Short Story Contest

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Short Story Contest

Short Story Contest

The prize is making the MC in my next big writing project.

Rules:

Must be less than 200 words.

Must have some character developement

Must be sci-fi

What I will be judging:

Character development

Twist(s)

Is it Sci-Fi?

Length. I would like a very, very short story to win. 

 

submitted by Gared
(December 26, 2016 - 8:08 pm)

@Admin, I didnt mean Abi and Gared I meant that to I'dRatherNotSay. But yes I agree to you admin(s) that their conversation was very friendly and helpful. 

@Gared Thank you for ending this, I am really sick of people being mean. Already got that at school. 

submitted by JediGirl, age 12, Somewhere in the Galaxy
(December 29, 2016 - 8:37 am)

I'm in! I've never joined a short story contest before!

The compound was dark. That's all it was. Until a crack appeared. Sera raised her head. "The world is in disaster. It's a war zone. Countless people have died. We are the only ones left." a voice said. "So, how many are we?" asked Sera. She was taking this exceedingly calmly. "We is the two of us." said the voice. "And right now, a rogue atomic bomb is heading our way so if you want to survive, I suggest you jump into that ravine into endless space below your door that I am already in." Sera jumped. 

submitted by Random Person, age 1-100, Somewhere
(December 28, 2016 - 11:59 am)

Good job putting so much backstory into such a small place.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 12:55 pm)

Her first instinct was to hide. A noise, any noise, could be anything as Via had learned. It was hard now, with the technology that could change everything at the disposal of the man bent on destroying the world as she knew it. An incessant knocking at the door of the compound, followed by a gruff yell brought her back to reality. They were here. No. They were early. She cursed herself. She should’ve expected surprises— she should’ve known better. But it was too late for regrets now, as she pulled Grandma’s old hovercraft from the hall closet. Another voice joined the low growl of the officer’s. A voice that froze her to the depths of her soul. A voice that called her name in the same lilt that she had heard all her life.
“Honey? It’s safe to come out— he won’t hurt you.” her mother called from outside the doorway. She ignored the voice— the voice that brought back too many memories— and dragged the craft to the balcony of the window. She wrenched the hatch open and climbed in, casting one last glance at the door before jerking the throttle and flying free.  

 

 

submitted by September, 196 words
(December 28, 2016 - 4:07 pm)

Admins, do you know why this weird formatting always happens to me? I'd like to know so I can avoid it next time. . . Thanks!!!

 

I think it happens because you are copying and pasting from some word processing program/application. I'm on an iMac. I copied your text and pasted it into TextEdit, then selected Make Plain Text. Then copied and pasted that back onto Chatterbox. If you don't work on a Mac, maybe you can figure out how to do it another way.

Admin

submitted by @Admins, September
(December 28, 2016 - 8:37 pm)

Oh, ok, thanks Admins! I copied and pasted it from Google Docs, so maybe that was the problem? 

 

Maybe.

Admin

submitted by September
(December 28, 2016 - 8:59 pm)

How did you get the letters to be red? I want to know how I can do that.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 8:52 pm)

I'm actually not sure. . . on a side note, my story is 196 words. . I know, it looks long. . . 

submitted by @Gared ( Sept)
(December 29, 2016 - 3:31 am)

It's not great, and not as short as you probably wanted, but it is under 200 words. It was really fun to write, although it probably doesn't make a lot of sense. XD  

 

The woman blasted a Vere-Jobu intent on sucking her blood into a wall, then turned to smile sweetly at the man fighting next to her.

“That’s a baker’s dozen. You?” The man fired a laser at a Vere-Jobu about to overwhelm his partner.

“Fourteen. Watch your back.” They pushed their way forward, shooting anything that moved.

“They said I was crazy to come with you.” She laughed.

“You are crazy.” He punched an access code into a keypad, and ran into the next room. She hurried to the central control panel, while he watched the entry.

“You know what’s about to happen?” She was trying furiously to pull down the shield.

“I wish you hadn’t come.” He shot another Vere-Jobu, as she punched the final code.

“Shield disabled. Solar breach imminent. Lockdown initiated.” A voice boomed out over the speakers, and the door swooshed shut.

“We saved humanity. I thought it would feel more epic.” The woman walked away from the panel, and collapsed next to the man, who sported several bite marks.

“I’m so sorry it had to be this way.” She reached out for his hand, then the station blew up.  

submitted by Mirax T. , age 12, The Errant Venture
(December 28, 2016 - 8:08 pm)

Wow... it is so confusing, and yet makes absolutely perfect sense. That could be a great longer story.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 8:58 pm)

Thanks Gared. It was fun/really hard to get it under 200 words. 

submitted by Mirax T. , age 12, The Errant Venture
(December 28, 2016 - 9:29 pm)

I will be releasing results Friday, so please have your entries in by 1:00 Pacific Time tomorrow.

submitted by Gared
(December 28, 2016 - 11:51 pm)

Which is 3:00 Central Time.

submitted by Helpful person
(December 29, 2016 - 12:28 am)

Thank you, Helpful Person. 

submitted by Gared
(December 29, 2016 - 11:57 am)

Here's my story:

Shadows

Raven and Crow flew the night sky. Two humans pretending to be birds. They alighted onto a roof. Their hang-glider like wings folded up behind them. Raven watched the eyes behind Crow's feathery mask. They were dark. Probably thinking dark thoughts. Her voice tried to reassure him. "You're going to be ok. You'll come back before you know it. Then we can rule the world togethor." 

Crow grunted, trying to hide from her. He looked up to the growing shaft of light. Blindingly bright, he closed his eyes to the UFO. Raising his arms, he raised his wings. 

The light became brighter and brighter. Raven watched him get more and more transparent. She stepped back from the edge of the building. The wind was picking up, threatening to throw her off. 

Crow, almost invisible, turned back to Raven. He lowered his arms. "Remember the Shadows, Raven." His eyes flashed bright red, and then he was gone. In a blinding burst and then the black of night returned. The wind returned to normal. 

Raven flew after the UFO, only to be left in its shadows.

The End

 

submitted by Riverfrost
(December 29, 2016 - 8:30 am)