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This is basically about us getting accepted at a superhero academy. We will work out more of the plot later!
Name: Aveleen ORourke
Appearance: Gold hair, white skin, BRIGHT green eyes
Power: Telekinesis
Personality: Smart, bossy, funny
We can start when we 've worked out a little more of the basic plot! 
submitted by Brooke E., age 11, Arkansas
(July 18, 2014 - 8:17 pm)
(July 18, 2014 - 8:17 pm)
Bradey--
I gasp as Layla appears in the ship. She looks at Frank, mumbles a few words, and Frank replied back. I sighed. "Oh lookie here, I'm stuck on a ship with SpeedyMickSpeed, telegirl, Draco, and lion-girl." Everyone looked at me, scowling. Layla raised her eyebrows. I grumbled. "I still don't have any clue why you need me. Or why Layla is here." Layla frowned. "Neither do I. This doesn't make sense. I have also been having these weird high-pitched noises. It hurts lots."
Draco and Aveleen soon started talking and explaining everything. "So, this squid is mind controlling with high-pitched noises. Only scorions can hear it. He soon might control everything. And," added Draco, "the dragons said that Fire and Ice will destroy the squid." Oh brother. I growled. "ANDDD, why should I help you guys when you treat me like scrum! I could freeze you guys righ--" Aveleen throws me to the side of the ship.
I sigh. "Okay, Okay, I get the point. So me, Frankie, Aveleen, Drac, and Layla are gonna save the world from the evil squid? I would much rather help the squid." I then added, "But Ave here will go use for tele powers on me." Aveleenb scowled. This was wonderful. Just wonderful.
i was stuck on a ship with some weird heros trying to save the world. And they all hate me.
(September 5, 2014 - 8:11 pm)
Suddenly a flash of light goes across the main screen, and A picture of a boy appears.
"Hello, kids," he laughs.
"Aveleen. I have your mother." The screen showed a bound woman. Aveleen sucked in her breath.
Layla gasped. "Brother! what............"
"I'm not your brother. I'm Yetolyx."
"How......"
"I took your brother as my captive. I speak through him. Come get me if you want to."
The screen went black.
"It's a trap!" said Aveleen.
(September 5, 2014 - 8:52 pm)
"Aveleen's right," agreed Draco as the image on the screen disappeared. "The closer we get to Yetolyx, the more potent his mind control gets. We can't just stroll in there and expect him NOT to take control of us."
"Then what are we supposed to do, genius?" smirked Bradey. "It's not like you're smart enough to find a way to defeat this thing."
"I doubt you are either-" Bradet's grin faded. "-But I know a person who can definitely find a way."
"And who might that be, Draco?" asked Bradey sarcastically
"My aunt and sister. Trust me, they're geniuses. They invented this and this and this..." Draco pointed to every single piece of his equipment.
"Well, I can see you got none of their genes," mumbled Bradey.
Draco opened his mouth to throw another insult at Bradey, but Aveleen held up a hand and threatened to fling them both across the room. "Guys, stop it with the arguing!" she exclaimed. "You two are supposed to work TOGETHER, not against each other. But Bradey, I do think Draco has a point. His family IS super smart, and they're our only chance of defeating Yetolyx." Aveleen turned to the computer. "Summon Edna Cooper and Eleanor Taller!" she barked.
(September 6, 2014 - 9:52 am)
Tes felt a tug. A summoner! She resisited it and ran away.
(September 6, 2014 - 1:42 pm)
I'm not summoning TES, I am summoning Eleanor. They are different people and both exist in the same timeline (I'll explain HOW later).
(September 6, 2014 - 2:17 pm)
I was stunned. That was my brother... I tuned back into the conversation.
" Great, so this is another battle where this evil thing is going to control us all? Are we going to mess up the future and the past too?" I yelled out, memories flowing through me. Not a single person moved or said anything.
" You all think its my fault, don't you?" I whispered, forcing back the tears. No answer. Not a peep. Frank was looking at the ground, Aveleen was looking away, and Bradey just looked confused. Draco was the only one who was staring at me, right in the eyes, as if daring me to break down, daring me to yell out that it was his fault, meanwhile he was just planning on making it look like it was my fault even more. I bit my lip, turned, and walked out of the room, into a hallway. I stared out the window, staring at the black expanse of space, dotted here and there with thousands of stars. I heard footsteps, coming closer and closer to me.
" It wasn't your fault." I swallowed. Hard. I rounded on Draco, anger rolling off of me in waves.
" It was my fault and you know it!" I hissed, my eyes glowing a brighter yellow.
" Fine, you know what? It was both our faults!" Draco snarled back, his teeth growing a centimeter longer. I couldn't stop it. I just couldn't. A tear rolled down from the corner of my eye. Draco's expression softened, and he reached out to wipe the tear away. I hissed, smacking his hand away.
" Don't touch me," I mumbled. Draco's expression hardened again.
" You don't know do you? How hard I try to make things better?" Draco growled, his eyes glimmering angrily.
" Nothing will ever be okay. Nothing will ever go back the way it was. Ever," I hissed, and walked away, my heart dropping with each step I took. Don't expect him to call you back. Life isn't a fairytale. It never was, and it never will be.
(September 6, 2014 - 2:54 pm)
You know what, ignore my last post. We don't have to summon Edna or Eleanor, I just wanted Brooke to know that TES and Eleanor are mirror images of each other, but still different people.
On with the RP!
Draco's hair smoldered. Layla was so hard to deal with sometimes. He didn't need her to finish this mission. In fact, he didn't need anyone. Scratch that. He needed Bradey. The prophecy said so.
Draco grabbed Bradey's arm. "Will you come with me for a minute?" he said through clenched teeth.
Bradey raised an eyebrow. "Um, oookaay.."
Draco pulled Bradey into a corridor. "Alright. Bradey, the prophecy said Yetolyx could be defeated with fire and ice. It didn't say anything about the others. I say we leave and go look for Yetolyx. Now. For their sake."
"What, are you crazy?!" Bradey hissed. "Did you forget about the MIND CONTROL part? How are we going to get through that?"
Draco sighed. "We'll find a way to resist it. Now come on, let's go before the others find out we're leaving."
"We'll find a way. That's reassuring." Bradey rolled his eyes, but went with Draco anyway.
Draco and Bradey darted through some more corridors, ducking to avoid the suspicious glances of maintenance droids. Eventually, they came to a room lined with escape pods. They climbed into one.
"Do you know how to drive one of these?" Draco asked.
"I thought you did!" Bradey said in dismay.
Suddenly, Draco's dragon ears heard footsteps. Coming towards them. "They're coming! Do something!" he shouted to Bradey. Bradey started randomly pressing buttons. Fortunately, they were the right buttons to open the airlock, close the pod door, and launch the pod into space.
"Well, that was extremely lucky," Draco panted. "You almost got us sucked into the vacuum of space!"
"The key word being ALMOST." Bradey replied. "Now, let's go. I think I have an idea of how to steer this thing."
The pod whizzed away.
(September 6, 2014 - 4:27 pm)
Bradey--
Frankly, that was pure luck. And I don't really know how to steer this thing. I just kinda turn the wheel and it turns that way. And I am really sick of turns everyone few seconds. I don't even know where to go!
Anyway, the point is, I don't want to do this. I mean, it was just weird that I was "chosen" to destory the squid with Draco. And really, I don't want to be mind-controlled by the weird octopus thing. Why does this have to happen to ME?! Why did I have to get myself messed up with these people. I looked at Draco. He was rather green and when he saw me looking at him, Draco smiled weakly. I sighed and carried on with my piloting.
Turn right.
turn left.
Feel sick.
Repeat.
My hands start feeling cold again and I growl. This is the best day ever.
Not.
(September 6, 2014 - 5:54 pm)
Aveleen's father reeled into the room as the ship shook.
"WHO'S DRIVIN' THE ESCAPE PODS!?!?!" he yelled.
Aveleen and Frank looked at each other. "Draco!" they chorused.
Aveleen's dad scowled. "WHY are you kids so intent on wreckin' ma SHIP?!?
Suddenly something big collided with the ship.
(September 6, 2014 - 8:27 pm)
I almost stumbled to the floor, the ship rocking back and forth. I rushed to the main room, where Frank, Aveleen, and her dad were all arguing.
" What is going on?" I asked, wondering where Draco and Bradey went off to.
" They took one of the escape pods! And now something hit into the ship!" Frank explained.
" Well, sort of knowing Draco, he's probably gone off without thinking it through," I grumbled, looking out one of the windows.
" Do you think they'll be alright?" Aveleen asked, her eyes flashing with worry.
" This is Draco we're talking about. Once he realizes he's gotten himself into some deep poo, he's going to go crying around, hoping for us to come. Or he'll be all stubborn and try to work things through himself, all the while Bradey makes random and dumb comments. We are going to deal with the thing that hit into the ship, and if we really want to save Draco's and Bradey's sorry behinds, then we'll go when we really need to," I growled, seeing a large rock floating beside the ship, a big dent in the ship where it probably hit.
" But we're a team!" Frank cried out.
" Did the fire and ice prophecy include a speedy, a mind controller, and a lion? I don't think so," I hissed.
" Are you jealous that they need to save the world again?" Aveleen asked.
" No and yes. First off, no because this means I don't have to do anything when the world is being all destroyed, and some hero comes in and saves the world last minute. Two, I'm a little suspicious and a tiny bit jealous as to why the newbie, and a person who already has saved the world are supposed to go out and defeat an overgrown fish, squid, octopus, whatever!" I said, while looking at the controls on the large dashboard. Frank and Aveleen stayed quiet, as if thinking about something. Frank looked up.
" Let's go fix the ship and take a look at the rock, just in case something smells fishy about it."
(September 7, 2014 - 12:45 pm)
Aveleen sighed. It was just a rock. The monitor showed it. But.... was something moving on it?!
She attached a space mask that allowed her to breathe to her face and ran out as Frank and Layla called after her. She ran out and found a familiar bound figure attached to it.
"Dante!" she yelled.
The boy turned to her incredulously.
"Aveleen? You're alive!"
She brought him inside the ship.
"Frank, Layla, this is Dante. He was my best friend, but for a few years I thought......"
she paused and wiped away a tear.
"How did you get here?"
"Yetolyx."
Aveleen and Dante hugged while Frank and Layla nodded.
(September 7, 2014 - 2:33 pm)
I would like to point out some loose ends that need tying up if we want to RP to continue making sense.
1. Frank works at a detective agency, right? We should incorporate them into the story more, sense Frank WAS on his way to the agency when he was interrupted by Aveleen. I don't even think the agency knows where Frank is. Also, I just think Buster sounded like a cool character.
2. What about Bradey's gang? What are they doing?
3. TES and Eleanor currently both exist in the same time. Eleanor knows her clone TES exists, but TES doesn't know Eleanor exists. Perhaps the two of them could meet up and be really confused.
4. Where does General Hassen fit into this?
Also, I would just like to clarify that Yetolyx is a massive squid (there seemed to be some confusion about what he was) and that Yetolyx is the one making the high pitched noises, not TES.
(September 9, 2014 - 8:32 pm)
ATTENTION! IMPORTANT.
I am making a NEW superhero thread............... with a, hm, shall we say, twist. >:)
Please join that one! I will publish the link when I am ready. Pete seems to have left this rp. :():
(September 10, 2014 - 6:56 am)
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(September 9, 2014 - 8:38 pm)