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Percy Jackson RP!!!! Who wants to do won with me??????? PLEASE :)

submitted by ZB <3 percy+potter:)
(December 15, 2010 - 9:03 pm)

Tray-

I didn't want to tell them, but I knew I had to. "Well, the shell belongs to-" Just then Jason walked in. "Tray, you need to come here, NOW." I got up and followed him out. Outside was the last thing I'd expected when I got up today: The hunters of Artemis. "Thalia?" I gaped at her. Jenifer, Nell, and Sam walked out of one tent. And Nick out of annother. Jenifer gave him a look of loathing. I snorted, then turned back to the hunters. "What do you want?" I asked. Thalia looked around. "First the boys must go." She looked very happy to say that. "What? No way!" Jason and Nick both said at the same time. I turned to them. "Guys, get out." Jason and Nick hung their heads. 'Allright." Jason mumbled. "Fine" Nick muttered. When they were gone we all laughed. "Boys are so stupid." One of the hunters said. She had long dark red hair. It was obviously dyed that color because it was just as red as the Target sign. I mean the store that sells DVD's and stuff. She had tan skin, and was glowing with life. Her green eyes looked like fresh leaves on a spring day. I kinda blushed. She gave me a knowing, yet disaproving, look. "My name is Rachel King. We are looking for the Shell of Poisidan. Jenifer and I exchanged a glance. "Why do you need it?" I asked. "Posidan needs his warrior to save the under sea realm. His message to you, Tray Martin, is this," She held out a rock and it played Posidans voice. "Tray, you need to give the chosen one the shell. Now. It is her time to save my under-sea realm. Tray, you know what to do." "Wow, someone's desprate." I muttered. Sam and Nell both punched me. "OW!" "Well?! Who is it?!" I looked from Nell to Sam, and back. "It's, it's Sam." I muttered. Sam looked like she might faint. Nell looked furious. "Don't be mad at me, it wasn't my choice!" I tried desprately.

submitted by ~Sam~
(February 28, 2011 - 1:11 pm)

Sam--

 

I was shocked. I felt as if my breath wasn't coming to my lungs and my throat started to close up. Nell's face was full of fury. I'd never seen her that mad before. I didn't want to her to be upset. I could.. "I'll give Nell the stone!" Everyone turned to  me. Rachel's red hair flared like fire. "No!" Her voice was ice cold. "Why not?! It's mine. I can do what I want with it." My hands rapped around the cool shell. "No!" Rachel's voice was forceful. "Only the Chosen One can use it. Otherwise, the power will fail." I stared at the small shell. "But..." I turned to Nell, she turned her back and stormed off. Rachel's emotionless face looked at her hunters. "Well, I guess our mission is done." In a blast of wind the hunters were gone. I suddenly had an idea. "California! We have to go there!" Tray looked at me confused. "But..." "We have to! I know it. But first I have to talk to Nell." I walked to the clearing where Nell sat. I cautiously kneeled to the ground. "Nell, this isn't my fault or my choice. It's no one's fault. It just... happened." Nell was quiet and then her voice came out choked. "The chosen One! You! Why not me! Father loves you more. That's why you're chosen." She got up and I felt the wind around us swirl. Her power was more than mine, I knew it. She was better at controlling the water. Suddenly Nell fell in a faint. I looked at her face. I knew the dreaming expression she had on. She was with Dad.

submitted by Elizabeth M , age 11, Germany: stuck
(March 1, 2011 - 10:42 am)

//Jenifer//

I was shocked. Utterly and Absolutely shocked. Sam was the chosen one, not Nell. Nell was passed out on the floor, and the Hunters were gone. They were lucky. No prophecies, but having to run around all the time, ugh. Sounds boring. Real boring. But anyways, Sam and Tray both have their charm thingys, except for me. All I needed was that lighting bolt stone, stay away from Nick, and then I could control the world. That was all I needed. But how would I get it? I needed to seperate from the rest, so I could do my own thing. I stone was in Oklahoma, I knew it. And they would be headed towards California. I needed to get lost while in OK, not be found, send them a mysterous message, and finally be seperated from the rest. I'll be free!

submitted by ZB <3percy+potter :D
(March 2, 2011 - 8:19 pm)

Sam--

 

Nell's eyes fluttered open. "Are you Ok?" I asked worried. She shivered and nodded slightly. "I-I think I'll rest..." I guided her silently to our tent where she lay down and looked at the wall. "You can go now." She said in a voice which was forceful and cold. I walked out and sat down next to Tray. Jennifer was pacing about a yard ahead of us. "Tray? What's wrong with her?" I asked. Tray's brow creased in concentration as she studied Jennifer's figure. "She's making a decision... A hard one. I believe she's going to leave." My eyes shot open. "Why?" I desperately looked at Tray. "Do I look like an Oracle?" She said sarcastically. I couldn't help it, I started to laugh histarically. Tray suddenly joined in and we rolled around laughing at something which, well, wasn't exactly known. It felt so good to laugh. I couldn't stop but suddenly I heard something. A scream. Where was it coming from. I turned to Jennifer whose mouth was covered by a long arm. I drew my knife. 

 

submitted by Elizabeth M , age 11, Germany: stuck
(March 3, 2011 - 10:49 am)

//Jenifer//

I screamed as an arm wrapped around my mouth. My muffled screams spit saliva on the person's hand, so that made me happy. I looked up and saw that it was *dramatic effect* the one, the only . . . Medusa!! (With a veil) Snakes snipped at my ears and hair, not the best feeling. "Sssoo, little children. Where are you headed and where are the relics, or you'll have a new sculpture to lug around with you, seeing that you survive!" She snickered and the snakes jiggled around her face. She tightened her grip on my face. By now everyone but Nick was up and ready to fight; he usually sleeps in, like me. Suddenly, I spotted him sneaking around the bushes, invisible. I guess only I could see him, because Medusa wasn't saying anything. Maybe it's a Zeus thing. But he was creeping around the bushes, careful not to step on leaves or twigs. He pulled out his knife, and I knew he had a plan. Sam had her knife out, and Jason, Tray, and Nell had their swords. I knew that we was safe, but the others didn't. Nick would save us by killing Medusa, and us others would distract her. "Let us go, freakshow," Tray yelled. "Ahh, but you're wrong, daughter of Hades. I will not let you go until you're all dead." She lifted her arm, reaching up to her head, lifting her veil. Nick materialized behind her, with his knife. Tray suddenly yelled, "Jenifer, No! Get away!" Medusa looked startled and loosened her grip and I slipped down and drew my sword in one swift movement. 

submitted by ZB <3percy+potter :D
(March 3, 2011 - 9:02 pm)

Sam-- 

 

Jennifer flew to the ground as the pressure of her sword split Medusa in two. The woman's head fell on the hard ground. I covered my eyes. "Jennifer! Don't look down! Cover your eyes." I ran into the tent and grabbed a blanket. With my eyes still covered, I dropped it on where I thought the head would be. "I slowly uncovered my eyes to see the lumpy blanket which lay in front of me. "Jennifer? Are you OK?" I knelt beside Jennifer who was shaking. She looked around and let out a small shriek. "Nick?! He-he..." I turned around and saw Nick, now a stone, on lying on the ground. His face was evil and his hands were raised over his head where his bronze knife was. I wrapped my arms around Jennifer and she lay her head on my shoulder. Tray walked up with Nell and Jason following. "Guys, we have to go..." Nell started to say. "HE needs to be buried." Jennifer declared. I looked at the others and then I had an idea. "Tray, you're the daughter of Hades! Send him to the Underworld." Tray's face was startled but she managed to send Nick under the earth to Hades. It took much of her power though. Tray sat down breathing heavily. "I-I have to---rest--" She said between deep gulps of breath. "We have to go! Everybody let's pack up. Tray you stay here." Tray looked relieved and we all started packing our stuff ready to go to the next stop. 

submitted by Elizabeth M , age 11, Germany: stuck
(March 4, 2011 - 8:06 am)

Tray-

I was relieved to stay here, but I couldn't stay here; look what happened! The monsters all thought we were here. "Jason, can you send something to tell me where you are? Then I'll come find you guys later." I could hardly get the words out 'cause I was so out of breath. "Sure. I'll send you an Iris message." I nodded. "Ok." He kissed me on the cheek and then they set off. I went into the tent they'd left for me and went to sleep. I woke up when I heard a twig snap. I quietly and carefully got out of the tent. "Great, right after I had no nightmares for once," I muttered annoyed. I took out my knife and looked around. Someone grabbed me and put a cloth to my mouth. I tried to stay awake, I kicked and  slashed, but whoever was holding me was mega tough, and probably not human. Eventualy I fainted, of course. When I woke up I was tied to an upright table. I opened my eyes. I was in an arena. A voice boomed, "Tray Martin. You have disobeyed me. Now you must be executed!" A million thoughts ran through my head at once. The one killing me the most was WHY HADN'T I GONE WITH EVERYONE ELSE?!?!?!? I knew the titan guy wanted my head on a stick! How could I have been so stupid! "Great," I muttered. A crowd of monsters and evil demi-gods roared. I even saw a seven year old girl with a head the size of a cantalope cheering. Who was her parent? The Greek god of huge heads?!" Near the exit I saw something shinning. Someone threw out a drachma and the mist took it. Then Jason's head apeared. The entire crowd was silent. "Tray? What have you done now?" he asked. "Well long story short I'm in an arena and a titan wants to kill me!" I yelled. Panic entering voice now. Which made me panic more. "Right, ok, well. Anything else?" he asked. "Ya, I think I'm in a colliseum in Greece, and I can't move anything, and--" "Wait, Colliseum in GREECE?!" Great, now he sounded panicky. "Uh, ya, the sign say something like Colliseum FL or somethin' like that. But anyway GET ME OUTA HERE!" I shouted. Jason nodded and the mist faded. The evil voice came back. "Someone from the American world now knows that we're here. We must get this done, fast!" Okay, now I really started to panic. First came a troll with an appetite: I banished him to the Underworld Hades style. Then a couple of Cyclopses came, but they ended up killing each other over a fight about who got to eat me. Next was a Hellhound, but he plain and simply refused to kill me. I scratched behind his ear with my foot. He ended up eating some guy in the first row. Then they called animal control, but they said they didn't operate in Greece. Then some fury got fustrated and broke the phone. I was a little annoyed myself, but the hellhound was cute and fluffy. He tried getting me out, but they tased him. So I called them some very strong words. In ancient Greek and English. They didn't exactly like that. The next challenger was an ex-hunter of Artemis. She looked old and gross. I called her that, and her arrow was so off it hit some monster with a dog head in the fourth row. She tried again and that one hit me. In the arm though. They all cheered. I didn't get it. It was only my arm. Uh-oh, I felt the pain of the cut rise to my shoulder. Poison. "Gods I hope Jason gets here fast." I muttered painfully. The poison was making me woosy. The door burst open and Jason, Nell, Sam, and Jenifer ran in, swords and knives up. Everyone stopped dead and ran except for a couple of brave ones like cantalope-head, and a cyclops, and, call me crazy, but I think a centaur. Hey, I was dazed, it could have been Medusa for all I cared. My eyes fluttered closed, and the things holding me to the table came off. I fell to the floor unmoving. I wasn't dead, but I was close to it. I heard Jason and Sam yell my name. Then I blacked out.

submitted by ~Sam~
(March 5, 2011 - 11:29 am)

This is an amazing RP. Please finish it.

submitted by Elizabeth D., age 14, Texas
(March 6, 2011 - 6:45 pm)

@ Elizabeth D-- I hope we finish it too!! :)

 

Sam—

 

“Jason!” I yelled desperately. “Medusa’s head! Get it out! I’llgo to Tray.” Monsters and Demi-gods advanced on all of us. I silently slipped away and ran to Tray’s unconscious body. I put my fingers to her throat. Her pulse was low and I could feel it getting smaller and smaller. What had happened?! I scanned her body carefully and noticed her right arm. It was covered in blood.I felt a queezy feeling in my stomach as I pulled up her black sleeve. I gasped. Tray’s arm was a greenish tinge all the way up to her shoulder. Poison. It was moving fast. I needed to get Tray out of there but where?! Suddenly I heard a yell. “Sam! We don’t have the head!” We were doomed. 1000s of monstersand demi-gods were waiting for us and in the middle of it all, Tray was dying.I looked at my friends. Their faces were full of fear. I couldn’t leave thembut Tray… She had to be saved. How could I get her out of here. I thought hardand felt something warm and wet on my shoulder. I looked up at the giant headof a hellhound. I drew my knife and it whimpered. I couldn’t hurt him. An ideastruck me. Shadow travel(Is that what it’s called??). I grabbed Tray’s limparms and dragged her to where the hell hound sat. “Ok buddy. You see this girl.”The hellhound drooled and wagged his tail. “Very good. Ok, she’s dying and ifyou don’t hurry up and let me jump on your back she will die. We don’t wantthat to happen, do we? So, let me up and she can throw you a bone later. Gotit?” The hellhound barked and lay down. I struggled with Tray but finally gother on the hellhound’s back. “Ok! Thank you,” I scratched the animal behind hisears. “Now your job is to bring us to…” I thought for a moment. “ToMassachusetts. Yes, Cape Cod Massachusetts and while you’re at it maybe near acabin.” The hellhound seemed to take that all in and suddenly leaped up on it’shind legs and shot towards a wall. I screamed and held onto Tray. Darkness. Isuddenly felt something soft and warm under me. Sand. The hellhound staggeredslightly and fell over in a deep sleep. I looked at Tray. Her face was drainedof all color. “Tray!” I felt her pulse. It was weak. “Please! Stay with me!Tray, don’t die! I’ll help you. Hold on.” I grabbed her and dragged her towardsa white beach cabin.

 

submitted by Elizabeth M , age 11, Germany: stuck
(March 7, 2011 - 11:33 am)

@Elizabeth D.: Thanks, we've been working hard! But a thought just occured to me, what are we going to do when we finish this uber long quest? Maybe we could make a whole new generation of demigods to take our places? ;)

//Jenifer//

I wiped the sweat/blood from my forehead. Tray was dying. She was probably already dead. Tears joined in with the blood, but I stopped. She wouldn't want anyone to cry for her. She'll be alright, so we had to worry about our selves. Selfish, right? But anyways, a demigod was chasing me down. I recognized him, an undecided at Camp Half Blood. He was always in a grouchy mood, I though that he just couldn't ever sleep. I guess he resented his parents for leaving him, but hey, it's not like it's my fault. If I survive this thing, I'mm going to becom a demigod therapist. These kids really needed to cool it. But anyways, he was running towards me with a not-so-actractive looking sword. It was covered with green whatever and blood. He jumped towards my head, but I prarried his swipe. I pushed him twowards the ground and his sword rattled away to another fighting pair. I jumped on him and poked my sword under his chin. "You come to Camp Half Blood or say goodbye to your head." He was sweating by now and scrambled out from my sword, running towards the exit. I chuckled: "He he he." and moved on to another kid. This was fun!

submitted by ZB <3percy+potter :D
(March 7, 2011 - 5:12 pm)

(While Tray's blacked out)

Sam brought Tray up to the cabin porch and nocked on the door. A plump woman in a green flowery dress, and a pink apron opened it. She had short curly gray hair and startling blue eyes. "Can you please help me, my friend was poisaned, and she's dying. Please help." Sam pleaded. The woman quickly nodded. "Of course, bring her in here." Sam brought was trying to dicide how to bring her in, when Jason showed up. "Jenifer and Nell are, er, finishing up. They told me to come check on you and Tray. Is everything ok?" He asked. He looked at her greenish arm half hidden under a puled up gray sleve. "What happened?" He demanded. "Poison, I don't know what from. Bring her inside." Jason picked Tray up and brought her in after Sam. "Who's this?" The woman asked. "That's my friend Jason, he was a little behind us, but he's here now." Sam said. The woman nodded. "Put her on the couch." She turned to the hall. "MARK! Bring your medical suplies! There's an injured girl here." She turned back to them. "My husbands a doctor." She said. "Awsome!" Jason was defiately relived. A man walked in he had graying black hair and pale skin, he had the Elvis hairstyle, and he looked very intelegent. "Oh, I see. would you all step out of the room please?" He asked. Neither Jason or Sam liked the idea of leaving a dying Tray in the hands of a stranger, but they had little choice. They walked out of the room. The woman who said her name was Grace made them cookies, but neither had much of an apatite. After an hour the Mark said they could come back in. There was blood all over the couch to start. There were some bloody doctors tools on a small table, and Tray still had little color. Her arm had resumed it's origonal pale state. There was also a vile of green liquid next to the doctors instruments. "She'll prbubly wake up again in about an hour." "Great, what's that green stuff?" Sam asked. "The poison, it's unlike any other I have ever seen, tell me, where did she get it?" He asked. Jason and Sam exchanged a glance. They dicided to tell the truth. "We don't know, we were meeting her after school, and we just found her like that." Jason said. "It's only 2 in the afternoon." Mark said. "Half-day." Sam said quickly. He nodded. "Well we really need to get her home, do you think we could have that to show her dad, he's sort of an expert." Jason said truthfully. "Sure." Mark handed them the vile. Sam took it and put it in her bag. Jason picked up Tray, and after hasty good-byes they left. They used shadow travel to meet Jenifer and Nell at the Hollywood sign. "We need to tell Hades what happened." Jenifer said imediately, noticing Tray in Jason's arms. Tray was wearing a gray, blood-stained long sleve shirt with the sleves rolled up to her elbows. Black skinny jeans were tucked into black combat boots. Her black hair was a little messy, and there were bandages around her forhead, and the place on her arm where the arrow had hit her. They opened the gateway to the underworld, and walked in. Hades was waiting for them in his palace and he looked angry. "What happened to my daughter?" He asked Jason. Jason looked a little pannicky. "S-Some how, p-poison got in her arm through a cut, and a mortal doctor fixed her. We have the poison to show you. S-so you could tell what kind it is." Hades glared at them the whole time Sam got the poison out. "Here, can you tell us what kind it is?" She asked. Hades gahsped. "It's, it's the poison of the great sea serpent (I made that up). A creature I thought your father had locked up." Hades snapped at Sam and Nell. "If she has been infected with this she will forever hold it's curse until the monster is slayed (I made that up to)." He muttered angrily. Sam and Nell exchanged a glance. "W-what curse?" Nell asked. "Every time she goes in water, she will sufacate as if she is drouning. And drinking water doesn't count." They all looked at eachother sadly.

(Writers block, what next?)

submitted by ~Sam~
(March 7, 2011 - 5:16 pm)

@ ZB-- After we finish this we should make a new RP. The same characters?? 

I swear that I will do everything to finish this RP. If you agree please say "I swear."

 

Sam--

 

I looked at Tray's pale face. Cursed. How could that be? Why did this happen? "Sir, umm how can we stop the serpent?" I asked quietly. "You think I the great Hades will tell you that?! Leave! Figure it out yourself you arrogant little pipsqueak! And leave my daughter here." HE demanded. "NO!" I yelled. "There is no way I will leave my friend in the hands of you... you... you MONSTER!" Ok, the wrong choice of words. Hades eyes were full of fire. I backed up and stepped on Jason's toe. "GET OUT OF HERE!!! YOU WILL REGRET THIS, SAMANTHA DAUGHTER OF POSEIDEN!" I felt like I'd been punched in the face. I hated it when people called me by my real name, especially this moron. Suddenly a wind started to blow around all of us and in a minute we landed on soft grass somewhere in... Well... where exactly? I looked around and found Tray lying on the ground. I checked her pulse quickly. Shallow but she would be OK. Her face was red and I felt a fever. "Guys! Set up camp and get Tray's sleeping bag out!" I cried. I put Tray's heavy head in my lap. Jason ran over with the sleeping bag and we worked Tray into it wrapping her in the fleece. By then one tent was put up. "Let me sit with her." I said quietly. I dragged Tray into the tent with the help of Jennifer and sat down exhausted.

***********

 A small moan reached my ears and I sat up. Tray's eyes were half open and looked at me confused. "Where am I?" She said in a slow hoarse voice. "I don't know. We-We just came back from your dad's and well umm I kind of offended him but other than that everything's fine." Tray stared at me and tried to sit up using her arm. She gasped and winced falling back down on her bag. "What's wrong with my arm?!" She asked. "Poison." I didn't say anything else. I didn't want to tell her. Not yet. 

submitted by Elizabeth M , age 11, Germany: stuck
(March 8, 2011 - 4:15 am)

Elizebeth, I swear. I'll do whatever I can to finish this RP.

Tray-

I knew there was something Sam wasn't telling me. I could always tell when someone was lying. "Are you ok?" She asked. "Do you feel fine." "Define fine." I tried to get up again. winced at the pain and crashed down again. "What happened with Hades?" I asked in a broken sounding voice. "Well, he wanted you to stay with him. But I said I'd never leave you with a monster. He kinda hated that." Sam finished shyly. I kinda laughed. Well as best I could. "Well I'm not entirely sure I'd want to stay there, but I would like to see him." I muttered half to myself. Was there some other reason why Hades wanted to keep me in the underworld? Was there something here that wasn't there? It was all to confusing. "So, Sam, what was the poison from?" I asked. She looked at me with fearful eyes. "Sam, what was the poison from?" I asked in a very serious voice. Before she could awnser something bit my leg. "OW!" I shouted. I looked at my pale leg which was now bleeding. "Great. What the heck!" She handed my a band-aid, but I waved it away. "It's ok, it's not that bad." "Tray," Sam started. "Ya?" "There's something else I need to tell you."  "Hey, wait is she up?! Bring her out here Sam!" Jason's voice came from outside the tent. With great help from Sam, and a LOT of energy, I managed to get outside the tent and onto a bench. I was panting when we were done. "You look great!" Jason hugged me. Jenifer and Nell bothed huged me to. "We thought you were dead, if it hadn't been  for that mortal doctor you'd still have that serpents poison in ya!" Jason said. My face turned serious. Sam shoved her hand and arm across her neck. As if to say, no you idiot! I havn't told her yet! "Ooops?" Jason asked. Sam glared at him. "Tray, we have something to tell you." Jenifer said. They sat down, Sam next to me, Jason on a log of his own, and Jenifer and Nell together.

submitted by ~Sam~
(March 8, 2011 - 4:37 pm)

Argh. I'm really sorry guys, but I have a really bad flu thingy. The doctor says that it might be pneumonia (sp?). So I'm in a sorta writer's block. I guess. So, I'm still contributing, just can't right now. :D

 

Oh, ZB, we're so sorry you're sick. We hope you get well real soon. Get lots of rest and do just what the doctor says.

Admin

submitted by ZB <3percy+potter :D
(March 8, 2011 - 11:58 pm)

Get Well Soon! 

 

Sam—

 

I looked at Tray’s confused but poised face. I knew she wantedto be brave (as usual) but I could sense that deep down she was scared. Ididn’t say anything though. Everyone was quiet and looked at Tray nervously.“Guys! For Pete’s sake! Are you going to tell me or not?!” Nell looked at meand nodded. I gulped and opened my mouth. “The poison in your arm was seaserpent poison. And umm.. well, when you get near water you will have a feelingas if you’re drowning until someone kills this serpent. At least that’s whatHades told us.” Tray’s brow was creased in thought taking my words in. “ButSam! We can do this! Your shell! That’s all we need! Ok, guys next stop: thebeach!” Everyone seemed shocked. “Tray, you can’t go near the water remember?!”Jennifer said bewildered. “Of course not! We’ll shadow travel to right outsidethe bay in… Santa Barbara! There a few of you can wait with me while a few ofyou go kill some sea serpent.” Her voice was full of utter joy at the ideawhich wasn’t that bad. “We need to divide ourselves up! Jason stays with Trayand Jennifer and I go with Sam. “ Nell decided. “Well then let’s go!” The fiveof us walked over to the now half awake greyhound.  Tray jumped on and then the rest. Tray lowered her mouthtowards the dog’s large ear and whispered something. I felt a strong wind andthen darkness. We were dropped from the dog’s back and he rolled over, asleep.“Ok, come on guys! Let’s go!” Nell, Jennifer and I walked out of the clearingto what we thought may be our doom. How would I summon the sea serpent?! As ifhaving read my mind Jennifer said: “I’ll make the wind pick up. That’ll blowthe waves and then Sam can swim out when she sees the Serpent. “ We nodded. Aswe got close to the water Jennifer put her hands out and seemed to saysomething. Suddenly a huge gust of wind blew over the water pushing it fromside to side. I shaded my eyes from the blazing sun and spotted a small patchof green about 50 yards from the shore. “I SEE HIM!!” I yelled over the wind.“IF ANYTHING HAPPENS THEN WELL GOOD-BYE!!!” I waved and gulped down the lumpwhich had formed in my throat. I threw off my grey sweatshirt, shoes and rantowards the water. I hit it hard and felt power surge through me. I hit my armson the surface of the cool water and swam to where I’d seen the green spot. Iput my head under water and screamed. Two beady green eyes stared at me. “Calmdown!” I said to myself. The monster lunged at me. Panic time!! I screamed andflew back missing his bite by an inch. “Ha! You didn’t think that would happendid you!” I had celebrated a little to late. I dodged another lunge. I took theshell from the string around my neck. What did I have to do? Open it. A clear voice said in my head.I swirled around but no one was there. That was my mistake. I had turned aroundon my enemy. I felt a giant knife of pain run through my back as it’s clawripped at me. I bit my teeth together and opened the sea shell. A blast of firewhich I had never seen before shot through the water. It was blue and it burnedup around the creature. It’s screams pierced my ears. I closed the shell withthe fire dying there was only a small scale left. I swam back through the waterand came to the beach. Right then I noticed the pain that had been doused bythe water. I fell over and foam came out of my mouth. “Nell, Jen…” My voice wascut off by a scream and then things went very dark.

 

submitted by Elizabeth M , age 11, Germany: stuck
(March 9, 2011 - 2:24 am)