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New RP! I a

New RP! 

I am starting a new RP. Please tell me if I am doing anything wrong or anything like that.

In this RP our characters live in this medival land with mythical creatures and stuff. We live in the kingdom Fayry. There is a war going on and lots of people have to train to be a soldier. It is unclear on if the kingdom will be destroyed.  Please no more than seven people please.

Here is the sheet.

Name: Mazie Hawk

Age: 12

Apperance: light brown hair usually pulled back in a ponytail, brown eyes and freckles

Personality: Sassy, logical and smart

Strengths: A good fighter and as I said, logical and smart  

Other: She is training to be a soldier   

Let me make it clear that anyone can be in the royal family or have special powers. PLEASE POST!!!!!!!!  

submitted by Lemon banana , age 10 , MT
(March 6, 2016 - 8:43 pm)

@Pearl, could my charrie be a sort of friend/advisor to yours? If you already have something specific planned thats fine. Whistler says yedo, yee do what Whistler?

submitted by Mirax T., age 11, The Pulsar Skate
(March 8, 2016 - 9:53 pm)

Sure!

An advisor is just what I need! 

submitted by Pearl, age PRIVATE, Earth
(March 10, 2016 - 2:24 pm)

One more person joins and we start.

submitted by Matanus P, age 14, Paneser Farm
(March 9, 2016 - 4:34 pm)

Ok I will join! I have never really done one of these before, but I'll try to get the hang of it. Here's mine:

Name: Collete

Age: 14

Appearance: Long, dark brown/black hair which is a little wavy. Dark green eyes, fair complexion. Often wears navy  blue, black, or dark purple.

Personality: Quiet, laid-back, and an introvert, but has a great sense of humor and smiles quite a bit when you get to know her.

Strengths: She is deadly with a bow and equally deadly with a small dagger, and was born with the ability to read minds.

Other: She desperately wants to join the war, but her mother and father have other plans in mind. They feel that she has expectations to live up to, since her mother is the Queen's sister. They are planning to start lessons with the Royal Instructor at the castle on how to be "proper" and be like her cousins, the "princesses". She used to get very overwhelmed with being able to hear every single thought of every single person all at once, until she met a girl her own age at a festival who taught her how to block out everything except the important stuff, and only when you want to hear it. That girl's name is Gwendolyn, or Gwen, and has been her best friend ever since. So far they are said to be the only humans currently alive who posses these powers.

 

submitted by Linnea G., age 11, Oregon
(March 9, 2016 - 8:31 pm)

Shall we begin?

submitted by ShoshannahLily, age 12, Deep in a book
(March 10, 2016 - 9:44 am)

Yes

submitted by Matanus P, age 14, Paneser Farm
(March 10, 2016 - 4:55 pm)

I will start! Also if this doesn't work for anyone just tell me and I can change it. Also does anyone want to be my partner for this RP (see below so this makes more sense) or should I make up someone? Here goes.

~Mazie~

First day of training for me! And a lot of other people. Our trainer is droning on and on about safety blah, blah, blah. "Okay, now how this will work." he says. Oo! Listening! "I will pair you up and then my assistants and I will teach you and then you will practice with your partner," he continues "The pairs will be boy, girl." No he didn't. He better not have. The trainer is a good family friend. I asked him before we started if I could be partnered with my friend Mia. He said yes. And now he is saying I have to be partners with some guy I don't know?! Ugh! "Excuse me, but remember your promise?" I say. "The King ordered me to pair you up like this" is his reply. "And why did he do that? To play matchmaker?" I ask. "He said this will be good for training you mentally. I have no idea what he meant by that but it was my order. And just so you know Mia isn't in training," he replies. "Hold on a second, I'll be right back." I say. He starts naming pairs. I trudge towards Mia's house. "Mia," I screech. " We need to talk."

 

submitted by Lemon banana , age 10, MT
(March 10, 2016 - 9:11 pm)

So let's say Lily is in the same crowd at this time, only not near Mazie.

 

~Lily~

Well, first day of training, I guess. Or is it the second? Yesterday they had all of the initiates here to test their strenghth, or skill, or something. The worst part? It was those that were wealthy and ready to fight, against those who didn't have a choice. I, oddly enough, did pretty well against my partner, but since my partner was much bigger and more pracitced than me, she won. 

Now, today, when it's girls against boys, I suppose that it could be more fair, but only if you're paired with someone your own size, or strenghth. What I'm not surprized to see was that I was paired with the strongest dimwit in the group. To make worse, not there weren't enough swords in all, so some would have to practice hand-to-hand combat. Guess what? We're going hand-to-hand. I sigh as I see my whole life flash in front of me. 

Later on in the fight, you could say that I was doing pretty good! But, my energy was draining, and Mr. Boulder here looked like he was having the time of his life, swining those arms around at whatever got in front of him. (I.e., me.) I was about to take my last punch, right under his rib cage, when something distracted me. Was that girl leaving? You're allowed to do that? At right that second, a fist came running at my face. Everything went black. When I finally woke up, it was clear Mr. Boulder won.

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Just so everyone is clear, Masie was the one that distracted me. 

submitted by Darth Kitty, age 12, a house
(March 11, 2016 - 8:08 am)

Can Sebastion be Mazie's partner? Just to make this clear, Sebastion is the prince of Fayry, but he doesn't know it because he was kidnapped at birth by a sorceror but rescued by his dog, Dolphus, who then took him to be raised by a kindly but isolated woodcutter named Peter. He is thirteen and Minerva's long lost twin. Sorry that is so complicated!

Right now Bastion is in the same crowd as the others.

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~Bastion~

I step into the market place and stare around, gawking. Even in the few times that Peter took me to the village of Aragon, I had never seen so many people. And what a noise! The shouts and groans and clatter of about thirty villagers dueling sounded so unpleasant to my sensitive ears, used to the calm and quiet of the forest. But Peter had said it was the duty of all who could to serve my country in this time of war, though he was too feeble. I did not want to leave him. The old man could barely chop enough would for himself, let alone the timber which he sold for his meager living.

Dolphus nuzzles my leg, urging me to go on. I walk up to the man who looks like he's in charge. "Excuse me, sir," I ask timidly.

"Yes?" he says sharply, turning around and glaring at me.

"Um, I want to learn how to be a soldier."

"What's your name, boy?"

"Bastion Swift."

"Ah." His voice softens. "Peter told me he would send you, but you're late. My name is Mr. Oaken. We're pairing up to learn how to duel, but we're almost finished for the day. Your partner's name is Mazie Hawk. I don't see her at present, but I will have one of my assistants go find her." I nod, and he shouts to someone I can't see and walks away.

I look around at the fighting pairs. One girl lies crumpled on the ground, blood streaming from her face. I shiver. Girls shouldn't be allowed to fight, in my opinion, at least not against men twice their size. I suppose that that's what Peter meant by everyone fighting for their country. No matter. Whoever Mazie Hawk is, I'll have to be sure to go easy on her. 

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I hope that's okay! 

submitted by ShoshannahLily, age 12, Deep in a book
(March 11, 2016 - 2:39 pm)

Great! I would love for Bastion to be Mazie's partner! 

submitted by Lemon banana , age 10, MT
(March 11, 2016 - 5:18 pm)

 

~Matanus~

First day of training. Boys vs Girls which is dumb. My partener is Princess Minerva. You'd think it would be easy. It's not. Her first move is a sucker punch. I stagger back and notice that a girl is leaving. The princess is distracted and I make my move. Minerva lays on the ground stunned. I look around at the other trainees. A hulk of muscle has defeated his partner and is grinning like a fool.  Pretty soon, the princess comes to.

"Good fight" she says and we shake hands. I am bewildered. I expected her to be snootty.

"Can you teach me that move?" I finally ask.

"Sure" The princess smiles.

"Now what?" I wonder.

"What's your name?" asks Minerva

"Matanus Paneser" I say

"Pleased to meet you, Matanus" the princess says 

 

submitted by Matanus P, age 14, Paneser Farms
(March 11, 2016 - 3:11 pm)

Mazie~ I couldn't find Mia and apparently I caused some trouble by trying to find her. It wasn't a big deal, I think. When I get back to the training place Mr. Oaken is standing there with a guy who I think is my partner. "Mazie," the Mr. Oaken calls. "There you are, I was a bit worried about you." I go over to them and stand across from my partner. "Mazie this is Bastion. He will be your partner," he says.  My face turns into an automatic scowl.

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Hope that is all fine with you guys!  

submitted by Lemon banana , age 10 , MT
(March 11, 2016 - 5:35 pm)

Me next!

Minerva-

There I was. About to dual. First move: Ultimate sucker punch!

Yes! That was easy. Just then, I notice a girl leaving. Why is she leaving? We're just getting started! Ouch! That hurts. My opponent got me down. "Good fight," I say. He looks a little puzzled. "Can you teach me that move?" he asks? I grin. "Sure," I respond. "What's your name?" I ask. "Matanus Paneser," he answers. Happy to have made a friend, I say, "Pleased to meet you, Matanus." After training, I teach Matanus my sucker punch. After a good time, I head up to the castle to go to dinner and had just enough time to magically clean up and change into a royal dress before my lady-in-waiting called, "Minerva! It's time for dinner!" "Oh, yes, I'm coming!" I replied. After dinner there was chocolate, and then bedtime. Minerva wondered what that girl at training had been leaving for. Weird. Well, maybe tomorrow I'll ask her, I thought. 

 

submitted by Pearl, age PRIVATE, Earth
(March 12, 2016 - 1:12 am)

Before we continue, do you guys think we should make a list of the order in which we write our parts of the RP? Just so we can know whose turn it is to write? Just a thought. 

submitted by ShoshannahLily, Deep in a book
(March 12, 2016 - 10:56 am)

That is a good idea! So far the list is:

Mazie

Lily

Bastion

Matenus

Minerva

It might be a little difficult because some people might really want to post at certain moments, but if you guys want we can totally do that! Oh, and there is one more person who hasn't posted yet.  

 

 

submitted by Lemon banana , age 10 , MT
(March 12, 2016 - 12:25 pm)