Chatterbox: Pudding's Place

Ski lodge: WinterWonderland

 

 

A crisp envelope, the color of cream with a picture of a swan on the seal, was in your palm. How you found it, you don’t remember, but you think it had something to do with ravens. An inky black feather was in your other hand. 

Hesitating slightly, you flip the envelope over to the address side, but nothing was written on it besides the words, Seasonal Greetings! You turn it back over, and break the seal. Sliding the letter out, you unfold it and read:

To whom it may concern,

That was a good start, you decided. The letter was for anyone.

To whom it may concern,

We are writing this letter to invite you (whoever you may be) to our ski lodge in WinterWonderland. You can be one of the ten guests we will be accepting! Our mansion is suited for company, and yet it is empty! So we invite you to come!

There is lots to do here. Sledding, ice skating, snowball fights, and of course, skiing. We hope you can make it! All you have to do is fill out the form below.
*Yours cordially, 

Swan and Raven

*No OC’s, AE’s, CAPTCHA’S, or pets. CBers only please! And as said above, TEN guests! Let it be noted that we are not responsible for lost items, paper cuts, or deaths. 

 

Well, just skip right over autumn, why don’t you?! But still, it sounds interesting… You search your pockets for a pen as you set the separate form on a flat rock so you can fill it out.

Form~

Name:

Pronouns:

Appearance:

Personality:

Roommate?:

Do you like snow?:

Hot chocolate or tea?:

Other:

Hey y’all! It’s me, Hawkstar. I know I’ve tried and failed with a couple ski lodges… I’m hoping that I will finish this one though. I have a pretty solid plot. Hope you join! This will start once I have the designated 10 CBers. Thanks! Byeee!

submitted by Swan and Raven
(November 18, 2023 - 10:20 am)

OHMYWOAHTHATWAS- I have a horrible feeling I'm gonna die cuz I'm doing WAY TOO MUCH INVESTIGATIVE WORK! Which I just realized haven't posted theories yet... but now actually I don't think them anymore, so- but I was WAY too tense reading that, jumping at every little thing, like ackk I'm gonna die rn I just KNOW it and this isn't even real but it FEELS LIKE IT IS :) this is awesome! The foreshadowing... wow! And take as long as you need to w/ the chat, as I said, I'm rly patient. I'll keep it topped! :) 

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age she/they(?, Hey! Not dead! :)
(December 17, 2023 - 1:21 am)

Thanks, you two, for your comments! I am SO sorry that this is so very late, but it turns out I am NOT on the computer as much as I thought I'd be during break. So here we are! It isn't super long but. Enjoy :)

Wildsong awoke with a pounding headache. She lay on a very comfortable surface, nice and squishy. Her mouth felt dry. She listened, hearing some movement near her. She slowly blinked open her eyes, which made her head pound harder. She shifted, and squinted through her headache around the room. It was her bedroom, and she was on her soft bed that the bedposts looked like trees, and leaves were embroidered on her covers.

“Hey,” said a soft voice. “How are you feeling?” 

Wildsong turned her head slightly, and her eyes found Swan. “My head hurts,” she croaked.

“I should think so,” Swan said sympathetically. “It looks like you were knocked in the head quite hard. Do you remember what happened?”

“We were in the attic, just exploring,” she mumbled. 

“We?” Swan asked. “Just you and Moon Wolf, right?”

“N-o, Celine too,” Wildsong said, slightly confused. Didn’t she see Celine?

Something flashed in Swan’s eyes, something like confusion and trepidation. But then her eyes turned sad, and she said, “Well, I’m sorry to say that Moon Wolf is gone, Wildsong. And Celine is missing.”

Wildsong’s eyes widened, and for a moment the headache faded. Moon Wolf, gone? Celine, missing? None of that sounded good. 

“It looks like something hit you in the head, you have quite a lump,”  Swan said, and Wildsong’s headache came rushing back.

“I don’t feel so good,” she mumbled, turning her head to look at Moon Wolf’s silvery bed that would never be occupied again. Her stomach churned.

“Here, drink this,” Swan put a cup to her dry lips. Wildsong drank the slightly sweet liquid, and then fell back into dark pain.

***

pangolin shivered. Well, actually, it was more of an earthquake. They were so cold, they shuddered violently as the wind whistled and howled, and a torrent of snow came from the sky. Looking at her shaking hands, pangolin saw that her hands looked almost purple in the dark night. 

Earlier that day, or maybe days ago, pangolin had been in the woods after the sleigh ride, just out for a quick walk, when someone had pounced on her, tied her up with her very own scarf, and dragged her somewhere. The person wasn’t very strong, and so it was slow moving. They had never caught sight of who it was, but their footsteps had been short and heavy. At some point, they’d stopped moving, dropped pangolin like a sack by a tree, and left. pangolin had worked for hours trying to untie the impossible knots, and by the time her hands and legs were free, and she could shove her hat out of her eyes, she was an ice cube and night was falling. 

Oh, how they wished they’d just gone in with the rest of the CBers to warm up with lunch. Now, pangolin was shaking and shivering and walking in the direction she thought the person had dragged her. She was so cold. pangolin could literally feel ice forming on her eyelids. Teeth rattled. Breath came out in invisible clouds, now that the snow was falling so hard. It was snowing so hard, and was so dark, pangolin could barely see through her frozen lashes. She definitely ran into several trees, and once she ran into at least the 16th tree, she didn’t rise from the snow to continue on. Wind continued to howl, but on the wind there was a scent carried. Smoke. pangolin rolled onto their stomach, tightened their thin sweater, and struggled up. Using their nose, pangolin staggered through the icy bite of snow and wind, until she saw a faint light up ahead. She went faster, and soon emerged in a clearing, with a mansion in the center. Lights twinkled from the windows, and she heard talking coming from the porch, where a propane heater was sitting between two people. pangolin staggered up to the steps, and slipped on the icy wood, falling to the snow.

“pangolin?!?!” someone gasped. 

“I’ll get help,” another voice said, followed by a door slamming and shouts.

Warm hands touched their face, and pangolin saw Seadragon looking worriedly down at them. pangolin panted, and then all consciousness faded away.

***

When Swan came out with BookGirl, all that was left to see was Seadragon holding a black feather covered in ice. “It was GloomyBear,” she said, handing the freezing feather to Swan, “but it doesn’t matter now. They’re both gone.”

 

Dead: 6 (Silver Crystal, amari, Endless Parodies, Moon Wolf, GloomyBear, pangolin)

Alive: 4 ( Wildsong, Seadragon, CelineBurningBright (missing or dead?), BookGirl) 

submitted by Swan and Raven, It's Hawkstar
(December 27, 2023 - 4:20 pm)

Oh no I'm dead! This ski lodge is really interesting so far. Especially how the murderer isn't only one person. Incredibly well written so far, @hawkstar!

submitted by Moon Wolf, age lunaryears, A Celestial Sky
(December 27, 2023 - 10:12 pm)

*blushes* Thanks, Moon Wolf, for your kind words :D

submitted by Swan and Raven, It's Hawkstar
(December 28, 2023 - 8:49 am)

Oh my gosh! We are dropping like flies! This is so good!

submitted by WiLdSoNg
(December 28, 2023 - 1:21 pm)

Woah!! Sorry I haven't been commenting as much as I usually do, but this lodge is so good! Can't believe six people are dead already. I love all the mystery and intrigue (the attic, the five star ski lodge comment, etc) and how you're building tension. Plus the detail of the feathers is really cool! Really can't wait to see what happens next!!

submitted by Silver Crystal, age Infinity, Milky Way
(December 28, 2023 - 10:27 pm)

OH NO I'M DEAD D:

sorry i haven't been commenting - i've barely had time to come on the CB lately, but i finally got around to catching up with this amazing ski lodge! :D

i love the writing in this part! the descriptions were really good (even if those descriptions were about myself dying XD), and i love how you're building tension and suspense through dilogue and details. i can't believe six people are dead :0

i don't really have any concrete theories about the murderer, but Seadragon seems a little suspicious? 

anyway, this is so good! can't wait for the next part :D 

submitted by pangolin, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(January 6, 2024 - 9:28 am)

Wow! Yes! What everyone else said! And hmm.. I don't even know myself if I'm missing or dead XD

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age ?*****?, Missing or Dead?
(January 7, 2024 - 5:11 am)
submitted by Day 2, Part 7
(December 27, 2023 - 4:20 pm)
submitted by Day 2, Part 7
(December 27, 2023 - 7:57 pm)