in the front all the time and

all the time, slipping

can i turn back time?

la

la la up in the 

front once upon a far-off

time

found, and lost, at once,

starry-eyed

when i look up at the sky,

i find the beauty of people's lives 

can we connect two more people

like puzzle pieces? another

set of friends to find

each other

let's act kind to

each other now

i know i

lied,

so forget you ever said it and join

your faithless hand in

mine 

--- 

submitted by Leafpool, age No, not a cat
(February 10, 2019 - 2:29 pm)

Oh, man, that's amazing! I love the half-rhyming style, it flows so well but still retains that loose, unstructured quality that free verse possesses. It's very dreamy and pretty, I just love it, especially the last few lines: "i know i/lied/so forget you ever said it and join/your faithless hand in/mine".

submitted by Abigail, age Old enough, Inside my head
(February 10, 2019 - 6:49 pm)

I wrote this a couple days ago, and it just stuck with me so much I had to post it. I had done this thing where I opened up the dictionary to random pages and had to choose a noun for myself from each page I landed on, and one or two adjectives. This is what came from it. (Clarification--I've never been in a situation like this.)

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untitled--

your ruined hands hold a pile of violet petals out to me; spanning a heap of fluttering softness that you offer to me like it'll kill you if i don't take it

picture-perfect, isn't it? you, trying so hard and me, feeling like an awful duplicate of myself, about to hurt you so badly

you must think this is the worst time of your entire life, but i, i feel like when, at 1 a.m., i tend to find a happy contentment. i hate that i feel like that and feel so ready to destroy your heart. but it just feels right       

?

am i behind a ruse of smiles? it must seem to you like i am ready to accept your flowers but i, obviously (to me at least) am not, at all

i can't bring myself to harden my countenance. i'm sorry if you're getting false hopes. i'm sorry

(i push away your flowers)

(you choke on your heart) 

submitted by Leafpool, age No, not a cat
(February 12, 2019 - 5:04 pm)