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I am starting a new RP. Please tell me if I am doing anything wrong or anything like that.
In this RP our characters live in this medival land with mythical creatures and stuff. We live in the kingdom Fayry. There is a war going on and lots of people have to train to be a soldier. It is unclear on if the kingdom will be destroyed. Please no more than seven people please.
Here is the sheet.
Name: Mazie Hawk
Age: 12
Apperance: light brown hair usually pulled back in a ponytail, brown eyes and freckles
Personality: Sassy, logical and smart
Strengths: A good fighter and as I said, logical and smart
Other: She is training to be a soldier
Let me make it clear that anyone can be in the royal family or have special powers. PLEASE POST!!!!!!!!
submitted by Lemon banana , age 10 , MT
(March 6, 2016 - 8:43 pm)
(March 6, 2016 - 8:43 pm)
Yes, it is your turn but I am not sure if we are still doing turns. I am not sure if you were the one who says 'what is going on' but maybe. Make something up!
(March 27, 2016 - 9:09 pm)
So I had the infirmary be in the castle so that Minerva, Collete, and Catherine could get involved with the other characters. Pearl, you're right that Minerva wouldn't witness the soup-scene. She is in the castle, and maybe she sees out the window or something Bastion carrying Lily in, and she wonders what is going on. I don't know. You can figure that part out. I just meant to emphasize that the infirmary is in the castle.
Also, I don't think we should take turns anymore. It isn't working very well. Again, I'm so sorry for suggesting that!
(March 28, 2016 - 8:27 am)
I agree that we should stop taking turns. It just makes the whole story go much slower (it was a great idea to begin with, though). I would post, but I think that I am already too far ahead of everyone else....
(March 28, 2016 - 1:19 pm)
Yes, I posted pretty recently, so if Minerva, Collete, or Catherine could write the next part sometime soon that would be great.
(March 29, 2016 - 11:55 am)
I could write the next part if Catherine and Minerva don't want to, but I just posted a little while ago. Also, would Colette and Minerva be somehow related? Because if Minerva is a princess, Colette would be her cousin... I don't know. Just thinking things through.
(March 29, 2016 - 8:30 pm)
Maybe. It's very possible.
How about Minerva's mother be the cousin of Catherine's mother? I guess that would make them second cousins. Or is it third cousins?
(March 31, 2016 - 9:12 pm)
Sorry, I meant Collete.
(March 31, 2016 - 9:14 pm)
I'll go
-Minerva
So I think that Matanus has gotten the sucker punch down, so I guess I should go look for Catherine ans ask how the ball went. As I roam about the castle I notice something. Outside the window I see a boy carrying a girl, and from the looks of it he's carrying her to the infirmary. As I take a closer look, I realize that they were in training earlier today. The girl is injured and has blood on her face. Realizing this I start to panick. Did something happen after I left? I turn around and head to the infirmary. As soon as I get there I say, "What's going on?" The boy says "Your highness, as everyone gathered around for soup after practice, some idiot hurt a girl to get to the soup first. She was bleeding badly, so I brought her here." I think about this for a moment. As the panick disapearres, I feel the beginnings of anger. I say in my most majesic voice,"Tomorrow at practice, I request that you show me who did this. Soldiers fighting for the same team do not hurt one another. This impertenance shall not stand. And for your chivalry, I will grant you a either a bag of gold, or a box of jewels." "Thank you princess, but no reward is nessecary. I will show you who it was tommorow," he says.
There! What do you think?
(March 31, 2016 - 12:23 pm)
Great! I really like how the characters are coming together!
Random idea-- should the "idiot" who hurt Lily turn out to be a spy or something from the enemy nation?
We don't have to do it, I was just wondering what you guys think. I guess it's really up to Lemon Banana to decide.
(March 31, 2016 - 2:46 pm)
I was thinking of that when I wrote my piece. But I don't think he should be a spy. More likely, the idiot will be forced to quit soldier practice after a talk with Minerva and then joins the enemy. Basically, he only does what he thinks will make him look good. He's not exactly evil, just a bully. But it's up to Lemon Banana (great name, by the way) to decide.
(March 31, 2016 - 9:20 pm)
Yeah, that makes more sense.
(April 1, 2016 - 8:11 am)
@ Pearl ( Pearl is also my middle name!) I think that your idea is good and if everyone is fine with it we can do it.
(April 1, 2016 - 9:21 am)
Great! So what does everyone here think?
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