Short Story Contest

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Short Story Contest

Short Story Contest

The prize is making the MC in my next big writing project.

Rules:

Must be less than 200 words.

Must have some character developement

Must be sci-fi

What I will be judging:

Character development

Twist(s)

Is it Sci-Fi?

Length. I would like a very, very short story to win. 

 

submitted by Gared
(December 26, 2016 - 8:08 pm)

I have never written a story that short!!!!

It's always been 500 words and up.

But I'll try. 

submitted by Riverfrost
(December 27, 2016 - 5:59 pm)

Oliver Patrick's edged towards his starship as shouts of anguish echoed around him. He new there was one thing he had to do. His fathers last words before he tried to make contact with the planet Earth and disappeared, were echoing in his head, now mingled with the frantic cries for help. 'Oliver,my son, he had said, "remember me.'

As Oliver's starship rocketed towards the planet, he muttered the words under his breath. He new what he had to do, find the Amulet no matter what. It he'd been stolen by humans years ago. Even Oliver didn't know the full extent of the Amulets powers, all he new was that it protected his home planet and that was enough for him. Oliver landed his ship and took a deep breath before opening the hatch. Outside was the armies of humans shouting in a strange language readying their weapons. Oliver walked down the ramp slowly. "I come in peace." He said but he knew they couldn't understand him. Suddenly, out of the crowd of curious humans, stepped a tall burly figure. This was no human. This was his father. 

submitted by BookBug, age 9, Australia
(December 27, 2016 - 6:15 pm)

Cool. Nice twist.

submitted by Gared
(December 27, 2016 - 10:05 pm)

Joining!

submitted by September
(December 27, 2016 - 8:50 pm)

I know it has to be original, and it will be. I just have one question, or two?

Can I base it off my fanfiction?

Do superheroes count as sci-fi? 

submitted by Riverfrost
(December 28, 2016 - 9:38 am)

No, it cannot be based on your fan-fiction, and superheroes are Sci-Fi.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 12:51 pm)

Gared, I think it was unfair what you said to Abi. I understand why, but there are different types of Sci-Fi. And not everyone has the exact same writing style as you, or writing preferences. 

If Abi had written her story your way, it wouldn't have been her story, and it wouldn't have been the same. It would have been Gared's story. And the whole point of a story contest is enjoying other people's writing styles, not changing their story until it's unrecognizable as their's. I'm not telling you that you have to choose Abi, I'm just saying that I don't think you should change her story, just say you don't enjoy it as much, if that's the case. 

submitted by I'dRatherNotSay
(December 28, 2016 - 9:49 am)

I didn't change her story, I just gave her a tip, because she said she had trouble fitting everything into her story. I am judging the Sci-Fi element using PATTERN, if you have concerns about wether or not the story was SCi-Fi.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 12:53 pm)

Hi! So this is probably really weird because I haven't appeared in probably a couple years, but I want to write something for this contest! I love flash fiction, and I've just recently gotten into hard sci-fi! Just two questions:

1. What's the deadline for the contest? I looked but didn't see any mention of it anywhere.

2. What's PATTERN? I googled it but didn't find anything that looked like a set of guidelines defining sci-fi, and that seems to be what you're referring to? I'm really curious!

submitted by Pied Piper, age 16, back from the dead
(December 28, 2016 - 1:34 pm)

I am judging Friday.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 7:32 pm)

It is a few parts of Sci-Fi, like the planet, enviroment, or resources, which determine whether something is Sci-Fi or not.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 7:44 pm)

Pied Piper, oh my gosh, you're not dead! we've missed you! 

-HSG  

submitted by Horse Spirit Girl
(December 28, 2016 - 11:37 pm)

Actually, it's perfectly fine. I think Gared's tips were quite fair. I don't write things this short very often and he has a point. Mine had a lot of unnessecary baggage and literally no plot. He wasn't demanding that I change it so much as giving suggestions.

submitted by Abigail S., age 12, Nose in a Book
(December 28, 2016 - 1:11 pm)

Wow, I think that is....harsh, really harsh. So guys, I don't want to figure out cyber problems for my winter break. So please be nice! 

 

I just reread all Gared's and Abi's comments. I think they are all considerate and kind, suggestive but not demanding. And I think they considerate a friendly discussion.

Admin

submitted by JediGirl, age 13, Somewhere in the Galaxy
(December 28, 2016 - 4:14 pm)

I am not continuing the discussion, so there is nothing to fear.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 8:51 pm)