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Bad writer???
Bad writer???
I'm sulking. My mom saw my writing and didn't like it. She said it wasn't original. She said it was a cop-out. She said it was--
*suddenly bursts into tears*
*wails*
*sniffle* Does my writing suck in your opinion? Honestly? Truthfully? Really?
I'm not going to be writing for a while. I need to get my spirits back up. I might even leave the Chatterbox for a bit.
*waves dejectedly*
*sighs deeply*
*trudges away*
It's one thing to loathe your writing. It's another when your mom does, too.
Anyway. Bye. Thanks for listening to my boring ramble. I needed to say it.
submitted by BellaTrix ✌ ♡
(March 1, 2009 - 11:09 pm)
(March 1, 2009 - 11:09 pm)
Thanks, but The Aftermath is not original. Doesn't that happen over and over again in books? "Oh, you have the Sight." "Oh, you are the Seeker." "Oh, you must save us all!", etc. Ugh.
(March 3, 2009 - 8:04 pm)
NOOOOOOO!
* starts pulling out hair in despair*
That is not the correct attitude if you want to improve!
And the Aftermath is REALLY cool!
Maybe you'll do better if we stop being friends; a lot of my 'friends' have dumped me as soon as something bad happens to them, saying that I'm bad luck. Maybe it's true! I mean, what are the chances? I show up, and some thing bad happened already! Maybe I better leave before anything else happens...............
*starts trudging off into the distance*
*then comes back*but if you improve your attitude then I might be persuaded to stay.
(March 4, 2009 - 5:13 am)
Jenjen!!! Don't be stupid!!!!!! OF COURSE you're not bad luck!!!!!!! Your "friends" are just--*claps hand over mouth* Whoopsie! I'll start raving on and on and on about that and waste the Admins' time. Eheh.
(March 5, 2009 - 2:32 pm)
You like me that much!?
OK, I'll consider staying.
If you want, I can help you with your writing............
even though my writing is begginer level.
(March 5, 2009 - 8:58 pm)
Your writing is not "beginner level". No arguing. :)
(March 6, 2009 - 10:56 am)
*thinks*
*decides to argue anyway*
*shrugs*
*wonders what best friend would think of the site*
* shrugs once again*
*decides to be REALLY random*
I have a headache today.
*hits head to make headache go away*
oops that made it worse..............
*collapses*
*wakes up some time later*..........
* wonders what is doing in front of computer*
*shrugs*
*walks away*
*forgets to turn and walks into wall*
*collapses again*
*wakes up some time later*
*rushes back to computer to complete post*
BellaTrix my writing IS beginer level, or at least, the story that I'm posting is my first story ever.
(March 6, 2009 - 6:27 pm)
Just because it's your first story doesn't make it a beginner level story. Just, you know, a first story. Beginner level would be "See Spot run. Spot runs fast. Spot plays ball.".
(March 7, 2009 - 12:28 am)
*looks at comment*
*thinks it was BellaTrix*
*looks again*
*sees that it was TNO*
*screams*
Um,right.
Have you seen my story?
It's here on Inkwell as.........Ummm.....
*goes back and looks*
http://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/inkwell/node/15364
Yay!
BellaTrix thinks it's good.........
(March 7, 2009 - 4:39 pm)
It's not bad, especially given that the original story was started when you were six. Your revision has decent word choice, good sentence structure, and interesting characters, and the second (and latest) installment certainly caught my interest. I would rate it far above "beginner" level, perhaps a high-middle school or early-high school? It's way better than anything I came up with at that age. :)
(March 8, 2009 - 1:17 am)
You really think?!
WOW!
THANKYOUTHANKYOU!
I'm not used to being complimented............
Most of the people I know would say that it's horrible just to make me feel bad (some of them almost could be mean for a living!)
(March 8, 2009 - 2:25 pm)
Age twelve or six?
Heheheh, I think I've read so many books that now I could make a interesting plot in my sleep..............
(March 8, 2009 - 8:34 pm)
YOUR WRITING IS NOT CHEESY AND PREDICTABLY UNORIGINAL. CASE CLOSED.
(March 3, 2009 - 6:28 pm)
:):):D:):D
(March 4, 2009 - 9:39 am)
I'd add more smileys but I personally think that THAT is cheesy and unoriginal, so I'll just keep my big mouth shut.
*clamps hand over mouth as words try to escape*
*doubles over with effort*
*dashes off to find Scotch tape*
(March 4, 2009 - 9:03 pm)
No, you are no a bad writer, and that's FINAL.
(March 4, 2009 - 9:58 pm)