Fairytale RP!

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Fairytale RP!

Fairytale RP!

So Tovah had once made something like this, and I miss it, so I'm going to recreate it. I was thinking that you could either do a twist on a classic fairytale hero or heroine, or make your own. They go to a private high school to learn to fight aliens. 

I'm going to go with the same character I had before.

Name: Gretel Rose

Appearence; Chin-length golden hair that curves in on one side and
curves out on the other. Dark, sapphire-blue eyes, slightly pink cheeks,
pale, small, at 5 ft. Commonly wears long sleeve camo shirt with denim
capris and lace up hunting boots. Or jeans, black t-shirt with Slay Your Own Dragons and a sword
on fire, black hunting boots. Oftenwears a cap. Whether navy blue or
camo.

Personality; Strong, quiet, observant, hard core, ready to fight. Loyal, open, and cheerful around her friends. 

Story; So, this is a Hansel and Gretel in the modern world. Southern
girl! Her parents ditched her in the backwoods of Tennessee, in the
Great Smokey Mountains. A hunter thought she and her brother game and
accidentally shot him. (Explains what happens to Hansel.)

Power; She has a strong sense of direction, can see in the dark. Also can channel people's feelings well. Knows what they're feeling.

Weapon: Anything she can throw or shoot, except long spears. She can
throw knives, shoot a gun or bow. Whatever she can get her hands on.

So what do ya'll think? Good or bad idea?

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule, age classified, Knight's Training
(November 11, 2013 - 4:07 pm)

Gretel ~

"This is ridiculous," I muttered, pushing through yet another abnormally large bush. My heart was pounding, despite how I tried to calm it. I felt a sense of trepidation, like everything was about to go wrong. I wanted scream and run. I needed to find some sign of civilization. I needed someone. I felt that same, horrible feeling crawling up my skin. The same feeling I'd felt when it was Hansel and I, when we were abandoned. But not just the feeling of abandonment. The feeling that something bad, really bad, was about to happen. 

My breaths came short, fast, and shallow. Goosebumps that had nothing to do with the temperature prickled up and down my arms. I tried to keep the shore in sight as much as possible, though I kept getting drawn in further and further. The feeling of trepidation was rapidly turning to panic. I didn't hear or see any sign of anyone. I prayed everyone hadn't been crushed or drowned.  I was tempted to holler out, but if the people who'd shot us down were here, there was no way I wanted them knowing my location, or even that I was alive. You don't fire a missile at someone whom you want to live.

Every sound, every rustle of leaves, every time the wind blew, I thought it was someone or something about to attack. I'd never been so on edge. I felt helpless, and totally, utterly lost. I hated that feeling. Something slid down my cheek, and I realized it was a tear. I was crying.

Relax, you're going to find them, this isn't going to be a repeat of Hansel.

But I couldn't convince myself of that. 

While I was lost in my thoughts, I didn't notice how far into the forest I'd gone, till I tripped on a downhill decline, and went tumbling. I stretched my arms out, hoping to grasp something, anything, to stop myself. Of course I had no such luck. I smashed into something on my way down, and whatever it was came tumbling with me. 

I wasn't totally sure when I stopped rolling, only that I had. I lay on the ground, gasping, trying to recover. My whole body throbbed, and I was so disoriented I couldn't tell what was up and what was down. I rolled to my side, blinking open my eyes. Everything was hazy, though I made out a figure a few feet away.

"Ash?" I muttered, holding my head and trying to sit up.

I heard him muttering some things though I couldn't make out what he was saying. I decided that was a good thing. 

"Gretel is that you?" he finally demanded, rubbing his head and also sitting up. 

"Yeah," I replied, feeling immensely relieved despite the pain. 

"Well at least I don't have to go looking for you, though I could have done without the rolling down the hill part."

"Yeah, well, that was yet another one of my escapades that was completely unplanned and one I could have done without as well."

Once my vision, cleared, I looked at him hard. His clothes were damp, like mine, and he was battered and bruised from the fall. He had a cut above his left eye that blood was slowly trickling from. I winced, somehow feeling responsible. 

"Come on, we need to find the others," he said. I nodded quietly, slowly standing and wincing at the ache in my legs. We'd better be well rewarded by Fairtale High by the end of this. And by all the students and people we were saving. And the government. Yeah, the government especially. I had a feeling by the end of all this we would have well earned it.

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule, age unknown, Atlantis
(January 6, 2015 - 10:08 pm)

It's too late for me to write right now, but I've had a ridculous amount of freetime recently, so I'll write tomorrow for sure. Smile

submitted by Theo W.
(January 8, 2015 - 9:15 pm)

@BHR, I might. I just might. I was thinking of doing a drawing of... some things. I might post some Gretel stuff later. Too late right now. I'm just catching up so I'm ready to write tomorrow.

Zaga says, "Topo!" Top! O! Top! 

submitted by Theo W.
(January 8, 2015 - 9:18 pm)

Ash~

And in an instant, I was alone.

The jet crashed into the ocean, which I unfortunately discovered was called salt water for a reason when I swallowed a few mouthfuls, and I felt the waves crash around me. I couldn't see the jet anywhere, even though I knew the invisiblity spray should've worn off and I should have been able to see the crash, or at least another survivor.

What if there were no survivors?

There was an island, and there was a forest, and somehow I found myself in the middle of that forest, clinging onto that thought like a security blanket. "No survivors," I said to myself. "No survivors." When I said it, it seemed fake, like it'd go away if I said it enough. Like it wasn't just me and the hat and boots that had, against all odds, wipped up on shore. I'd put the hat on my head even though I hadn't wanted anything more but to leave it there. "No survivors."

I didn't know where I was going. I was going somewhere. There had to be someone here. I'd have to find someone.

If I screamed, maybe someone would hear it, and maybe they'd find me and then maybe I wouldn't be the only one--

I froze mid-though. Something was moving through the bushes just ahead of me. I peered around a tree when suddenly--

I was rolling down the hill. There was something--someone?--else. My head struck something (a bush?) and bumped into several trees on the way down. The world was spinning and I hardly had any idea what was going down. The flat ground was a relief, and I felt myself muttering, "No survivors," a couple of more times just in case this wasn't real."

I didn't think a large cat of prey would know my name. I sat up and rubbed my head. It must've been a thorn bush of some sort--I winced. "Gretel, is that you?" I asked.

"Yeah." But I couldn't feel anything. It was like I had sunk so low into my misery that I really did believe there were no surviors. Gretel was here. Gretel was alive. I should feel something.

"Well, at least I don't have to go looking for you, though I could've done without the rolling down the hill part," I said. Ash. Aren't you relieved? You're not alone. They're not all gone.

Not all of them. There was something horrible about that thought. Gretel had said something, and was now looking at me, like she expected an answer. My mouth spoke before I could think: "Come on, we need to find the others." Goals. Give yourself something to do, why don't you?

I should've laughed. I should've cried. I should've been happy.

No survivors.

 

Well, here's a somewhat depressing bit from Ash! Hopefully he's feeling better soon. I'm just having a bit of a hard time grasping onto his character. I've been writing a lot of angry, insane characters, and it's hard to not do that with Ash. But that's not who he is. The last bit wasn't his voice, either. His thoughts, not his voice. Anyways, hopefully with a couple more posts I can get back into the whole hang of things. 

submitted by Theo W., age 14, Dark, Dreaded Places
(January 9, 2015 - 5:24 pm)

Meg and the mice~

Dark-furred creatures surrounded us. Their fangs glistened ominously, and consequently my palms produced enough sweat to fill a dry lake. Then suddenly a thought struck me, a thought that made me go pale as a toad's underbelly. The mice were still on the forest floor!

I gestured to Cindy, trying to convey what I'd realized. The color drained from her face instantly. I was still in the net, and therefore could not save the mice myself. We are so utterly hopeless, I despaired. But just as I despaired, a sliver of hope appeared. "Cindy," I whispered, "I still have my dagger!"

"Great," she replied. "Hand it to me and I'll cut you out." I did as I was told, and soon was free. Cindy and I craned our necks, looking for the mice. We found them in the shadow of some underbrush. The strange creatures tried to climb up the tree again and again, of course failing every time.

"Luckily those hyena-things aren't very bright," I said. Cindy giggled and agreed.  

"So," said Cindy, "I've got an idea. How about we cut down the net and throw it over the hyena-things?"

"Sounds like a plan to me," I said, climbing up a few branches to the branch where the net was attached. I cut the rope from which the net hung, and then tossed the net to Cindy. She waited until the most opportune moment, then tossed the net over the creatures. We leapt down, exulting in the fact that we were alive.

"Meg, Cindy, you're okay!" Steve rejoiced. "I was so worried, when Meg got trapped and all, I almost fainted. Charlie kept me conscious, though that became very hard to do when those long-fanged animals showed up. But anyways, I'm just so glad you're okay!" I gathered Steve, Charlie, and Pip in for a hug.

After a very long hug, Charlie raised a serious question: what do about the creatures? "Oh, don't worry about that," Cindy said. "I brought some sleeping darts." So Cindy blew the darts onto each animal's rump, and we pulled the net off them.  

submitted by The Chocabookaholic , age 12
(January 10, 2015 - 1:21 pm)

Cindy~

I only relaxed when the last creature had fallen onto the ground. Steve breathed a sigh of relief after we bunched up the net to hold (you  never know, it could come in handy) and started off again.

"Gretel!" I called, closely followed by Meg. "Ash? Jasmine? Aladdin? Anybody? Hello?"

"Over here!" came a faint voice. "It's Gretel! I'm with Ash."

"Gretel?" said Meg, and ran in the direction of the voice. I followed her eagerly. Meg pushed past a grove of trees and ran straight into Gretel, who had Ash behind her. Some of the tension went out of my shoulders.

"We're safe, apart from a few scrapes and bruises" said Gretel. "How about you? Did you run into anything?"

"Only a few hyena-creatures and a net," I said sarcastically. As Meg explained the story to a startled Ash and Gretel, I glanced around to make sure nothing was following us. I couldn't put my finger on why, but something made the island seem... sinister. I told myself it was just nerves and zoned back in on the conversation.

"We need to find the others," Gretel was saying. Nods all around.

"We could use the technique Cindy came up with," suggested Meg. "Just work our way out from the center. When I climbed the tree it seemed that this was the approximate middle."

"That sounds good." interjected Ash. "But no splitting up."

"Yes," I agreed. "It... doesn't seem right."

So we picked a random way and started, calling out names as we did so.   

submitted by Katie M
(January 10, 2015 - 5:47 pm)
submitted by Top
(January 13, 2015 - 8:54 am)

Top, top! Please write!

submitted by Katie M
(January 14, 2015 - 5:42 pm)

Sorry y'all! I'm just super busy so I'm having to balance my time. Thanks Katie for trying to top this!

Gretel ~

We sprawled out across the island, moving as a unit, trying to comb as much as possible, calling out names as loud as we dared. There was no response. Night began to descend, and still there was no sign. We'd searched a good two-thirds of the island, and there was no sign of anyone or anything. This fact unnerved me. 

"We should head back to the beach, make a shelter, so we can find the others in the morning. We won't be able to do them any good getting lost in the dark," Cindy suggested, glancing up at the sky.

There was a murmuring of agreement. I couldn't think straight though. The sense of brewing unease I had was starting to build the darker it got. We made our way back to the beach, and by that point stars were now visible in the dark violet sky. We'd gathered up stray driftwood and dried leaves into a small pile, and after several fails and a nearly sliced off thumb, we manage to get a spark going that built into a blaze. 

We were silent as we sat there. I think a sense of deep worry had settled into all of us, preventing us from speaking. We each fell asleep where we sat, the day's events completely wiping us out. 

That night though, I was violently jarred awake. A tremendous crash like thunder shook the world, causing me to sit up bolt right.

"Meg, Cindy, Ash," I hissed, trying to get myself oriented. But as I peered through the darkness, I realized each of them was gone. I also realized that I was no longer at the beach. I was somewhere in the center jungle. Fog rolled in through the trees, casting a ghostly effect as the moon sone hazily through it. 

"Ash? Cindy? Meg?" I called out, slowly pushing msyelf to my feet. Only the sound of russling trees greeted me in reply.

"Something is so off here," I muttered, slowly making my way forward. My mind raced through stories and scenarios and events I'd trained for or heard. Nothing quite matched up, but I had a feeling this island was more than met the eye. 

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So yeah, I just decided to throw that in there for ideas. Y'all can change it if you like! 

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule, age unknown, Not sure...
(January 15, 2015 - 10:37 pm)

Meg and the mice~

The earthquake-or at least, it felt like an earthquake-made my heart leap to my throught and my insides tighten. "Pip, Steve, Charlie!" I half-yelled in a strangled voice. "Cindy Gretel, Ash!" I jumped up, yanking a flashlight from my belt. I clicked it on and took in my surroundings. 

There wasn't even an indication that the others had walked away. Fact was (though it was hard to come to grips with it) that I was stranded, with no reason for it. No sign of a fire either, so I must've been moved from last night's campsite. I walked a ways, calling for the others as I did, hand on my dagger. 

Suddenly, something moved in the woods nearby. 

submitted by The Chocabookaholic , age 12
(March 24, 2015 - 10:23 am)

Congrats on 400 posts!

submitted by ...
(January 17, 2015 - 2:47 pm)

Thanks! And TOP! Top top toppity top top!

submitted by Top
(January 27, 2015 - 8:04 pm)

This is the most interesting story ever. You must top top top top top!

submitted by toppity
(February 20, 2015 - 7:42 am)

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submitted by toppity
(February 20, 2015 - 7:42 am)

Top top top!!! 

submitted by Katie M
(March 22, 2015 - 12:14 pm)