I was thinking,

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I was thinking,

I was thinking, we could start a new story chain. You make up a new character, but they CAN'T be from the 21st century (they'll wind up there later). They have to be related to someone famous but NOT an actor, actress, singer, etc.

Mine is: Dehlia Ludington.

Related to a heroine of the American Revolution: Sybil Ludington.

Lives in Fredericksburg NY, 1777

Suddenly transported to the 21st century.

Age: Unkown

Short length blonde hair, blue-gray eyes, exactly 5 feet, rather pale.

Personality: Quiet most of the time, yet speaks out passionately when its something she cares about, strong, dependable, loving.

Hope ya'll like my idea!  

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule, age Unknown, Fredericksburg 1777
(November 20, 2012 - 5:12 pm)

Or... If you do want Elexhiia to die, we could try and use this as a serious BANG to get this thread off the ground, which I've been planning and plotting how to do! So... Also, if SC isn't writing for now, I'll take over the villian again. Or perhaps we could even add another... Thoughts? Top with this thread! TOP! Poke, kick, shove!

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule
(March 6, 2013 - 9:28 pm)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEK! I hope my leaving wasn't the cause of this thread's death. I'll come back if that's what it takes.

submitted by Tovah. L, age 11, Massachussetts
(March 10, 2013 - 1:03 pm)

No dear Tovah! Actually, since this thread is dead, I'm just going to use your death as a serious BANG to get this thread going! I'm just going hard with this post, not sure what I'm going to write, but it's just going somewhere. So for the !BANG! I'm going to have the villian kill Elexhiia off, and if that doesn't fly, we'll do something else.

We'd been searching all night, without a trace of the boy. We met up at the bridge as agreed. Elexhiia and Felix looked pretty dismal. "Nothing," they reported sadly. The night was dark. Nobody was around, and even the street lights cast hollow light upon us. "Well," Elexhiia started half heartedly. "We still have this." She held up the small bottle of time tears. "I'm not sure how many of us it will get home, but we can see." We all looked at each other. A few of us had the chance to go home. The rest might have to stay, and figure out another way. Suddenly I heard a scuffling behind us. I turned just in time to see a figure hurl something toward us. I shrieked and tried to duck, but it skimmed my cheek. Dora screamed, and Errol and Felix yelled. I stood slowly, and stared in the direction where the object had come from. Errol and Felix ran after the fleeing figure. I stood motionless. This all happened in a matter of seconds. I felt blood trickling down my cheek. Dora gasped. I turned, and what I saw caused tears to come to my eyes. Elexhiia stood, a shocked expression. She held a blood-coated knife in one hand, her hand on her stomach, blood seeping through. She staggered and collapsed. I knelt beside her, and moved her hand. A large red splotch was growing bigger on her shirt. Her face was pale, and her breath came in gasps. I yanked my jacket off, took the knife, and slashed it into strips. Dora knelt beside me and started helping. I placed the strips on the wound, trying to clot the blood. Elexhiia had her eyes closed, her breath coming in gasps. Errol and Felix returned, their eyes growing wide at the sight of Elexhiia. "Run down and wet these rags," I said, passing some of what used to be my jacket to Felix, who ran down to the river and dipped them in. Errol knelt down on the other side of Elexhiia. Felix came back and handed Dora the rags, which she applied to Elexhiia's forehead. She coughed, and her eyes fluttered open. She stared at us all. Then, hands shaking, she pressed the time tears into Errol's hands and said; "Use them for yourselves. I'm glad I could know you all. Even you," she said, looking at Errol during the last part. Then she gasped one last time, and she didn't move again.

 

So this is really really pathetic, but I thought Elexhiia and Errol to make peace somewhat.  So ya'll can totally change this. But I wanted a bang here! So, Elexhiia is dead. We've got to move from here. So. SOMEBODY ELSE WRITE!!!

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule, age ageless, Boston 2012
(March 10, 2013 - 8:10 pm)

Okay... so Elexiah is dead. Maybe Tovah could write one last part... just a thought... about her going back to the century she came from. Like, she is protected by something that makes it that she can't die in another time...I just don't really want to let her go.

~Dora~

I stared at the body, limp and lifeless. Tears prickled in my eyes.

"She's dead," Deliah whispered, the shock obviously showing in her voice.

Fliex shook his head, "No,no" he said, "our last hope. Gone."

"Our last hope!" I exploded. "Our last hope! She's dead and all you say is 'our last hope'!?"

Fleix stared at me. "I-I, look, I don't mean that. I'm sorry for her, but we were so close to getting home!"

Errol turned the small bottle around in his hand, "She left these..."

The silence settled over and the night grew colder.

submitted by True S.
(March 11, 2013 - 5:30 pm)

Yes, I quite agree with True! I didn't necessarily want to let her go either. Please write one last part, dear Tovah!

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule
(March 11, 2013 - 5:58 pm)

The pain was unbearable. No! I wasn't supposed to go like this. I was invincible! And yet here I was, dying. I had always been that person who only cared about themselves and so I decided to change that.

"Use them for yourselves," I gasped and turned to Errol. "Even you."

Every breath killed. Red began to fill my vision. I managed to croak out one word.

"Please."

My body went rigid, but somehow I wasn't dead. Images of glass shattering filled my mind. I remembered that moment when the time tears were released. The moment when I came here. A tear rolled down from the corner of my eye. That's when the sensation began. The journey through the dimensions was different this time. I saw my mom smiling at me. I landed with a thud. My body was on fire. All I could see was red and I knew that in any time period I would be dead... but this, this was the future.

 

I survived.

submitted by Tovah. L, age 11, Massachussetts
(March 12, 2013 - 5:14 pm)

Okay, so, yeah! Elexhiia's not really dead, so, I'm tweaking the death scene slightly from our view, and going on.

Dehlia ~

I watched as Elexhiia, slowly drawing her final breathes, began to shimmer, like a mirage. We all leaned back slightly. She gave a final smile, and was gone. "Where did she go?" Felix asked. Errol studied the bottle of time tears. "Perhaps to another place in time," Dora suggested. "Maybe she isn't dead after all." I nodded in agreement. "I think Dora's right. Now, what to do now?" I looked at everyone. It struck me that Elexhiia had been our plan. But now... Nobody was quite sure. "We go for the other bottle of time tears," Dora said resolutely. Again I nodded. "Between that bottle and another, we should be able to make back to our own times," I said, staring at the bottle in Errol's hand. The sky was still dark, but I knew we only had a few hours till daybreak. "Let's get some sleep, then go looking," Errol suggested. He leaned against the bridge and shut his eyes. Felix lay down, cap over eyes. Dora and I slipped farther under the bridge and lay down. A pang hit me hard suddenly. The fully realization that Elexhiia was gone came tumbling on me like a ton of bricks. We'd only known each other for a short time, but even through our differences, I'd rather grown to like her. A tear escaped my eye. And I feared what tomorrow would bring. If we'd lose another one of our group.

 

Okay, so please! Somebody write the next piece! We need a SERIOUS goal, not just catching Max! Ideas?

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule, age ageless, Under the Bridge
(March 13, 2013 - 6:15 pm)

Ergh! This is dead, and I'm reviving! WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN NEXT?!?! Time tears, Max, what? Top with this! TOP! POKE! SHOVE! ATOMIC BOMB!

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule
(March 16, 2013 - 12:16 pm)

Revunge.

Sweet sweet revunge...

submitted by L
(March 16, 2013 - 5:23 pm)

*rubs chin thoughtfully, then grins maniachally* Yes, yes I rather like that! How should we do it? Hmmm. I rather like explosions!...

Cappie says cpox. I think he means chicken pox.

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule
(March 17, 2013 - 10:00 am)

So, I just posted, so, who would like to start us on our road to revenge?!

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule
(March 17, 2013 - 4:41 pm)

Meehee. I'm getting the next part. Lotsa introspection and random descriptors.

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Errol turns the amber bottle in his fingers, over and over and over. Trapped within the cool brown glass was his key home, back to his time, away from all of this madness. End over end the tiny vessel rolls down his palm, then he turns his hand and it reverses direction.

Cork over glass over cork over glass. If I leave them now, if I just pull this sad excuse for a stopper out and do whatever it is you're supposed to do with them, I'm home free. His thin, pale fingers dance toward the cork and stop there, curled around the neck of the vial like indesicive pythons.

His eyes cut over to the dark stain on the ground, the only evidence that remains of Elexhiia's unexpected departure from this world.

Why me? he asks himself. Why give me the time tears? I'm just a random guy from Tennessee.

He tosses the bottle into the grass at his feet and leans his head back against the rough bark. The scarf around his neck is suddenly very itchy. Ripping it off, he shifts his position multiple times until Felix smacks his foot and tells him to stop making so much noise.

"Sorry," Errol mutters. 

I know what I need to do.

"Guys, we're going to New York City."

submitted by L
(March 17, 2013 - 5:28 pm)

OK! So I'm bored and I need a new thread so I'm going to rejoin in a somewhat un-orthodox way. Here's my idea:

Elexhiia has survived but is stuck in her time because of a new dictator who has taken control and banished time tears. Elexhiia misses her new friends and wants to help. She starts doing research on the boy in striped pajamas (that movie is so sad, but that's not what I am talking about) and other topics that might be useful. She writes notes and letters to the group through an illegal organization holding the last free stash of timetears.

Do you guys like the idea? I do.

submitted by Tovah. L, age 11, Massachussetts
(March 17, 2013 - 6:31 pm)

@ Tovah; Sure! That sounds good!

So, I'll write the next part...

Dehlia ~

I wasn't sure how long I'd been asleep. Not long, evidently. The sun was just starting to come up. I listened to the steady breathing of Dora, and one of the boys shifting. Errol then startled me and jarred the others awake by stating; "Guys, we're going to New York City." I sat up and stared over at him. "What?" I asked, not fully comprehending what he just said. "We're going to New York City," he replied simply. "Why?" Felix asked, sitting beside up next to Errol.  "How?" Dora asked almost simultaniously with Felix. "Yes, how?" I also asked, staring at Errol, wondering if Elexhiia's death had harder of a toll on Errol than I thought. "I may not be the expert on geography, especially not in this time, but New York City, New York is over two hundred (looked on map, I think I'm right) miles away! I haven't seen any buggies, and even so, we don't have any money." I paused a moment. Errol had the time tears in his hand. "Why do we need to go to New York City?"

 

So, I'll stop here. Why do we need to go to New York?

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule, Under the Bridge
(March 17, 2013 - 7:40 pm)

Yea,Tovah's back!

And I would write,but I think that Errol should tell why we need to get to New York.

submitted by True S.
(March 18, 2013 - 4:46 pm)